Nov. 16, 2021
My Smart phone
These dasy, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.
I always take my phone and use anywhere and anytime.
For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone.
As this way, I can get insight and idea.
Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.
There are many videos on many topics in English.
Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again.
Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.
Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.
I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.
Like this, I use my phone for may purpose every time.
These dasys, Iit is very hard to live without my smart phone.
I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime.
you need to say what is being used
For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I use to write, find things and think something with the phone.
your sentence is confusing, I have tried to make it clearer. Sorry my feedback on this one is not so good
As this way, I can get insight and ideas.
Idea is singular, you either have an idea or ideas. I think in this case you mean the plural
Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.
There are many videos on many topics in English.
Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again.
unlike means different from, unlikely means probably wont happen
Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.
I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.
Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time.
there is a spelling error may/many. If you mean many then purpose should be the plural purposes
Feedback
A lot of your errors are spelling or incorrect plural. These can be tricky, plural should match through the sentence. Keep up the good work
Nov. 17, 2021
Thank you so much. I will do my best!
My Smart phone
These dasys, Iit is very hard to live without my smart phone.
I always have my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. / I always take my phone with me and use it anywhere and anytime.
For example, my smartphone is like my second brain that I. I use it to write, findsearch, and think something with the phone.
As tThis way, I can get insights and ideas.
Plus, I usually study English through YouTube.
There are many videos on many topics in English.
Unlikely on TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watchily rewatch them again.
Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.
Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.
I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS.
Like this, I use my phone for many purpose every times.
Feedback
Nice work!
Nov. 17, 2021
Those are very helpful. Thanks!
My Smart phone
These dasys, It is very hard to live without my smart phone.
I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime.
For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone.
As this way, I can get insight and ideas.
There are many videos on many (various) topics in English.
Unlikely TV, I can see any contents wthat I want and it's easy to watch again.
Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English.
Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone.
I can read news, and post pictures on (Social Media) my SNS .
SNS is right but if it's an acronym we don't use that much.
Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time.
Feedback
Just a few minor corrections, and words to sound more natural. Good work.
Nov. 17, 2021
Thank you so much!
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My Smartphone |
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These day, It is very hard to live without my smart phone. |
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I always take my phone and use anywhere and anytime. I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. I always have my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. / I always take my phone with me and use it anywhere and anytime. I always take my phone and use it anywhere and anytime. you need to say what is being used |
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For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think somethings with the phone. |
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As this way, I can get insight and idea. As this way, I can get insight and ideas.
As this way, I can get insight and ideas. Idea is singular, you either have an idea or ideas. I think in this case you mean the plural |
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Plus, I usually study English through Youtube. |
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There are many videos of many topics in English. |
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Unlikely TV, I can see any contents what I want and easy to watch again. Unlike Unlike Unlike unlike means different from, unlikely means probably wont happen |
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Moreover, Youtube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. |
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Next, I always connect to the internet using the phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I can read news, and post pictures on my SNS. I can read news, and post pictures on (Social Media) my SNS . SNS is right but if it's an acronym we don't use that much. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like this, I use my phone for may purpose every time. Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time.
Like this, I use my phone for many purposes every time. there is a spelling error may/many. If you mean many then purpose should be the plural purposes |
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For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I write, find and think something with the phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! For example, my smartphone is like my second brain For example, my smartphone is my second brain that I use to write, find things and think your sentence is confusing, I have tried to make it clearer. Sorry my feedback on this one is not so good |
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Plus, I usually study English through YouTube. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are many videos on many topics in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! There are many videos on many (various) topics in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, YouTubehas a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. Moreover, YouTube has a function to change speed, so it is very helpful to practice shadowing in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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