I think I need moreto practice on English more because my learning speed is slow.

Beacause my learning speed was slow.

Combine w/ previous sentence

I need more listening, more reading more, and learning.

No need to repeat "more"

Second, I must listen onyly to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat.

Third, I must do exercises on my book or do tests from the internet.

Fourth, I mustn't leave writestop writing in my journal.

I think I must write no less than 5 or 6 sentence each time and write twice a day everyday.

And better write twice at day every day.

To futher practice my English, I will tell you a short story about my English teacher.

He fears a spiders.

When he was young, he met spiders infor the first time and thiswhen he was young, a spider jumped on him.

My teacher was scared.

I think it was a childhood trauma.

We were told on today's lesson about hims plan to go on vaceation today.

But after when I showed him the Australian huntsman spider, he got scared.

After theat he told me: " I will never visit Australia".

Maybe I saved hims life.

I think I need moreto practice on English more.

Beacause my learning speed whas been slow.

it's okay to start a sentence with becuase, but the sentence needs to be a complete thought. what you have here is a sentence fragment. to make it complete, I would rewrite the previous two sentences as: "I think I need to practice English more because my learning speed has been slow."

I need moreto listening, more, reading more, and learning. more.

First, I must watch only English YouTube channels.

Second, I must listen onyly to English podcasts or English songs which I can understand and maybe repeat.

Third, I must do exercises oin my book or dotake test from inters onlinet.

Fourth, I mustn't leave writehave to keep writing in my journal.

I think I mustneed to write no less than 5 or 6 sentences each time.

And it'd be better to write twice at day every day.

To futher practice my English, I'll tell you a short story about my English teacher.

He fears a spiders.

you can also say "He's afraid of spiders"

When he was young, he metsaw a spiders in for the first time and ithis spider jumped on him.

My teacher got scared.

I think it was childhood trauma.

We told on lessonalked about hims vaceation during our lesson today.

But after when I showed him an Australian huntsman spider he got scared.

After theat he told me:, " I never visit Australia".

Maybe I saved hims life.