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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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My situation on finding a partner

As the complicated of my language, I have use the easiest way to write for the translator. But I think it will be fun to try to understand what each of us want to tell. That why "Writing prompt" in particular and "Find a partner" in general are a useful way to learn language, right?

Unfortunately, my native language seems to unpopular in language learning community compare to Korean, Japanese, so there is little hope to find a partner (with free charge). I know I can go to iTalki or other paying platforms, but I can't afford to pay for it for at least trying. (i.e: You can use 1-hour fee to pay for 3 day eating. So if you do, you must consider thoughtfully, for example, about your purpose, about what you want to improve after 3-month learning with them as no one guarantee that you will improve). People can argue that there are many ways to earn money (Teach other on the platform) or there are many free community (HiNative, Lang8,..) but the first way cons is you may not pay by cash but by the most valuable thing one posses - time; The second is the quality, as you can understand what I talk about.

There are many language center too, but you may not want to hear the price, but I understand that they must make some living as the living cost in Ho Chi Minh City has rise sharply in a few years.

On the other hand, currently, I am a technological college student. That means I must spend most time on study, not in language, if I want a foot in a well company.

Corrections

As the complicated of my language, I have use the easiest way to write for the translator.

Sorry, I don't understand this sentence. Your own language (Vietnamese) is complicated, so you have found an easy way to translate from Vietnamese to English?

But I think it will be fun to try to understand what each of us wants to tellsay.

That why "Writing prompt" in particular and "Find a partner" in general are a useful ways to learn a language, right?

Unfortunately, my native language seems to be unpopular in language learning communityies in compareison to Korean, or Japanese, so there is little hope tof finding a partner (withat is free of charge).

I know I can go to iTalki or another paying platforms, but I can't afford to pay for it for at least trying.

(i.e: You can useThe fee for 1- hour fee to pay for 3 day eating. So if you docosts as much as food for three days. So if you do want to try the platform, you must consider thoughtfully, for example, about your purpose, about what you want to improve after 3- months of learning with them as no oneit is not guaranteed that you will improve).

People can argue that there are many ways to earn money (Teach another person on the platform) or there are many free communityies (HiNative, Lang8,..) but the first way cons isconsideration is that you may not pay by cash but by the most valuable thing one posses -ses: time;. The second is the quality, as you can understand what I talk about.

I do not understand when your last sentence here.

There are many language centers too, but you maydo not want to hear the price, but! However, I understand that they must make some livingprofit as the living cost in Ho Chi Minh City has risen sharply in athe past few years.

I made another sentence because you do not want to have two clauses with "but" in the same sentence.

On the other hand, I am currently, I am a technological college student.

That means I must spend most of my time on study, not inon improving my language skills, if I want a foot in a wellgood company.

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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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As the complicated of my language, I have use the easiest way to write for the translator.

Kind of that. Suppose that I use the way I express in natural, then the translator will blow out.

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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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Unfortunately, my native language seems to be unpopular in language learning communityies in compareison to Korean, or Japanese, so there is little hope tof finding a partner (withat is free of charge).

Why "compare to" isn't suitable?

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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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People can argue that there are many ways to earn money (Teach another person on the platform) or there are many free communityies (HiNative, Lang8,..) but the first way cons isconsideration is that you may not pay by cash but by the most valuable thing one posses -ses: time;. The second is the quality, as you can understand what I talk about.

Haha, I couldn't too. Laggy laggy ~.~

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love3cyou

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There are many language centers too, but you maydo not want to hear the price, but! However, I understand that they must make some livingprofit as the living cost in Ho Chi Minh City has risen sharply in athe past few years.

Exactly, I had thought and become "hot-headed"

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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting me (If you can, could you tell me ways to express gratitude, thanks,... )

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love3cyou

Sept. 15, 2020

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P/S: If I don't learn anything on your corrections, what will I shall do? Should I keep writing and writing?

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fabledlamb

Sept. 15, 2020

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Thank you so much for correcting me (If you can, could you tell me ways to express gratitude, thanks,... )

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My situation on finding a partner


As the complicated of my language, I have use the easiest way to write for the translator.


As the complicated of my language, I have use the easiest way to write for the translator.

Sorry, I don't understand this sentence. Your own language (Vietnamese) is complicated, so you have found an easy way to translate from Vietnamese to English?

But I think it will be fun to try to understand what each of us want to tell.


But I think it will be fun to try to understand what each of us wants to tellsay.

That why "Writing prompt" in particular and "Find a partner" in general are a useful way to learn language, right?


That why "Writing prompt" in particular and "Find a partner" in general are a useful ways to learn a language, right?

Unfortunately, my native language seems to unpopular in language learning community compare to Korean, Japanese, so there is little hope to find a partner (with free charge).


Unfortunately, my native language seems to be unpopular in language learning communityies in compareison to Korean, or Japanese, so there is little hope tof finding a partner (withat is free of charge).

I know I can go to iTalki or other paying platforms, but I can't afford to pay for it for at least trying.


I know I can go to iTalki or another paying platforms, but I can't afford to pay for it for at least trying.

(i.e: You can use 1-hour fee to pay for 3 day eating. So if you do, you must consider thoughtfully, for example, about your purpose, about what you want to improve after 3-month learning with them as no one guarantee that you will improve).


(i.e: You can useThe fee for 1- hour fee to pay for 3 day eating. So if you docosts as much as food for three days. So if you do want to try the platform, you must consider thoughtfully, for example, about your purpose, about what you want to improve after 3- months of learning with them as no oneit is not guaranteed that you will improve).

People can argue that there are many ways to earn money (Teach other on the platform) or there are many free community (HiNative, Lang8,..) but the first way cons is you may not pay by cash but by the most valuable thing one posses - time; The second is the quality, as you can understand what I talk about.


People can argue that there are many ways to earn money (Teach another person on the platform) or there are many free communityies (HiNative, Lang8,..) but the first way cons isconsideration is that you may not pay by cash but by the most valuable thing one posses -ses: time;. The second is the quality, as you can understand what I talk about.

I do not understand when your last sentence here.

There are many language center too, but you may not want to hear the price, but I understand that they must make some living as the living cost in Ho Chi Minh City has rise sharply in a few years.


There are many language centers too, but you maydo not want to hear the price, but! However, I understand that they must make some livingprofit as the living cost in Ho Chi Minh City has risen sharply in athe past few years.

I made another sentence because you do not want to have two clauses with "but" in the same sentence.

On the other hand, currently, I am a technological college student.


On the other hand, I am currently, I am a technological college student.

That means I must spend most time on study, not in language, if I want a foot in a well company.


That means I must spend most of my time on study, not inon improving my language skills, if I want a foot in a wellgood company.

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