Oct. 6, 2025
My sister
I have a great sister, she has 26 years old. Now we are very close because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it's like my second mom. When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous. For example when we had gift in general we were jealous about the present of the other. But she always was nice with me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends.
Growing up we share a lot of thing and we laugh a lot together, we have also a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!
I think now it's my favorite person in the earth and I could do anything for her
I have a greatn older sister, she hais 26 years old.
I think you mean your sister is older than you.
You say someone is an age, not that they have so many years.
Now wWe are very close now because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it'she is like my second mom.
When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous.
For example when we had gift in generalever we received a gift, we were jealous about the present of the otherother's present.
Use "whenever" to show the statement is in general.
But she always was nice withto me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends.
Growing up we shared a lot of things and we laughed a lot together, we have also had a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny!
You might want to review how to speak about the past
I think now itshe's my favorite person ion the earth and I could do anything for her
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In English you need to use him/her/them and she/he/they for a person. "It" refers to an object. You should also work on your past verbs. Overall I could understand what you were saying so great job!
Oct. 7, 2025
Thank you for your feeback :) I wanted to speak in present in the sentence that you corrected in the past, is it incorrect to speak at the present in this case?
Oct. 7, 2025
Oh that makes more sense! Usually if you say "growing up" that sounds like you are speaking about the past. Instead of saying"growing up" you could say "now that we have grown up" or "as we grow up".
yesterday
okay thank you!!
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For example when we had gift in general we were jealous about the present of the other. For example when Use "whenever" to show the statement is in general. |
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But she always was nice with me, for example at school when I was alone I used to hang out with her and their friends. But she always was nice |
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Growing up we share a lot of thing and we laugh a lot together, we have also a special language that my parents do not understand which is very funny! Growing up we shared a lot of things and we laughed a lot together, we You might want to review how to speak about the past |
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I think now it's my favorite person in the earth and I could do anything for her I think now |
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I have a great sister, she has 26 years old. I have a I think you mean your sister is older than you. You say someone is an age, not that they have so many years. |
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My sister |
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Now we are very close because we talk everyday and when I have a problem I talk to her first, it's like my second mom.
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When we were kids we did not have a great relationship because we used to fight and get jealous. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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