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mayne

July 15, 2025

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My Simple Day.

Hi. Today is second day of my post series. Today was a simple day and I will tell about my typical day. I wake up at 8am, then I run at street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises at the field near house, where I live. After I drink coffee and after start going for my work. I work at office three days on the week, and 2 days I work from home (Monday and Friday), Saturday and Sunday are weekends. I spend a one hour and a half to reach my work office. I go for a work by subway, but sometimes by car. Today I went by subway. Now it's warm in our area and way is enough comfortable. Now I looking for new job, because I would like to work full remote. Yesterday I got a career advice and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and I will continue tomorrow.

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My Simple Day.

No need for the period

Hi.

Today is second day of my post series.

Today was a simple day and I will tell about my typical day.

I wake up at 8 am, then I run aton the street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises atin the field near my house, where I live.

"Where I live" is redundant, when you say "my house" we know you live there

After that, I drink some coffee and after start goetting ready for my work.

I work at the office three days on thea week, and 2two days a week I work from home (Monday and Friday),. Saturday and Sunday are the weekends.

"3 days / 2 days" or "three days / two days" are ok, but mixing them with "three days / 2 days" is slightly awkward

I spend a onet takes an hour and a half to reach my work /office.

Choosing just one word (work or office) is cleaner here

I go for ato work by subway, but sometimes by car.

Today I went by subway.

Now it's warm in our area and way is enough(the weather?) is comfortable enough.

I didn't understand what you mean by "way" here. Did you mean weather? Or did you mean "way" as your commute? If so, "...and the commute is comfortable enough"

Now I am looking for a new job, because I would like to work fully remote.

Yesterday I got a career advice, and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and. I will continue tomorrow.

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mayne

July 16, 2025

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My Simple Day.


My Simple Day.

No need for the period

Hi.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today is second day of my post series.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today was a simple day and I will tell about my typical day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wake up at 8am, then I run at street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises at the field near house, where I live.


I wake up at 8 am, then I run aton the street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises atin the field near my house, where I live.

"Where I live" is redundant, when you say "my house" we know you live there

After I drink coffee and after start going for my work.


After that, I drink some coffee and after start goetting ready for my work.

I work at office three days on the week, and 2 days I work from home (Monday and Friday), Saturday and Sunday are weekends.


I work at the office three days on thea week, and 2two days a week I work from home (Monday and Friday),. Saturday and Sunday are the weekends.

"3 days / 2 days" or "three days / two days" are ok, but mixing them with "three days / 2 days" is slightly awkward

I spend a one hour and a half to reach my work office.


I spend a onet takes an hour and a half to reach my work /office.

Choosing just one word (work or office) is cleaner here

I go for a work by subway, but sometimes by car.


I go for ato work by subway, but sometimes by car.

Today I went by subway.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now it's warm in our area and way is enough comfortable.


Now it's warm in our area and way is enough(the weather?) is comfortable enough.

I didn't understand what you mean by "way" here. Did you mean weather? Or did you mean "way" as your commute? If so, "...and the commute is comfortable enough"

Now I looking for new job, because I would like to work full remote.


Now I am looking for a new job, because I would like to work fully remote.

Yesterday I got a career advice and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and I will continue tomorrow.


Yesterday I got a career advice, and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and. I will continue tomorrow.

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