July 15, 2025
Hi. Today is second day of my post series. Today was a simple day and I will tell about my typical day. I wake up at 8am, then I run at street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises at the field near house, where I live. After I drink coffee and after start going for my work. I work at office three days on the week, and 2 days I work from home (Monday and Friday), Saturday and Sunday are weekends. I spend a one hour and a half to reach my work office. I go for a work by subway, but sometimes by car. Today I went by subway. Now it's warm in our area and way is enough comfortable. Now I looking for new job, because I would like to work full remote. Yesterday I got a career advice and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and I will continue tomorrow.
My Simple Day.
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Hi.
Today is second day of my post series.
Today was a simple day and I will tell about my typical day.
I wake up at 8 am, then I run aton the street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises atin the field near my house, where I live.
"Where I live" is redundant, when you say "my house" we know you live there
After that, I drink some coffee and after start goetting ready for my work.
I work at the office three days on thea week, and 2two days a week I work from home (Monday and Friday),. Saturday and Sunday are the weekends.
"3 days / 2 days" or "three days / two days" are ok, but mixing them with "three days / 2 days" is slightly awkward
I spend a onet takes an hour and a half to reach my work /office.
Choosing just one word (work or office) is cleaner here
I go for ato work by subway, but sometimes by car.
Today I went by subway.
Now it's warm in our area and way is enough(the weather?) is comfortable enough.
I didn't understand what you mean by "way" here. Did you mean weather? Or did you mean "way" as your commute? If so, "...and the commute is comfortable enough"
Now I am looking for a new job, because I would like to work fully remote.
Yesterday I got a career advice, and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and. I will continue tomorrow.
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I wake up at 8am, then I run at street for one kilometer around my neighborhood , then I do exercises at the field near house, where I live. I wake up at 8 am, then I run "Where I live" is redundant, when you say "my house" we know you live there |
After I drink coffee and after start going for my work. After that, I drink some coffee and |
I work at office three days on the week, and 2 days I work from home (Monday and Friday), Saturday and Sunday are weekends. I work at the office three days "3 days / 2 days" or "three days / two days" are ok, but mixing them with "three days / 2 days" is slightly awkward |
I spend a one hour and a half to reach my work office. I Choosing just one word (work or office) is cleaner here |
I go for a work by subway, but sometimes by car. I go |
Today I went by subway. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Now it's warm in our area and way is enough comfortable. Now it's warm in our area and I didn't understand what you mean by "way" here. Did you mean weather? Or did you mean "way" as your commute? If so, "...and the commute is comfortable enough" |
Now I looking for new job, because I would like to work full remote. Now I am looking for a new job |
Yesterday I got a career advice and today I improved my resume according to the recommendations, but I didn't finish this, and I will continue tomorrow. Yesterday I got |
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