Sept. 13, 2023
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Probably one of the oldest, undoubtedly raised by almost every single civilization throughout the époques of history. Maybe echoing in the dying stars right now somewhere in the universe far distant; far colder and much darker than here. Exchanged, used, moved, switched from hand to hand. Ingrained in the deep fissures of many brains; formless yet malignant, fearless yet scared. Woven into the fabric of life; so complex, so diverse and so beautiful. And still to this day, not seen nor felt by anyone. I wake up to the emptiness of life. I wake up to the distinct smell of death and misery. Happiness is my signature.
PIt is probably one of the oldest, uandoubtedly raised by almost every single civilization throughout the époques of history.
MaybeIt is echoing in the dying stars right now somewhere in the universe far distant; far colder and much darker than here.
Ingrained in the deepest fissures of many brains; formless yet malignant, fearless yet scared.
My signature
PIt is probably one of the oldest,; and undoubtedly raised by almost every single civilization throughout the époques of history.
The flow of this first sentence is a bit jarring. I had to read the context of the following sentences and also re-read the title to understand it better.
Maybe echoing in the dying stars right now somewhere in the universe far distant; far colder and much darker than here.
Exchanged, used, moved, switched from hand to hand.
Ingrained in the deep fissures of many brains; formless yet malignant, fearless yet scared.
Woven into the fabric of life; so complex, so diverse and so beautiful.
And still to this day, not seen nor felt by anyone.
I wake up to the emptiness of life.
I wake up to the distinct smell of death and misery.
Happiness is my signature.
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This English is better than many of my fellow Australian friends write. Well done!
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Probably one of the oldest, undoubtedly raised by almost every single civilization throughout the époques of history.
The flow of this first sentence is a bit jarring. I had to read the context of the following sentences and also re-read the title to understand it better.
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Maybe echoing in the dying stars right now somewhere in the universe far distant; far colder and much darker than here. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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Exchanged, used, moved, switched from hand to hand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ingrained in the deep fissures of many brains; formless yet malignant, fearless yet scared. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Ingrained in the deepest fissures of many brains; formless yet malignant, fearless yet scared. |
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Woven into the fabric of life; so complex, so diverse and so beautiful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And still to this day, not seen nor felt by anyone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wake up to the emptiness of life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I wake up to the distinct smell of death and misery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Happiness is my signature. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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