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akihello

Jan. 20, 2021

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My short introduce.

Hi, you all. My name is あきひろ. I'm Japanese and improving my English. I want to play board games in English eventually. ( TBH, Grammarly helps me a lot in writing English sentences. )
--- I like to discuss grammar, etymology, techniques for learning languages.


みなさん、どうも。 私の名前は章裕(あきひろ)です。 日本人で英語を磨いている途中です。 将来的には、英語でボードゲームができるようになりたいです。 ( 正直、英語の文章を書く際、Grammarly に助けられっぱなしです。 )
--- 文法や語源、言語を勉強する時のコツなどについて話し合うのが好きです。

Corrections

My short introducetion.

Hi, you 'all.

I don't think "you all" is wrong, but it's usually used in the form "y'all", a slang phrase typical in "the south" (of the USA). More common would be e.g. "Hi everyone!"

My name is あきひろ.

If you're writing in English, you may want to consider writing your name using Latin letters. This would ordinarily be unreadable (I can't read it).

I'm Japanese and working on improving my English.

I think what you wrote originally is correct, but it sounds off. I'm not sure why.

I want to play board games in English eventually.

( TBHTo be honest, Grammarly helps me a lot in writing English sentences. )

I discourage using Internet acronyms like TBH: they're informal, and not everyone knows what they mean.

--- I like to discussing grammar, etymology, and techniques for learning languages.

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akihello

Jan. 22, 2021

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Thanks for the correction. 😌

My short introducetion.

Hi, you all.,

My name is あきひろ.

I'm Japanese and trying to improvinge my English.

I'm Japanese and trying to improve my English because I want to play board games in English eventually.

You can combine this and the previous sentence as a full sentence.

( TBH, Grammarly has helpsed me a lot in writing English sentences. )

--- I like to discuss grammar, etymology, techniques for learning languages.

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akihello

Jan. 22, 2021

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Thank you for your correction and comment. 🙏

My short introduce.


My short introducetion.

My short introducetion.

Hi, you all.


Hi, you all.,

Hi, you 'all.

I don't think "you all" is wrong, but it's usually used in the form "y'all", a slang phrase typical in "the south" (of the USA). More common would be e.g. "Hi everyone!"

My name is あきひろ.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My name is あきひろ.

If you're writing in English, you may want to consider writing your name using Latin letters. This would ordinarily be unreadable (I can't read it).

I'm Japanese and improving my English.


I'm Japanese and trying to improvinge my English.

I'm Japanese and working on improving my English.

I think what you wrote originally is correct, but it sounds off. I'm not sure why.

I want to play board games in English eventually.


I'm Japanese and trying to improve my English because I want to play board games in English eventually.

You can combine this and the previous sentence as a full sentence.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

( TBH, Grammarly helps me a lot in writing English sentences. )


( TBH, Grammarly has helpsed me a lot in writing English sentences. )

( TBHTo be honest, Grammarly helps me a lot in writing English sentences. )

I discourage using Internet acronyms like TBH: they're informal, and not everyone knows what they mean.

--- I like to discuss grammar, etymology, techniques for learning languages.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

--- I like to discussing grammar, etymology, and techniques for learning languages.

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