Oct. 23, 2024
My second text in English
I live in Russia. In big city named Saint Petersburg. It's a beautiful place and I really like it. It has many rivers in the downtown and many bridges. The weather here is not as good as I wish, too rainy. It's something like London I suppose. But I never was in London. We have the highest skyscraper in Europe. It's named Lakhta Center. We also have many historical buildings. Soviets' buildings. Come in Saint Petersburg. We'll like it.
I live in Russia.
In a big city namcalled Saint Petersburg.
It’s more natural to use ‘called’ for places and buildings when talking about names. You would use ‘named’ for people and pets.
It has many rivers in the downtown and many bridges.
The weather here is not as good as I wishould like, too rainy.
But I’ve never was inbeen to London.
Use present perfect tense:
I + have + (never) + been + to + (city/country)
We have the hightallest skyscraper in Europe.
It's namcalled Lakhta Center.
Soviets' buildings.
Come into Saint Petersburg.
You could also say: Come visit Saint Petersburg.
We'll like it.
We use the present tense when we say sentences like ‘We like it when people visit Saint Petersburg’.
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I’ve never been to Russia but I would like to go one day. Saint Petersburg sounds like a beautiful city.
Oct. 23, 2024
Thank you! I meant "You'll like it".
I live in Russia.
In, in a big city named Saint Petersburg.
one sentence
It's a beautiful place and I really like it.
It has many rivers in the downtown area and many bridges too.
The weather here is not as good as I wish, it's too rainy.
It's something like London, I suppose.
But I've never waslived in London.
We have the hightallest skyscraper in Europe.
"high" is not used for the height of objects
It's named Lakhta Center.
We also have many historical buildings.
Some examples would be the Soviets' buildings.
Come into Saint Petersburg.
WeYou'll like it.
Oct. 23, 2024
Спасибо за исправления!
My second text in English
I live in Russia.
In, in a big city named Saint Petersburg.
This is a sentence fragment, so it's needs to be joined with the previous sentence with a comma
It's a beautiful place and I really like it.
It has many rivers in the downtown and many bridges.
The weather here is not as good as I wish,. It's too rainy.
The way you have it is fine for spoken English, but for written English you have to add "too rainy" properly somehow.
It's somethingwhat like London I suppose.
Your way is okay but a bit strange.
B, but I have never was inbeen to London.
Shouldn't start a sentence with a conjunction.
We have the highest skyscraper in Europe.
It's named Lakhta Center.
We also have many historical buildings.
Soviets' buildings.
Fine for spoken, but for written this should be part of a sentence
Come into Saint Petersburg.
We'll like it.
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Very clear
Oct. 23, 2024
Спасибо!
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I live in Russia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I live in Russia I live in Russia. |
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In big city named Saint Petersburg.
This is a sentence fragment, so it's needs to be joined with the previous sentence with a comma
one sentence In a big city It’s more natural to use ‘called’ for places and buildings when talking about names. You would use ‘named’ for people and pets. |
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It's a beautiful place and I really like it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has many rivers in the downtown and many bridges. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It has many rivers in the downtown area and many bridges too. It has many rivers |
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Too rainy. |
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The weather here is not as good as I wish, too rainy. The weather here is not as good as I wish The way you have it is fine for spoken English, but for written English you have to add "too rainy" properly somehow. The weather here is not as good as I wish, it's too rainy. The weather here is not as good as I w |
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It's something like London I suppose. It's some Your way is okay but a bit strange. It's something like London, I suppose. |
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But I never was in London.
Shouldn't start a sentence with a conjunction. But I've never But I’ve never Use present perfect tense: I + have + (never) + been + to + (city/country) |
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We have the highest skyscraper in Europe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We have the "high" is not used for the height of objects We have the |
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It's named Lakhta Center. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's |
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We also have many historical buildings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Soviets' buildings. Soviets Fine for spoken, but for written this should be part of a sentence Some examples would be the Soviets' buildings. Soviet |
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Come in Saint Petersburg. Come Come Come You could also say: Come visit Saint Petersburg. |
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We'll like it. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
We We use the present tense when we say sentences like ‘We like it when people visit Saint Petersburg’. |
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