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My second sick holiday

Last year I had an accident.

I fell down on a bicycle, my right leg almost broke.

I stay at home almost 2 weeks.

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tones TV.

This year I got COVID-19.

The government allow us choice to stay at home or live in the isolation camp.

I got a big house, so I choice to isolate myself at home.

This full 10 days I also watch tones of TV.

Tomorrow will start work again.

Wish you luck and have good health.

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My second sick holidayleave

Last year I had an accident.

I stayed at home almost 2 weeks.

Since I can’ouldn't walk normally, I just stayed at home and watched tones TV.

The government allow usgives us the choice to stay at home or live in the isolationisolate in a camp.

I gothave a big house, so I choicse to isolate myself at home.

ThisIt's was a full 10 days I also, so I watched tones of TV.

Tomorrow wiI'll start work again.

Wish you luck and have good health.

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Last year I had an accident.

I fell down on afrom my bicycle, my right leg almost broke.

I stayed at home for almost 2 weeks.

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tonnes of TV.

This year I got COVID-19.

The government allow usgave us the choice to either stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

I gothave a big house, so I choicose to isolate myself at home.

ThisFor 10 full 10 days I also watched tonnes of TV.

Tomorrow I will start working again.

WI wish you luck and have good health.

My second sick holiday

Last year I had an accident.

I fell down on aoff my bicycle, my right legI almost broke my right leg.

I stay ated home for almost 2two weeks.

When writing numbers, anything ten and below should be spelled out.

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tones of TV.

This year I got COVID-19.

The government allow usgave us the choice to stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

I gothave a big house, so I choicse to isolate myself at home.

ThisFor the full 10ten days, I also watched tones of TV.

Tomorrow I will start work again.

WI wish you luck and have good health.

My second sick holiday

Last year I had an accident.

I fell down onoff a bicycle, and my right leg almost broke.

Unless you actually mean you fell on top of a bicycle, in which case the previous sentence was fine :)
If the bike is yours, you can say "I fell off my bike and..."

I had to stay at home for almost 2 weeks.

Since I caouldn’t walk normally, I just stayed at home and watched tonnes of TV.

The story is being told about something that happened a year ago so it should still be in the past tense (unless this is happening today and today you can't walk normally so you just stay at home and watch tonnes of TV

This year I got COVID-19.

The government allow usgave us the choice to either stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

I gothave a big house, so I choicedecided to isolate myself at home.

ThisFor 10 full 10 days I also watched tonnes of TV.

tone = a musical sound
tonne = a large amount or 1000kg

Tomorrow will start work again.

WI wish you luck and have good health.

My second sick holiday


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My second sick holidayleave

Last year I had an accident.


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I fell down on a bicycle, my right leg almost broke.


I fell down onoff a bicycle, and my right leg almost broke.

Unless you actually mean you fell on top of a bicycle, in which case the previous sentence was fine :) If the bike is yours, you can say "I fell off my bike and..."

I fell down on aoff my bicycle, my right legI almost broke my right leg.

I fell down on afrom my bicycle, my right leg almost broke.

I stay at home almost 2 weeks.


I had to stay at home for almost 2 weeks.

I stay ated home for almost 2two weeks.

When writing numbers, anything ten and below should be spelled out.

I stayed at home for almost 2 weeks.

I stayed at home almost 2 weeks.

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tones TV.


Since I caouldn’t walk normally, I just stayed at home and watched tonnes of TV.

The story is being told about something that happened a year ago so it should still be in the past tense (unless this is happening today and today you can't walk normally so you just stay at home and watch tonnes of TV

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tones of TV.

Since I can’t walk normally, I just stay at home and watch tonnes of TV.

Since I can’ouldn't walk normally, I just stayed at home and watched tones TV.

This year I got COVID-19.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The government allow us choice to stay at home or live in the isolation camp.


The government allow usgave us the choice to either stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

The government allow usgave us the choice to stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

The government allow usgave us the choice to either stay at home or live in thean isolation camp.

The government allow usgives us the choice to stay at home or live in the isolationisolate in a camp.

I got a big house, so I choice to isolate myself at home.


I gothave a big house, so I choicedecided to isolate myself at home.

I gothave a big house, so I choicse to isolate myself at home.

I gothave a big house, so I choicose to isolate myself at home.

I gothave a big house, so I choicse to isolate myself at home.

This full 10 days I also watch tones of TV.


ThisFor 10 full 10 days I also watched tonnes of TV.

tone = a musical sound tonne = a large amount or 1000kg

ThisFor the full 10ten days, I also watched tones of TV.

ThisFor 10 full 10 days I also watched tonnes of TV.

ThisIt's was a full 10 days I also, so I watched tones of TV.

Tomorrow will start work again.


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Tomorrow I will start work again.

Tomorrow I will start working again.

Tomorrow wiI'll start work again.

Wish you luck and have good health.


WI wish you luck and have good health.

WI wish you luck and have good health.

WI wish you luck and have good health.

Wish you luck and have good health.

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