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Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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My Second part of Live Journal "How I learning the English"

First of all I want to say thank for your correction in my first part live journal (It's correct to say - part journal? I understand note isn't journal. Note is reminder. So funny.)

I'm Bair and learning the English language. At the moment I learned modal verb - can, constraction - there is/there are, questions words (who, what, how, where, when, how mach, how long), imperatives (this theme is little bit don't understand), sentenses like and dislike (I love "verb+ing", or I love "noun"), past simple (I strated learning this tense) and I began learning irregular verbs.

I learn the English language three or four hours every day. I began read (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?) the book "Antoine Saint-Exupery: The Little Prince." I read (in this place "read" is irregular form. It's correct?) this book on Russian language and watched movie (or cartoon or animation film). I like watching this film. I understand most part book when I read (irregular form) this book. It's so motivates to learn the English language.

Thank you to read (irregular form) my Second part Live Journal.
See you tomorow.

Во первых я хочу сказать спасибо за ваши исправления в моей первой части журнала (правильно ли сказать - часть журнала? Я понял что примечание не журнал. Примечание это заметка. Так забавно.

Я Баир и я учу Английский язык. На данный момент я выучил модальный глагол - can, конструкцию - there is/there are, вопросительные слова (who, what, how, where, when, how mach, how long), императивы (эту тему немного не понял), предложения нравится и не нравится (I love "verb+ing", or I love "noun"), прошедшее простое время (я начал учить это время) и я начал учить неправильные глаголы.

Я учу Английский язык три или четыре часа каждый день. Я начал читать (правильно ли писать began - irregular form, read - base form?) книгу Антуан де Сент-Экзюпери Маленький принц. Я читал (в этом месте read - неправильная форма. Правильно?) эту книгу на Русском языке и смотрел фильм (или мультфильм или анимационный фильм). Мне нравится смотреть этот фильм. Я понимаю большую часть книги когда читаю эту книгу. Это мотивирует учить Английский язык.

Спасибо что прочитали мою Вторую часть Журнала.
Увидимся завтра.

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My Second part of Live Journal "How I am learning the English"

Or "How I am learning the English language''

First of all I want to say thank for your corrections in my first part live journal (It's correct to say - part journal?.

First part would imply that this is a second part, as opposed to the second journal. A part means a piece, a part of a pie is only some of the pie not all of it.

I understand a note isn't a journal.

NA note is reminder.

So funny.)

I'm Bair and I'm learning the English language.

At the moment I learned modal verb - s such as 'can', constraction - s such as 'there is/there are', questions words (who, what, how, where, when, how mauch, how long), imperatives (this theme is little bitI don't understand so well yet), sentensces, like and dislike (I love "verb+ing", or I love "noun"), past simple (I strarted learning this tense) and I began learning irregular verbs.

Well done on your learning!

I learn the English language for three or four hours every day.

I began reading (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?)

Began is good, 'reading' is the past version needed to match began.

I began reading. (Past)
I am reading. (Present)
I will read. (Future)
Have you read? (in the past) Here you say read like ''RED''
Are you reading? (In the present)
Will you read? (in the future) Here you say read like ''REED''

the book "Antoine Saint-Exupery: The Little Prince."

I read (in this place "read" is irregular form.

It's correct?)

this book onin the Russian language and watched the movie (or cartoon or animation film).

I like watching this film.

I understand most parts of the book when I read (irregular form) this book.

You could also write: ''I understand most of this book when I read it.''

It's so motivates me to learn the English language.

Thank you tofor reading (irregular form) mythe Second part of my Live Journal.

See you tomorow.

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Well done! Keep it up.

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Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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First of all I want to say thank for your corrections in my first part live journal (It's correct to say - part journal?.

Sorry I don't understand. Can you explain more please?

Bair's avatar
Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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NA note is reminder.

Can I say "A note is a reminder"?

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Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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Thank you tofor reading (irregular form) mythe Second part of my Live Journal.

I must use reading? Not read [red]?
It's past tense. Right?
Sorry, I'm very bad in tenses.

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jtozzle

Sept. 20, 2023

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Can I say "A note is a reminder"?

Yes! Sorry, you are correct. I forgot to put another ''a''

Well done correcting me! Australians speak English poorly ;)

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jtozzle

Sept. 20, 2023

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I must use reading? Not read [red]? It's past tense. Right? Sorry, I'm very bad in tenses.

In this case, it would be present tense, but yes it is ''reading'' not ''read''

As in:
''You are reading my journal.''
''Thank you for reading my journal.''

In the past, it is spelled the same way:

''Thank you for reading my journal last year''

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jtozzle

Sept. 20, 2023

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Sorry I don't understand. Can you explain more please?

I think what you have said is not necessarily incorrect, but it does not sound right in the context of this website.

You could say ''Thank you for your corrections on my FIRST journal, you are now reading my SECOND journal.'' for example.

This is more stylistic than grammar.

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jtozzle

Sept. 20, 2023

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I hope I don't add more confusion, feel free to ask more questions.

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anon007

Sept. 26, 2023

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Can I say "A note is a reminder"?

Yes

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anon007

Sept. 26, 2023

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I must use reading? Not read [red]? It's past tense. Right? Sorry, I'm very bad in tenses.

Yes it is past tense, you could say ¨thank you for having read¨I think, but reading is more natural.

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MyThe Second pPart of My Live Journal "How I am learning the English"

This is very close, just a few little grammar mistakes like the lack of "am" in the original sentence.

I began read (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?)ing

It's this correct?) or Is it correct?

It's correct is short for it is correct, not is this correct or it is correct

Feedback

Great job overall!! Just a few minor grammar issues, but your journal entry is completely comprehensible for a native speaker like me, so great job. I am looking forward to tomorrow's entry!

Bair's avatar
Bair

Sept. 20, 2023

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Thank you very much!

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anon007

Sept. 26, 2023

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Yes

anon007's avatar
anon007

Sept. 26, 2023

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Yes it is past tense, you could say ¨thank you for having read¨I think, but reading is more natural.

My Second part of Live Journal "How I learning the English"

MyThe Second pPart of My Live Journal "How I am learning the English"

This is very close, just a few little grammar mistakes like the lack of "am" in the original sentence.

My Second part of Live Journal "How I am learning the English"

Or "How I am learning the English language''

First of all I want to say thank for your correction in my first part live journal (It's correct to say - part journal?

First of all I want to say thank for your corrections in my first part live journal (It's correct to say - part journal?.

First part would imply that this is a second part, as opposed to the second journal. A part means a piece, a part of a pie is only some of the pie not all of it.

I understand note isn't journal.

I understand a note isn't a journal.

Note is reminder.

NA note is reminder.

So funny.)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm Bair and learning the English language.

I'm Bair and I'm learning the English language.

At the moment I learned modal verb - can, constraction - there is/there are, questions words (who, what, how, where, when, how mach, how long), imperatives (this theme is little bit don't understand), sentenses like and dislike (I love "verb+ing", or I love "noun"), past simple (I strated learning this tense) and I began learning irregular verbs.

At the moment I learned modal verb - s such as 'can', constraction - s such as 'there is/there are', questions words (who, what, how, where, when, how mauch, how long), imperatives (this theme is little bitI don't understand so well yet), sentensces, like and dislike (I love "verb+ing", or I love "noun"), past simple (I strarted learning this tense) and I began learning irregular verbs.

Well done on your learning!

I learn the English language three or four hours every day.

I learn the English language for three or four hours every day.

I began read (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?)

I began read (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?)ing

I began reading (it's correct write began - irregular form, read - base form?)

Began is good, 'reading' is the past version needed to match began. I began reading. (Past) I am reading. (Present) I will read. (Future) Have you read? (in the past) Here you say read like ''RED'' Are you reading? (In the present) Will you read? (in the future) Here you say read like ''REED''

the book "Antoine Saint-Exupery: The Little Prince."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I read (in this place "read" is irregular form.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's correct?)

It's this correct?) or Is it correct?

It's correct is short for it is correct, not is this correct or it is correct

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

this book on Russian language and watched movie (or cartoon or animation film).

this book onin the Russian language and watched the movie (or cartoon or animation film).

I like watching this film.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I understand most part book when I read (irregular form) this book.

I understand most parts of the book when I read (irregular form) this book.

You could also write: ''I understand most of this book when I read it.''

It's so motivates to learn the English language.

It's so motivates me to learn the English language.

Thank you to read (irregular form) my Second part Live Journal.

Thank you tofor reading (irregular form) mythe Second part of my Live Journal.

See you tomorow.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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