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Jan. 26, 2025

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My Last Saturday

I woke up at 7 o'clock. It was very dark and the weather was rainy. I took my clothes and go out with my dog because he got pie and poop. I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his pie and poop very fast. I came home and prepeared the tea. My wife and my daughter woke up and we make the breakfast together. We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side our personal jobs. I went shopping some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly. I opened the tv and then watched my favorite tv series. It took some time and then i worked english tenses. When time is six pm, my wife and our daughter came home. We played some card games together. Some of our friend phoned us, and they want to come our home if we available. We sad ofcourse we available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy. We ate dinner together after then we drank some alcohol. I think our friend went their home its midnight. We felt very tired and then we slept.

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I tookput on my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he got pie and poop.had to (pee and poop/relieve himself)

"took your clothes" sounds like you carried them rather than wore them.

"pee and poop" are rather childish words for this, "relieve himself" is a more adult sounding phrase you could use

"pie" = a type of food
"pee" = urine

Be careful not to mix them up! ;)

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his piee and poop very fast.

I camewent home and prepeared the tea.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we make thde breakfast together.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side for our personal jobtasks.

I went shopping for some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly.

I opeturned on the tvTV and then watched my favorite tvTV series.

TV is an abbreviation of television so is usually capitalised.

It took spent some time watching TV, and then iI worked eEnglish tenses.

Normally we say something "took" time when we're describing something that was required or difficult, for entertainment activities we normally say spent.

When the time iwas six pm, my wife and our daughter came home.

"is" is present tense, you're talking about the past, so "is" should be "was"

Some of our friends phoned us, and they wanted to come our home if we were available.

Watch your tenses again :)

We said of course we are available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy.

We ate dinner together then after then we drank some alcohol.

I think our friend went back to their home itsaround midnight.

I took my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he gotas soon i noticed that my dog will piee and poop soon.

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he really did his piee and poop very fast.

I came home and prepeared thea tea.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we makde the breakfast together.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side of our personal jobs.

Some of our friend phoned us, and they wanted to come to our homuse if we are available.

We said of course we are available and thirty minutes after, they came, and we played rummy.

We ate dinner together after thenat we drank some alcohol.

I think our friend went their homehome when it's midnight.

We felt verreally tired and then we immediately slept.

My Last Saturday

I woke up at 7 o'clock.

It was very dark and the weather was rainy.

I took my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he gotwanted to piee and poop.

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his piee and poop very fast.

Haha. You can also say "to do his business" for a more elegant speech.

I came home and prepeared thmade some tea.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we make thde breakfast together.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side for our personal joberrands.

I went shopping for some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly.

I opeturned on the tvTV and then watched my favorite tvTV series.

It took some time and then i workI practiced eEnglish tenses.

When time is six pmit was 6 PM, my wife and our daughter came home.

We played some card games together.

Some of our friend phoned us, and they wanted to come to our homuse if we were available.

We sadid that of course we were available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy.

We ate dinner together after then we drank some alcohol.

I think our friend went to their home itsat midnight.

We felt very tired and then we slept.

I woke up at 7 o'clock.


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It was very dark and the weather was rainy.


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I took my clothes and go out with my dog because he got pie and poop.


I took my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he gotwanted to piee and poop.

I took my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he gotas soon i noticed that my dog will piee and poop soon.

I tookput on my clothes and gowent out with my dog because he got pie and poop.had to (pee and poop/relieve himself)

"took your clothes" sounds like you carried them rather than wore them. "pee and poop" are rather childish words for this, "relieve himself" is a more adult sounding phrase you could use "pie" = a type of food "pee" = urine Be careful not to mix them up! ;)

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his pie and poop very fast.


I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his piee and poop very fast.

Haha. You can also say "to do his business" for a more elegant speech.

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he really did his piee and poop very fast.

I went around in our neighbourhood and then he did his piee and poop very fast.

I came home and prepeared the tea.


I came home and prepeared thmade some tea.

I came home and prepeared thea tea.

I camewent home and prepeared the tea.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we make the breakfast together.


My wife and my daughter woke up and we make thde breakfast together.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we makde the breakfast together.

My wife and my daughter woke up and we make thde breakfast together.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side our personal jobs.


We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side for our personal joberrands.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side of our personal jobs.

We ate our breakfast and all of us went out side for our personal jobtasks.

My Last Saturday


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I went shopping some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly.


I went shopping for some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly.

I went shopping for some clothes and some digital things and then came home quickly.

I opened the tv and then watched my favorite tv series.


I opeturned on the tvTV and then watched my favorite tvTV series.

I opeturned on the tvTV and then watched my favorite tvTV series.

TV is an abbreviation of television so is usually capitalised.

It took some time and then i worked english tenses.


It took some time and then i workI practiced eEnglish tenses.

It took spent some time watching TV, and then iI worked eEnglish tenses.

Normally we say something "took" time when we're describing something that was required or difficult, for entertainment activities we normally say spent.

When time is six pm, my wife and our daughter came home.


When time is six pmit was 6 PM, my wife and our daughter came home.

When the time iwas six pm, my wife and our daughter came home.

"is" is present tense, you're talking about the past, so "is" should be "was"

We played some card games together.


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Some of our friend phoned us, and they want to come our home if we available.


Some of our friend phoned us, and they wanted to come to our homuse if we were available.

Some of our friend phoned us, and they wanted to come to our homuse if we are available.

Some of our friends phoned us, and they wanted to come our home if we were available.

Watch your tenses again :)

We sad ofcourse we available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy.


We sadid that of course we were available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy.

We said of course we are available and thirty minutes after, they came, and we played rummy.

We said of course we are available and thirty minutes after they came and we played rummy.

We ate dinner together after then we drank some alcohol.


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We ate dinner together after thenat we drank some alcohol.

We ate dinner together then after then we drank some alcohol.

I think our friend went their home its midnight.


I think our friend went to their home itsat midnight.

I think our friend went their homehome when it's midnight.

I think our friend went back to their home itsaround midnight.

We felt very tired and then we slept.


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We felt verreally tired and then we immediately slept.

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