March 11, 2021
My saturday
In the morning I wake up then I run around the park for 20 minutes. I take a shower and I preparate my breakfast usually fruits with oatmeal then I go to the class guitars for 1 hour and finally I go ride the bicycle for 40 minutes.
My saturday
In the morning I wake up then I run around the park for 20 minutes.
I take a shower and I preparate my breakfast which is usually fruits with oatmeal t. Then I go to theguitar class guitars for 1 hour, and finally I go ride themy bicycle for 40 minutes.
I think the use of 'the' before "class guitars" (which would be wrong) was unnecessary. Class guitars makes no sense so instead it would be "guitar class" or "guitar lessons." "The bicycle" indicates that it is just a random bicycle, so you would use my to clarify that you own it.
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I did understand what the point is overall so that's a plus.
March 11, 2021
Thanks so much
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I take a shower and I preparate my breakfast usually fruits with oatmeal then I go to the class guitars for 1 hour and finally I go ride the bicycle for 40 minutes. I take a shower and I prepar I think the use of 'the' before "class guitars" (which would be wrong) was unnecessary. Class guitars makes no sense so instead it would be "guitar class" or "guitar lessons." "The bicycle" indicates that it is just a random bicycle, so you would use my to clarify that you own it. |
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