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My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan

June also means farewell. A day of my last June in college, my best friend and me said goodbye to her minitor. After, we went back to school. We stayed in the bridge. She was quite sad. I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never meet each other again. I felt nothing, though. I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake. Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan. It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.

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My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan

June also means farewell.

AOne day ofduring my last June in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her mionitor.

Afterwards, we went back to school.

We stayeood ion thea bridge.

She was quite sad.

I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving, and maybe would never might not seet each other again.

I felt nothing, though.

I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake.

眼镜 = glasses, 玻璃/杯子 = glass

Thus, I had to buy another pair, which cost me 240 yuan.

It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.

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Wow, that's a lot! Glasses aren't covered under insurance over there?

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kiwy

Nov. 13, 2021

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no. we only had health insurance at that time. The insurance system is not so good here, even now we still don't have wildly coverd insurance.

My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan

June also means farewell.

AOne day ofduring my last June spent in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her minientor.

I'm not sure if you meant to say mentor.

Afterwards, we went back to school.

We stayed inext to the bridge.

Or, We hung out on the bridge for a while.

She was quite sad.

I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never mseet each other again.

I felt nothing, though.

I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake.

Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan.

It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.

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Sorry to hear about the lost glass. I'm glad that you were able to replace it

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kiwy

Nov. 13, 2021

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AOne day ofduring my last June spent in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her minientor.

no. the monitor is a classmate who in charge of or lead the whole class

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kiwy

Nov. 13, 2021

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thank you

My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan


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June also means farewell.


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A day of my last June in college, my best friend and me said goodbye to her minitor.


AOne day ofduring my last June spent in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her minientor.

I'm not sure if you meant to say mentor.

AOne day ofduring my last June in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her mionitor.

After, we went back to school.


Afterwards, we went back to school.

Afterwards, we went back to school.

We stayed in the bridge.


We stayed inext to the bridge.

Or, We hung out on the bridge for a while.

We stayeood ion thea bridge.

She was quite sad.


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I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never meet each other again.


I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never mseet each other again.

I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving, and maybe would never might not seet each other again.

I felt nothing, though.


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I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake.


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I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake.

眼镜 = glasses, 玻璃/杯子 = glass

Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan.


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Thus, I had to buy another pair, which cost me 240 yuan.

It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.


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