May 1, 2025
Hi there! I’m continue my writing adventure. Today I decided to go at the countryside. Honestly, we have a bad weather, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me. I think it is more cool and good for me to be at the nature, than in a flat in Moscow.
I wanted to share with you my sad experience. Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we have a nice communication, I even offered him to practice English together, we met and went for a walk in park and he was very intelligent with me and kind. But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, do a first step. I think, he is not interested in me in romantic contest, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc. At fist I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go. We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has his person, it is just matter of time. And I need to respect people’s freedom. They have a right don’t choose me.
So there is sad story for today. But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxation. Nature always helps me coping with struggles. Today we even have a sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day. So I’m glad to God for every single day.
Today I decided to go ato the countryside.
Honestly, we have a bad weather here, it’s rainy, but it didn’t stop me.
At first I had a lot of pain, but soon after, I think, I let it go.
We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and talk sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has his/her person, it is just matter of time.
They have a right don’to not choose me.
So there isat is the sad story for today.
But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed.
Nature always helps me copinge with struggles.
My sad experience
Hi there!
I’m continueing my writing adventure.
Present continuous - "I am ___ing"
Today I decided to go ato the countryside.
Honestly, we have ad bad weather, it’. It was rainy, but it didn’t stop me.
I think that it is more cooler and goodbetter for me to be at thein nature, than in a flat in Moscow.
If a word can be said as "____er," then that is used for comparison rather than "more ____" (the comparative form for "good" is "better")
I wanted to share with you my sad experience with you.
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But after that he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, do atake the first step.
The phrase is "take the first step" for when you want someone to move your relationship farther
I think, that he is not interested in me in a romantic contestway, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc.
You meant to say "romantic context" but "interested in/see someone in a romantic way" is more common
At first I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go.
We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has histheir person, it is just matter of time.
For unknown/any gender use "their"
And I need to respect people’s freedom.
They have a right don’to not choose me.
So there is sad story for today.
But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed.
"Relaxed" is an adjective (or verb in past tense, but not for this context) and "relaxation" is a noun
Nature always helps me copinge with struggles.
Today we, even have a sunthe sun is out, but my phone said that there will be rain all day.
So I’m glad/grateful to God for every single day.
I'm not entirely sure if "glad" can be used like this, but "grateful" makes more sense
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Nice work! What I noticed most was that you could have some sentences be multiple rather than one, but overall you did a good job.
My sSad eExperience
Title capitalization
Hi there!
I’m continueing my writing adventure.
Alternative: I'm here to continue my writing adventure
Today, I decided to go ato the countryside.
We go "to" places
Honestly, we have a bad weather, (it’s rainy), but ithat didn’t stop me.
"That didn't stop me" is a bit more natural here
I think it is more cooler and goodbetter for me to be at thein nature, than in a flat in Moscow.
Since you are making comparisons (being in the countryside vs. being in Moscow) => cooler and better
I wanted to share with you my sad experience.
Recently, I fell in love with onea guy, and we have a nice communication,were getting along well. I even offered him to practice English together, wwith him. We met and went for a walk in/at the park and he was very intelligent with me and kind with me.
We say "one" when we are insisting on focusing on the number/quantity of something. Otherwise, in everyday speech, use "a." Describing your early relationship going well could be "getting along well."
But after that, he didn’t write to me,. He didn’t, you know, do a first step/make a move.
Taking a romantic initiative is often described as "making a move"
I think, he is not interested in me in romantic contestally, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English, etc.
At first I had a lot of pain, but after, it (really) hurt, but eventually, I think, I let it gogot over it.
Enduring a difficult experience and eventually feeling better can be described as "getting over it" or "moving on"
We can be just thbe friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has his person, it is just matter of time.
And I need to respect people’s freedom.
They have a right don’to not choose me.
So there is my sad story for today.
But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed.
Nature always helps me copingto cope with my struggles.
Today, we even have a sun, but my phone said that there willould be rain all day.
So I’m gladthankful/grateful to God for every single day.
These are better descriptions for this sentence
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Good job
I’m continue mying to writinge my adventure.
Today, I decided to go ato the countryside.
Honestly, we have ahad bad weather, it’s has been rainying, but ithat didn’t stop me.
I think it is more cool and good for me to be ait the nature, than in a flat in Moscow.
Recently I fell in love with onea guy, and we haved a nice communicnversation, I even offered him to practice English together, w. We met and went for a walk in the park and he was very intelligent with me and kind with me.
But after that, he didn’t write to me, didn’t, you know, he didn't do athe first step.
I think, that he is not interested in me in romantic contestally, but we have a lot in common: tennis, walking, learning English etc.
At first, I hadwas in a lot of pain, but after that, I think, Iough that I should let it go.
We can be just the friends (we also work together at the same job) and sometimes talk.
The good news - I believe that everyone already has histheir person, it is just a matter of time.
They have a right don’to not choose me.
So, there isis is the sad story for today.
But now, I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relaxationed.
Nature always helps me copingto cope with my struggles.
Today, we even have athe sun, but my phone said that there will be rain all day.
So, I’m gladrateful to God for every single day.
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Great work! I agree with your mindset. Everyone has their person and it is just a matter of time when we will meet them.
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Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we have a nice communication, I even offered him to practice English together, we met and went for a walk in park and he was very intelligent with me and kind. Recently I fell in love with Recently, I fell in love with We say "one" when we are insisting on focusing on the number/quantity of something. Otherwise, in everyday speech, use "a." Describing your early relationship going well could be "getting along well." Recently I fell in love with one guy, and we ha |
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At fist I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go. At first, I At first Enduring a difficult experience and eventually feeling better can be described as "getting over it" or "moving on" At first I had a lot of pain, but after, I think, I let it go. At first I had a lot of pain, but soon after |
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But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relaxation. But now, I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relax But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relax But now I am with my family in a great house, and now I am feeling relax "Relaxed" is an adjective (or verb in past tense, but not for this context) and "relaxation" is a noun But now I am with my family in great house, and now I am feeling relax |
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So I’m glad to God for every single day. So, I’m g So I’m These are better descriptions for this sentence So I’m glad/grateful to God for every single day. I'm not entirely sure if "glad" can be used like this, but "grateful" makes more sense |
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