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yone

Feb. 27, 2025

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My rutin

I wake up the earliest in my family. I study English after putting
my family's breakfast dishes away .
I like this time that has around 1 hours until leaving my home to work.
Sometimes I read an English text, and other times write a sentence in English.

Corrections

I wake upam the earliest to wake up in my family.

I study English after putting my family's breakfast dishes away .

I like this time that has around 1 hours untile hour or so I have before needing to leavinge my home to go to work.

I changed it, because I think it sounds better this way, although I understood what you wanted to say...

Sometimes I read an English text, and other times write a sentence in English.

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Great! Keep going! :)

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yone

March 13, 2025

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I am so happy you changed my sentence correcting better than before.

My routine

I like this time thatas I hasve around 1 hours until I leaving mye home tofor work.

‘My home’ is correct but people will assume you mean ‘my’ unless you say other wise.

Eg
“I’m going to my home” - fine but clunky
“I’m going home” - sounds more natural

“I’m going to their home” - if the ‘home’ is someone else’s id add the pronouns

Sometimes I read ain English text, and other times write a sentence in English.

‘Text’ is fine but feels very academic
‘English writing’ or even ‘I read in English’ also work.

Feedback

Keep going :-)

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yone

Feb. 28, 2025

1

Thank you very much. I like your explanation. When I use "home" , I will be careful.

My rutin


My routine

I wake up the earliest in my family.


I wake upam the earliest to wake up in my family.

I study English after putting my family's breakfast dishes away .


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like this time that has around 1 hours until leaving my home to work.


I like this time thatas I hasve around 1 hours until I leaving mye home tofor work.

‘My home’ is correct but people will assume you mean ‘my’ unless you say other wise. Eg “I’m going to my home” - fine but clunky “I’m going home” - sounds more natural “I’m going to their home” - if the ‘home’ is someone else’s id add the pronouns

I like this time that has around 1 hours untile hour or so I have before needing to leavinge my home to go to work.

I changed it, because I think it sounds better this way, although I understood what you wanted to say...

Sometimes I read an English text, and other times write a sentence in English.


Sometimes I read ain English text, and other times write a sentence in English.

‘Text’ is fine but feels very academic ‘English writing’ or even ‘I read in English’ also work.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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