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Titles are in either title case (formal) or sentence case (casual)

I would like to talk about my routine, like things I usually do everyday.

So I get up, on at 8:00 am, forto have breakfast especialand importantly drink coffee, then I wash may face and brush my teeth.

Then I have to start to work around 10 a.m, I seelook at my schedule and the meetings the meetigs during the day.

"see" is passive, "look at" is more active

When it is, 12:30 pm I go to lunch.

I can eat onat the college that is near from my house, our Ibut I will eat m ready-made lunches this week.

I think "our" was meant to be "or", but it doesn't fully make sense in this sentence.

I live with ten girls in a student republic, sodormitory, so during this time I talk to them, I keep up to date with the news our sleep duringfor fifteen minutes.

"republic" - a government without a monarch
"dormitory" - a building which houses many people with shared spaces (especially students or certain other groups)

Then it is already is time to go back to work, and that I doI do that until 5:00 p.m.

So I have to prepare myself to go to college, do some homeworks, and study and I. I also have an afternoon coffee.

"homework" is already the plural of "homework". I also broke this sentence in two because you're not preparing to have the coffee, you're having the coffee.

My classes start at 7:00 p.m, it may end early ourbut most bygo until 11:00 p.m.

So another day, is everythingThe next day will be the same again, I really want organize myself to exercise and learn english, so this time on endoday at the end of the day, I am trying dedicate some time for that.

So I get up, on at 8:00 am, for to have breakfast and especially drink coffe,e. then I wash may face and brush my teeth.

Ich verstehe dich. Vielleicht mehr lesen. Du bist fast C in Englisch. Besser als mir in Deutsch. Sehr gut.

Then I have to start to work around 10 a.m,. I see my schedule and the meetings. These are the meetings during the I have today.

When it is, 12:30 pm I go to lunch.

I can eat onat the college that is near from my house, our I eat my ready-made lunches this week.

I live with ten girls in a student republic, so this timedorm (or in student housing), so I talk to them, I keep up to date with the news our sleep during fifteen minutes.

Die letzte Satz.. ich verstehe nicht

Then its already is time to get back to work, and that I doI do that until 5:00 p.m.

So I have to prepare myself to go to college, do some homeworks, and study and. And then I have an afternoon coffee.

Mein Vaters Familie war aus Niedersachsen und Sie hatten Tee getrunken. Sie hatten auf den Nordsee gelebt. Sie heißen Andersen. Sie war Aus Schleswig auch. Denn Deutsch.

My class starts at 7:00 p.m, it may end early our mostbut usually by 11:00 p.m.

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'So' there is unnecessary

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You can write 7 pm, no need to add the zeros.

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I deleted the first sentence because you've already said it's your routine at the beginning.

I would like to talk about my routine, like things I usually do every day.

"everyday" is an adjective
"every day" is an adverb meaning "each day"

So I get up, on at 8:00 am, for to have breakfast, especially to drink coffee, then I wash may face and brush my teeth.

Then I have to start to work around 10 a.m, I seem; I check my schedule and thewhat meetings the meetigsI'll have during the day.

changed "a.m" from "a.m." to "am" to keep it consistent with rest of text (either is fine but ideally should be consistent)

When it is, 12:30 pm, I go to lunch.

I can eat onat the college that is near from my house, our I can eat my ready-made lunches thismeant for that week.

I live with ten girls in a student republic, so during this time I talk to them, and I keep up to date with the news our sleep during those fifteen minutes.

Then it is already is time to go back to work, and that I do until 5:00 p.m.

SoThen I have to prepare myself to go to college, do some homeworks, and study and I. I'll also have an afternoon coffee.

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