Jan. 2, 2025
My routine
today i wake up at 7:30 am to go to waterfall but the weather forecast says it will rain, so i back to sleep and wake up 12 pm, my lunch was cod pie than the friend of my mom did and it was delicious. We were talking about the life of the people while we ate some snacks
Hoje eu acordei às 7:30 da manhã pra ir à cachoeira, mas a previsão do tempo disse que ia chover, então eu voltei à dormir e acordei às 12 da tarde, meu almoço foi torta de bacalhau que a amiga da minha mãe fez e estava deliciosa. Nós ficamos falando sobre a vida das pessoas enquantos comíamos alguns lanches.
tToday iI waoke up at 7:30 am to go to the waterfall, but the weather forecast says it will rain, so iI went back to sleep and waoke up 12 pm, m. My lunch was the cod pie than the friend of my mom didt my mom's friend made, and it was delicious.
- Make sure to write "I" instead of "i" always.
- Change "wake" to "woke" to convey past tense
- at "12 pm" a comma is needed to end the sentence. All the comma placements beforehand are correct. Very good.
- "the friend of my mom" can be simplified to "my friend's mom". the apostrophe(') shows ownership.
- A comma is comes before "and" when to separate the two independent clauses.
We were talking about the life of the peoplepeople's lives while we ate some snacks
- "the life of the people" can be simplified to "people's lives" because the statement is general.
- When saying "the people", it implies a particular group or population of people as the subject, but it is not clear in this sentence.
Feedback
Your understanding of basic grammar patterns looks very strong. Very good! You will only get better from here!
You may need to learn how to use the apostrophe (') more to show ownership. There are other minor mistakes like comma placement one coordinating conjunction or period placement at the end of compound sentences.
Have a good day and good luck learning English!
today i waoke up at 7:30 am to go to a waterfall but the weather forecast saysid it will rain, so i went back to sleep and waoke up at 12 pm, my lunch was cod pie thant the friend of my mom didmade and it was delicious.
really good! just some things with past tense that you didn't get.
We were talking about the life of the people while we ate some snacks
Feedback
You did really good! The only thing that was wrong, really, was your use of past tense (which is hard for native speakers). Otherwise, you did well! Keep it up!
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today i wake up at 7:30 am to go to waterfall but the weather forecast says it will rain, so i back to sleep and wake up 12 pm, my lunch was cod pie than the friend of my mom did and it was delicious. today i w really good! just some things with past tense that you didn't get.
- Make sure to write "I" instead of "i" always. - Change "wake" to "woke" to convey past tense - at "12 pm" a comma is needed to end the sentence. All the comma placements beforehand are correct. Very good. - "the friend of my mom" can be simplified to "my friend's mom". the apostrophe(') shows ownership. - A comma is comes before "and" when to separate the two independent clauses. |
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We were talking about the life of the people while we ate some snacks We were talking about the life of the people while we ate some snacks We were talking about - "the life of the people" can be simplified to "people's lives" because the statement is general. - When saying "the people", it implies a particular group or population of people as the subject, but it is not clear in this sentence. |
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