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Dec. 14, 2021

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My routine

Nothing happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored. I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually say - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity. Unfortunately, I didn't solve that problem yet, the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines proves that, so I will just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine. It isn't very interesting, but it's what we have for today.

I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway. The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth. Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french. Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment. I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week. I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.

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My routine

Nothing has really happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored.

I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually saytalk about - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity.

Unfortunately, I didhaven't solved that problem yet, with the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines provesing that, so I wi'll just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine.

It isn't very interesting, but it's what weI have for today.

You're the one writing, so "what I have" makes more sense here.

I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway.

The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth.

Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french.

Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment.

I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week.

I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.

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Well-written, really not that many mistakes. Nice work!

My routine


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Nothing happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored.


Nothing has really happened lately, at least nothing that I could write about and people would read without getting bored.

I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually say - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity.


I tried to remember what the journals that I correct usually saytalk about - games, traumas, dream trips, and so on - and I realized that all I was missing was creativity.

Unfortunately, I didn't solve that problem yet, the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines proves that, so I will just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine.


Unfortunately, I didhaven't solved that problem yet, with the fact that I am sitting in front of my laptop for 23 minutes and just wrote 4 lines provesing that, so I wi'll just copy other people's ideas and tell you about my routine.

It isn't very interesting, but it's what we have for today.


It isn't very interesting, but it's what weI have for today.

You're the one writing, so "what I have" makes more sense here.

I don't have an alarm clock, but I wake up early anyway.


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The first thing I do is to have breakfast and brush my teeth.


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Then I make a to-do list and decide where to start, it can vary depending on the day, but there are a few things that I do every day: read, work out, and study french.


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Since I'm on vacation I don't have to go to school and can focus on studying french, which is my main concern at the moment.


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I also write and publish these journals three times a week and practice English with other people twice a week.


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I can't study English every day (because I don't have time), but I try to keep in touch with the language so I won't forget it.


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