March 1, 2024
My roots
Do I really now my family's history? No. For a long time I've been wanting to know a lot more about where I come from. Now, I just now that my all my family came from Puno -my mother's and my father's-, and some things about my grandparents. A month ago, I went there to visit my mother's family after many years. Before that, my curiosity for my ancestors' history started. However, I barely make some questions about the past to my grandmother and barely talk to my grandfather. The last time I saw them and talked to them was when I was a child. That's why I didn't feel confidence enough to do questions related to the past. But my curiosity is still there. Why am I how I am? I haven't seen many relatives like me. Why are my eyes like an Asiatic person's? And other questions about my looks. Someday I hope to start an whole investigation about this and find an answer or not at all.
That's all! Thanks for reading
My roots
Do I really know about my family's history?
No.
For a long time I've been wanting to know a lot more about where I come from.
Now, I just know that my all my family came from Puno -my mother's and my father's-, and some things about my grandparents.
A month ago, I went there to visit my mother's family after many years.
Before that, my curiosity for my ancestors' history started.
it's better to write "ancestors' " like this "ancestor's".
However, I barely make someany questions about the past to my grandmother and barely talk to my grandfather.
The last time I saw them and talked to them was when I was a child.
That's why I didn't feel confidence enough to do questions related to the past.
But my curiosity is still there.
Why am I, how I am?
I haven't seen many relatives like me.
Why are my eyes like an Asiaticn person's?
And other questions about my looks.
Someday I hope to start an whole investigation about this and find an answer or notto this or find nothing at all.
That's all !
Thanks for reading
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I hope you find the answers !
My roots
Do I really know my family's history?
No.
For a long time, I've been wanting to know a lot more about where I come from.
Now, I just know that my all my family came from Puno, -my mother's and my father's-, and some things about my grandparents.
A month ago, I went there to visit my mother's family after many years.
Before that, my curiosity for my ancestors' history started.
However, I brarely make someasked my grandmother questions about the past to my grandmother, and barely talk to my grandfather.
The last time I saw them and talked to them was when I was a child.
That's why I didn't feel confidencet enough to do questions related to the past.
But my curiosity is still there.
Why am I how I am?
I haven't seen many relatives like me.
Why are my eyes like an Asiatic person's?
And I have other questions about my looks.
sentence fragment, not a full sentence
Someday I hope to start an whole investigation about this and find an answer or not at all.
That's all!
Thanks for reading
Feedback
very good work!
Do I really know my family's history?
For a long time I've been wanting to know a lot more about where I come from.
Now, I just know that my all my family came from Puno -my mother's and my father's-, and some things about my grandparents.
A month ago, I went there to visit my mother's family after many years.
Before that, my curiosity for my ancestors' history started.
However, I barelystarted to make some questions about the past to my grandmother and barely talkalso to my grandfather.
"barley" doesn't make sense here. I put "started to" to show that you just began to talk to your grandmother and grandfather a little bit.
The last time I saw them and talked to them was when I was a child.
That's why I didn't feel confidencet enough to doask questions related to the past.
But my curiosity is still there.
Why am I how I am?
I haven't seen many relatives like me.
Why are my eyes like an Asiatic person's?
And other questions about my looks.
Someday I hope to start an whole investigation about this and find an answer or not at all.
That's all!
Thanks for reading
Feedback
Overall, good work! Just remember: know vs now.
My roots
Do I really now my family's history?
No.
For a long time I've been wanting to know a lot more about where I come from.
Now, I just now that my all my family came from Puno - both from my mother's and my father's side -, and someI know a few things about my grandparents.
A month ago, I went there to visit my mother's family after many years.
Before that, my curiosity for my ancestors' history had started.
However, I brarely make some questionsasked my grandmother about ther past to my grandmother and, and I barely talk to my grandfather.
The last time I saw them and talked to them was when I was a child.
That's why I didn't feel confidencet enough to doask questions related to the past.
Alternative:
... to ask questions about the past.
But my curiosity is still there.
Why am I howthe way I am?
I haven't seen many relatives like me.
Why are my eyes like those of an Asiatic person's?
And other questions about my looks.
Someday I hope to start an whole investigationdo a thorough research about this and either find an answer or nothing at all.
That's all!
Thanks for reading
Feedback
A very interesting topic. You write very well.
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