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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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My Role Models

There are several people writing journals here every day. I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except my hiking day.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

Hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus corrections and feedback you guys had given to me. It's really helpful for me to improve my expressions in English.

Thank you all!


有几位每天都在这里写日记。我觉得他们简直就是我的榜样啊,所以决定每天都要写一篇英文,除了我的徒步日。

大概并不容易,但我会试着把它变成习惯,加进我的学习惯例。

但愿能成。

另外,我用一个文件收集回顾了每一篇日记,加上你们给我的修正和反馈。这真的对我的英文表达非常有帮助。

谢谢你们大家!

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My Role Models

There are several people writingho write journal entries here every day.

I think they arconsider them to be my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journalentry in English every day except on my hiking day.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

HI hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plusentry plus the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

It's really helpful for me to improve my use of expressions in English.

Thank you all!

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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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Thank you so much!

My Role Models

There are several people writingho write journals here every day.

I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except my hiking days.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

HI hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plusentry and the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

It's really helpful for me to improve my expressions in English.

Thank you all!

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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

MyALSO POSSIBLE: Some Personal Role Models

There are several people writing journals here every day.

I think tMORE SUCCINCTLY: They are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except mywhen hiking day.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

Hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

MORE CONCISELY: It's really helpful for me to improve my expressions in English.

Feedback

Hope your English learning adventure goes smoothly.

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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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Thank you!

My Role Models

There are several people writing journal entries here every day.

A journal is a book or collection of journal entries.

I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journalentry every day except my hiking day.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

HI hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

It's really helpful for me to improve myuse better expressions in English.

Thank you all!

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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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Thank you so much for the corrections and feedback!

Have a nice day!

My Role Models

There are several people writing journals here every day.

I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except my hiking day.

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.

HI hope it will work.

You might want to specify what you hope to work

It's really helpful for me to improve my expressions in English.

Thank you all!

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Tammy

March 20, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Maybe it's not easy, but I'm trying to make it a habit and add it into my learning routine.


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HI hope it will work.

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HI hope it will work.

HI hope it will work.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus corrections and feedback you guys had given to me.


In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plus corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plusentry and the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

In addition, I made a document to review every journal plusentry plus the corrections and feedback you guys hadve given to me.

It's really helpful for me to improve my expressions in English.


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It's really helpful for me to improve myuse better expressions in English.

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My Role Models


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I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journalentry every day except my hiking day.

I think tMORE SUCCINCTLY: They are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except mywhen hiking day.

I think they are my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journal every day except my hiking days.

I think they arconsider them to be my role models, so I decided to try to write an English journalentry in English every day except on my hiking day.

Thank you all!


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