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galoarellano1987

Nov. 25, 2024

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My Recovery Process

Twenty days have passed since my septum sugery. In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.

For example, I think my patient have improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have knew myself.

Regarding technolllgy, I have learned more topics about SAP. I am developing APIS REST in SAP right now. This is a interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdlege about SAP

In general my recovery process has been good.

Always, I give thanks to God.

God bless you and thanks for reading my post.

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My Rrecovery Process

Not in capitals

Twenty days have passed since my septum sugery.

InDuring this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much asbout technollogy and behavior.

For example, I think my patientce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I havenow kneow myself.

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

I am developing APIS REST in SAP right now.

This is an interesting project where I have implementused all my aknowdlege about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

Always, I give thanks to God.

God bless you and thanks for reading my post.

In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.

For example, I think my patientce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have come to kneow myself.

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

My Recovery Process

Twenty days have passed since my septum sugery.

In this time, I ha've learned a lot of things, as msuch as things about technollogy and behavior.

For example, I think my patient ce haves improved and I ha've learned to control my feelings, but above all I have've gotten to kneow myself.

patient = paciente
pacience = paciencia

Regarding technolllogy, I ha've learned more topics about SAP.

I a'm developing APIS REST in SAP right now.

This is an interesting project where I ha've implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general
, my recovery process has been good.

AI always, I give thanks to God.

God bless you and thanks for reading my post.

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Very good. I don't know much about septum surgery, but it sounds interesting. 😅

It's not incorrect to say, "I have" or "I am" but, usually, "I've" and "I'm" sound more natural.

My Recovery Process

Twenty days have passed since my septum surgery.

In this time, I have learned a lot ofmany things, as much asbout technollogy and my behavior.

Many things sounds a bit more natural than a lot of things, but both are correct. The rest of the sentence is a bit confusing. "As much as" is normally used when comparing things and doesn't make sense here. Behavior by itself isn't specific about - whose behavior? What type of behavior? I'm assuming you mean about your own behavior.

For example, I think my patient ce haves improved, and I have learned to control my feelings, b. But above all I havenow kneow myself.

Patient is an adjective, patience is the noun form. "Have" is plural of "has". Added a comma because both of those parts of the sentence can stand alone as is, so you put in a comma. The sentence then runs on, so I made the last part its own sentence. "have knew myself" is conflicting since "knew" is past tense and above all makes it seem like you're talking in the present tense. I added now to make it flow better and changed the verb to present tense since you currently know yourself better. If you wanted it to be past tense to match the rest of the sentence, you could say "But above all I have gotten to know myself".

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

Learned sounds better here, since this is a concrete action you did.

I am developing APIS REST in SAP right now.

This is an interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

Always, I give thanks to God.

God bless you and thanks for reading my post.

Feedback

Nice work on both your language learning and your recovery!

In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.

You only need one L in technology! Otherwise great job!

For example, I think my patient ce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have knew myself.

Patient = Person getting help medically. Have is past tense!

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

General typo.

This is a interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

Acknowledge is to realize something, knowledge is what you know!

For example, I think my patient have improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have knew myself.


For example, I think my patient ce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have knew myself.

Patient = Person getting help medically. Have is past tense!

For example, I think my patient ce haves improved, and I have learned to control my feelings, b. But above all I havenow kneow myself.

Patient is an adjective, patience is the noun form. "Have" is plural of "has". Added a comma because both of those parts of the sentence can stand alone as is, so you put in a comma. The sentence then runs on, so I made the last part its own sentence. "have knew myself" is conflicting since "knew" is past tense and above all makes it seem like you're talking in the present tense. I added now to make it flow better and changed the verb to present tense since you currently know yourself better. If you wanted it to be past tense to match the rest of the sentence, you could say "But above all I have gotten to know myself".

For example, I think my patient ce haves improved and I ha've learned to control my feelings, but above all I have've gotten to kneow myself.

patient = paciente pacience = paciencia

For example, I think my patientce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I have come to kneow myself.

For example, I think my patientce haves improved and I have learned to control my feelings, but above all I havenow kneow myself.

Regarding technolllgy, I have learned more topics about SAP.


Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

General typo.

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

Learned sounds better here, since this is a concrete action you did.

Regarding technolllogy, I ha've learned more topics about SAP.

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

Regarding technolllogy, I have learned more topics about SAP.

I am developing APIS REST in SAP right now.


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My Recovery Process


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My Rrecovery Process

Not in capitals

Twenty days have passed since my septum sugery.


Twenty days have passed since my septum surgery.

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In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.


In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.

You only need one L in technology! Otherwise great job!

In this time, I have learned a lot ofmany things, as much asbout technollogy and my behavior.

Many things sounds a bit more natural than a lot of things, but both are correct. The rest of the sentence is a bit confusing. "As much as" is normally used when comparing things and doesn't make sense here. Behavior by itself isn't specific about - whose behavior? What type of behavior? I'm assuming you mean about your own behavior.

In this time, I ha've learned a lot of things, as msuch as things about technollogy and behavior.

In this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much as technollogy and behavior.

InDuring this time, I have learned a lot of things, as much asbout technollogy and behavior.

Always, I give thanks to God.


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AI always, I give thanks to God.

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This is a interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdlege about SAP In general my recovery process has been good.


This is a interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

Acknowledge is to realize something, knowledge is what you know!

This is an interesting project where I have implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

This is an interesting project where I ha've implemented all my aknowdledge about SAP


In general
, my recovery process has been good.

This is an interesting project where I have implementused all my aknowdlege about SAP


In general my recovery process has been good.

God bless you and thanks for reading my post.


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