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MY RECENT FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATOR

I have followed and watched her videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator. I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch a mukbang video on Facebook. After watching her video, I left a like and several days after her videos kept popping up on my feeds. I became her fan just after 1 vlog that she told about her life and how she got today's life. She were born and bred in VN and lived with parents until 4 as her parents migrated to US with her siblings. I don't know well about migration policy but she had to wait several years so that be able to migrate to US. When she came to US, she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't get order at Mcdonald's. She is a determinate and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farm that could speak English. Now she is a profesor engineer and still try hard every day. First, I like her as I can find she like me at the point that we love eating and cherish the food a lot, even if someone say something bad about her eating habits she no longer be friend with them or just ignore them, just like me. But then I influenced by her positive. Not only how she dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our life, the way we make our life better in my own way. And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearing her plan for the future. I think she is the real INFLUENCER because she give me positive and motivation to make progress in my life.

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MY RECENT FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATORNOTE: This is fine with British English and the MTV style. Here is the same thing in American English and in MLA style: My Recent Favorite Content Creator

NOTE: In MTV style, all words in a title are capitalized. In MLA style, only the first letters of nouns, verbs, and adjecties are capitalized. (注意:在MTV风格中,标题中的所有单词都大写。在MLA风格中,只有名词、动词和形容词的首字母大写。)

I have followed and watched her[ADD NAME OF PERSON HERE] videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.

NOTE: In English, pronouns are used only *after* the noun is clear. Who is "she"? Readers do not yet know this. 注意:在英语中,代词只在名词清楚后使用。“她”是谁?读者们还不知道这一点。

更简洁地说:I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch a mukbangile watching a ASMR MUKBANG video on Facebook.

After watching her video, I left a "like" mark and several days after her videos kept popping up inton my feeds.

I became her fan just after 1 vlog that she told about her life and how she got today's lifewatching one of her video blogs that described how she became who she is.

She were born and braised in VNietnam and lived with parents until 4 asage 4, when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

I don't know well about migration policy butf I understand correctly, she had to wait several years so thato be able to migrate to Uthe U.S.

When she first came to USthe U.S., she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't even get order food at Mcdonald's.

She is a determinated and hard-working person, so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farmily that could speak English fluently.

Now she is a professor of engineering and still tryworks hard every day.

我猜:First, I like her as I can find she like me at the point that we love eating and cherish thewe both love eating yummy food a lot, e. Even if someone say something bad about people criticize her eating habits, she no longer be friend with them or just ignores them, just like me.

But then I I have been influenced by her positive.ity.

Not only how更流畅:The ways she dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our life, the way we make our life better in my own way.as well as the way she lives inspires me.

And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearingenjoy listening to her humor and her plans for the future.

I think she is the real INFLUENCER because she give me positive and motivation to make progress in my life.

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Great! Wonderful you have met such a wonderful person. Perhaps someday you will be a big influencer?

MY RECENTNEW FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATOR

or you can switch 'Favourite' and 'Recent' around

I have followed and watched her videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.

I randomly came across hera video of hers when I wanted to watch a mukbang video on Facebook.

After watching ther video, I left a like and several days after, her videos kept popping up on my feeds.

I became her fan just after 1 vlog thatwhere she told us about her life and how she got today's lifereached where she is currently.

She were born and bredgrew up in VN and lived with her parents until 4 as, when she was 4 her parents immigrated to the US with her siblings.

I don't know well about immigration policyies but she had to wait several years sto thatbe be able to immigrate to the US.

When she came to the US, she didn't know any English that she and her dadr and her father's english was so bad, that they couldn't geteven order at Mcdonald's.

She is a determinated and hard-working person, so she joined every English class she found and tried so hard to be the one in her farmily that couldan speak English.

i assume you meant family

Now she is an engineering professor engineer and still tryies hard every day.

First, I like her as I can find she like me at the pointnd we are similar in the sense that, we both love eating and cherish the food a lot, even if someone says something bad about her eating habits, she no longer bestops being friends with them or just ignores them, just like me.

But then II was influenced by her positive energy.

Not only how she dealt with troubles in life but also the way wshe enjoy ous her life, the way wshe make ous her life better in myher own way.

i assume you are still talking about her

And recently, I find she'sr pretty funny and interesting especially after hearing her plans for the future.

I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she gives me positiveity and motivation to make progress in my life.

Feedback

i tried to stay true your writing style and make fewer fewer changes.

I have been followeding and watcheding her videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.

Use present perfect progressive tense since the action started in the past and is still continuing to the present time

I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch as searching for mukbang videos on Facebook.

After watching her video, I left a like and several days after, her videos kept popping up on my feeds.

I became her fan just after watching 1 vlog thatwhere she tolalked about her life and how she got today's lifewhere she was today.

Told is more used with a direct object (ex: she told me)

She wereas born and bred in VN and lived with her parents until 4 asshe was 4 years old when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

"Born and bred" is certainly an expression that is used, but I wouldn't normally use it since "bred" is normally used for animals. It has a negative connotation when used for humans. I would say "born and raised".

I don't know well about migration policy well but she had to wait several years so that beuntil she was able to migrate to the US.

When she came to the US, she didn't know any English thatso she and her dad couldn't get order at Mcdonald's.

"The" is typically said before the names of countries that are plural (The United States)

She is a determinated and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farm that could speak English.

Now she is a profesorsional engineer and still tryies hard every day.

Or "engineering professor"? Unsure which one you were going for here

FAt first, I liked her as I can fifound she like me at the point thatcould be just like me because we love eating and cherish the food a lot, even i. If someone says something bad about her eating habits, she will no longer be friends with them or just ignore them, just like me.

"First" makes it sound like you're going to start listing things.

But then I was influenced by her positiveity.

Not only in how she dealts with troubles in life, but also the way wshe enjoy ous her life, the way wshe make ous her life better in myher own way.

I assume it's because she's doing all of these things that it influences you.

And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearing her plan for the future.

I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she gives me positiveity and motivation to make progress in my life.

I have followed and watched her videos for about 5 months and now she's my favorite content creator.

I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watchsearching for a mukbang video on Facebook.

After watching her video, I left a like and several dayI started to like her videos after ther videosy kept popping up on my feeds.

I became hera fan just after 1 vlog thatof hers after just one vlog in which she tolalked about her life and how she got today's life her position.

She wereas born and bred in VN and. She lived with her parents until 4 asage 4 when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

I don't know wellmuch about immigration policy but she had to wait several years so that be able to migrate to US.

When she came to US, she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't get order. Her family had difficulty ordering food at Mcdonald's.

She is a determinated and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried sovery hard to be the onefirst in her farm that couldmily to speak English.

Now she is a profesor of engineering and still tryies hard every day.

First, I like her as I can findbecause I find that she's like me at the point that we love eating and we cherish the food a lot, even i. If someone says something bad about her eating habits she no longer be friend with them orstays their friend or she just ignores them, just like me.

NI admire not only how she has dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our lifeves, the way we make our lifeves better in myour own way.

And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearing her plan for the future.

I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she give me positive and motivation to make progress in my own life.

MY RECENT FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATOR


MY RECENTNEW FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATOR

or you can switch 'Favourite' and 'Recent' around

MY RECENT FAVOURITE CONTENT CREATORNOTE: This is fine with British English and the MTV style. Here is the same thing in American English and in MLA style: My Recent Favorite Content Creator

NOTE: In MTV style, all words in a title are capitalized. In MLA style, only the first letters of nouns, verbs, and adjecties are capitalized. (注意:在MTV风格中,标题中的所有单词都大写。在MLA风格中,只有名词、动词和形容词的首字母大写。)

I have followed and watched her videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.


I have followed and watched her videos for about 5 months and now she's my favorite content creator.

I have been followeding and watcheding her videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.

Use present perfect progressive tense since the action started in the past and is still continuing to the present time

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I have followed and watched her[ADD NAME OF PERSON HERE] videos for about 5 months and now she's my fav content creator.

NOTE: In English, pronouns are used only *after* the noun is clear. Who is "she"? Readers do not yet know this. 注意:在英语中,代词只在名词清楚后使用。“她”是谁?读者们还不知道这一点。

I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch a mukbang video on Facebook.


I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watchsearching for a mukbang video on Facebook.

I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch as searching for mukbang videos on Facebook.

I randomly came across hera video of hers when I wanted to watch a mukbang video on Facebook.

更简洁地说:I randomly came across her video when I wanted to watch a mukbangile watching a ASMR MUKBANG video on Facebook.

After watching her video, I left a like and several days after her videos kept popping up on my feeds.


After watching her video, I left a like and several dayI started to like her videos after ther videosy kept popping up on my feeds.

After watching her video, I left a like and several days after, her videos kept popping up on my feeds.

After watching ther video, I left a like and several days after, her videos kept popping up on my feeds.

After watching her video, I left a "like" mark and several days after her videos kept popping up inton my feeds.

I became her fan just after 1 vlog that she told about her life and how she got today's life.


I became hera fan just after 1 vlog thatof hers after just one vlog in which she tolalked about her life and how she got today's life her position.

I became her fan just after watching 1 vlog thatwhere she tolalked about her life and how she got today's lifewhere she was today.

Told is more used with a direct object (ex: she told me)

I became her fan just after 1 vlog thatwhere she told us about her life and how she got today's lifereached where she is currently.

I became her fan just after 1 vlog that she told about her life and how she got today's lifewatching one of her video blogs that described how she became who she is.

She were born and bred in VN and lived with parents until 4 as her parents migrated to US with her siblings.


She wereas born and bred in VN and. She lived with her parents until 4 asage 4 when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

She wereas born and bred in VN and lived with her parents until 4 asshe was 4 years old when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

"Born and bred" is certainly an expression that is used, but I wouldn't normally use it since "bred" is normally used for animals. It has a negative connotation when used for humans. I would say "born and raised".

She were born and bredgrew up in VN and lived with her parents until 4 as, when she was 4 her parents immigrated to the US with her siblings.

She were born and braised in VNietnam and lived with parents until 4 asage 4, when her parents migrated to the US with her siblings.

I don't know well about migration policy but she had to wait several years so that be able to migrate to US.


I don't know wellmuch about immigration policy but she had to wait several years so that be able to migrate to US.

I don't know well about migration policy well but she had to wait several years so that beuntil she was able to migrate to the US.

I don't know well about immigration policyies but she had to wait several years sto thatbe be able to immigrate to the US.

I don't know well about migration policy butf I understand correctly, she had to wait several years so thato be able to migrate to Uthe U.S.

When she came to US, she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't get order at Mcdonald's.


When she came to US, she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't get order. Her family had difficulty ordering food at Mcdonald's.

When she came to the US, she didn't know any English thatso she and her dad couldn't get order at Mcdonald's.

"The" is typically said before the names of countries that are plural (The United States)

When she came to the US, she didn't know any English that she and her dadr and her father's english was so bad, that they couldn't geteven order at Mcdonald's.

When she first came to USthe U.S., she didn't know any English that she and her dad couldn't even get order food at Mcdonald's.

She is a determinate and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farm that could speak English.


She is a determinated and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried sovery hard to be the onefirst in her farm that couldmily to speak English.

She is a determinated and hard-working person so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farm that could speak English.

She is a determinated and hard-working person, so she joined every English class she found and tried so hard to be the one in her farmily that couldan speak English.

i assume you meant family

She is a determinated and hard-working person, so she joined every English class and tried so hard to be the one in her farmily that could speak English fluently.

Now she is a profesor engineer and still try hard every day.


Now she is a profesor of engineering and still tryies hard every day.

Now she is a profesorsional engineer and still tryies hard every day.

Or "engineering professor"? Unsure which one you were going for here

Now she is an engineering professor engineer and still tryies hard every day.

Now she is a professor of engineering and still tryworks hard every day.

First, I like her as I can find she like me at the point that we love eating and cherish the food a lot, even if someone say something bad about her eating habits she no longer be friend with them or just ignore them, just like me.


First, I like her as I can findbecause I find that she's like me at the point that we love eating and we cherish the food a lot, even i. If someone says something bad about her eating habits she no longer be friend with them orstays their friend or she just ignores them, just like me.

FAt first, I liked her as I can fifound she like me at the point thatcould be just like me because we love eating and cherish the food a lot, even i. If someone says something bad about her eating habits, she will no longer be friends with them or just ignore them, just like me.

"First" makes it sound like you're going to start listing things.

First, I like her as I can find she like me at the pointnd we are similar in the sense that, we both love eating and cherish the food a lot, even if someone says something bad about her eating habits, she no longer bestops being friends with them or just ignores them, just like me.

我猜:First, I like her as I can find she like me at the point that we love eating and cherish thewe both love eating yummy food a lot, e. Even if someone say something bad about people criticize her eating habits, she no longer be friend with them or just ignores them, just like me.

But then I influenced by her positive.


But then I was influenced by her positiveity.

But then II was influenced by her positive energy.

But then I I have been influenced by her positive.ity.

Not only how she dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our life, the way we make our life better in my own way.


NI admire not only how she has dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our lifeves, the way we make our lifeves better in myour own way.

Not only in how she dealts with troubles in life, but also the way wshe enjoy ous her life, the way wshe make ous her life better in myher own way.

I assume it's because she's doing all of these things that it influences you.

Not only how she dealt with troubles in life but also the way wshe enjoy ous her life, the way wshe make ous her life better in myher own way.

i assume you are still talking about her

Not only how更流畅:The ways she dealt with troubles in life but also the way we enjoy our life, the way we make our life better in my own way.as well as the way she lives inspires me.

And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearing her plan for the future.


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And recently, I find she'sr pretty funny and interesting especially after hearing her plans for the future.

And recently, I find she's pretty funny and interesting after hearingenjoy listening to her humor and her plans for the future.

I think she is the real INFLUENCER because she give me positive and motivation to make progress in my life.


I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she give me positive and motivation to make progress in my own life.

I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she gives me positiveity and motivation to make progress in my life.

I think she is thea real INFLUENCER because she gives me positiveity and motivation to make progress in my life.

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