May 21, 2020
I ended up not writing journal everyday even I mentioned to write it everyday at previous journal. I will try to study English here as much as possible.
It has extended the shelter in place orders in my area until the end of May. I go out for only grocery shopping and walking around my home or beach. My back is getting hurt since I've been staying at home and keeping sitting the chair during work from March, so I started doing Yoga and working out from Youtube. Also, I set up some goals that accomplish during this quarantine. It is that read some books and finish learning programming from online courses. I hope I can complete my tasks until lockdown ends!
My quarantine life
I ended up not writing a journal entry everyday even I mentioned tothough I said I would write it every day in at previous journal entry.
If you use "mentioned to," the reader expects the next word to be the person you spoke to.
I will try to study English here as much as possible.
IMy government has extended the shelter in place orders in my area until the end of May.
Alternately, "In my area, the shelter in place orders have been extended until the end of May." This version is in the passive voice. If you use active voice, you need to specify who is doing the action.
I go out for only for grocery shopping and walking around my home or beach.
My back is gettingstarted hurting since I've been staying at home and keeping sitting thein a chair during work from March, so I started doing Yoga and working out from Youtube.¶
Also, I set up some goals thato accomplish during this quarantine.
It is that plan to read some books and finish learning programming from online courses.
I hope I can complete my tasks untilbefore lockdown ends!
Alternately, "I hope I can work on my tasks until lockdown ends!"
Feedback
Good job!
My quarantine life
I ended up not writing journal everyday even though I mentioned to write it everyday athat I would in my previous journal.
I will try to study English here as much as possible.
It has extended tThe shelter in place orders was extended in my area until the end of May.
I only go out for only grocery shopping and walking around my home or the beach.
I only go out for groceries, walking around the block, or going to the beach.
Also, I set up some goals thato accomplish during this quarantine.
ItWhich is thato read some books and finish learnmy online course ing programming from online courses.
I hope I can complete my taskgoals until the lock-down ends!
goals feels more personal
Feedback
You can definitely do it. Keep it up!
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It has extended the shelter in place orders in my area until the end of May.
Alternately, "In my area, the shelter in place orders have been extended until the end of May." This version is in the passive voice. If you use active voice, you need to specify who is doing the action. |
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I go out for only grocery shopping and walking around my home or beach. I only go out for I only go out for groceries, walking around the block, or going to the beach. I go out |
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My back is getting hurt since I've been staying at home and keeping sitting the chair during work from March, so I started doing Yoga and working out from Youtube. My back |
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Also, I set up some goals that accomplish during this quarantine. Also, I set up some goals t Also, I set up some goals t |
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It is that read some books and finish learning programming from online courses.
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I hope I can complete my tasks until lockdown ends! I hope I can complete my goals feels more personal I hope I can complete my tasks Alternately, "I hope I can work on my tasks until lockdown ends!" |
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