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yulyolarte

Aug. 8, 2023

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My name is Yuly, i have twenty nine years old, i am studyn 8 semester of administración comercial y financiera, my expectation about this new English level is learning many words. My hobby favorite is listen music and have exercise.
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My name is Yuly, i haveand I am twenty -nine years old, i. I am studyn 8 semester ofing administración comercial y financiera, my expectation abou for 8 semesters. I expect, that I will learn many words at this new English level is learning many words.

Do you mean that you have been studying for 8 semesters, or that the course goes for 8 semesters? Additionally, the last sentence sounds more natural if it is phrased like this. If you want to use the word expectation, the correct preposition in this context is of.

My hobby favorite hobby is listening to music and have exerciseing.

Thank you some much

My name is Yuly, i haveI'm twenty nine years old, iI am studyning 8 semesters of administración comercial y financiera, mCommercial Administration and Finance. My expectation abouts for this new English level is learning many words.

My hobby favorite is listening to music and have exerciseing.

Thank you some much

My presentaSelf-Introduction

The first letter of all verbs, nouns, adjectives, and adverbs in the title is capitalized in English.

My name is Yuly, i have and I'm twenty -nine years old, i. I am studyn 8on my 8th semester of administración comercial y financiera, my expectation aboutstudying business administration and finances. My hope for this new English level is to learning many new words.

My hobby favorite is listening to music and have exerciseing.

Thank you some much!

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My presentation


My presentaSelf-Introduction

The first letter of all verbs, nouns, adjectives, and adverbs in the title is capitalized in English.

My name is Yuly, i have twenty nine years old, i am studyn 8 semester of administración comercial y financiera, my expectation about this new English level is learning many words.


My name is Yuly, i have and I'm twenty -nine years old, i. I am studyn 8on my 8th semester of administración comercial y financiera, my expectation aboutstudying business administration and finances. My hope for this new English level is to learning many new words.

My name is Yuly, i haveI'm twenty nine years old, iI am studyning 8 semesters of administración comercial y financiera, mCommercial Administration and Finance. My expectation abouts for this new English level is learning many words.

My name is Yuly, i haveand I am twenty -nine years old, i. I am studyn 8 semester ofing administración comercial y financiera, my expectation abou for 8 semesters. I expect, that I will learn many words at this new English level is learning many words.

Do you mean that you have been studying for 8 semesters, or that the course goes for 8 semesters? Additionally, the last sentence sounds more natural if it is phrased like this. If you want to use the word expectation, the correct preposition in this context is of.

My hobby favorite is listen music and have exercise.


My hobby favorite is listening to music and have exerciseing.

My hobby favorite is listening to music and have exerciseing.

My hobby favorite hobby is listening to music and have exerciseing.

Thank some much


Thank you some much!

Thank you some much

Thank you some much

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