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BlackGlasses

Oct. 21, 2022

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What are your plans for the weekend?
My plans for the weekend

First I need to study for my highschool and I also will studiy physics for my own. That's my number one priority.

I will take photos for my photografy course following my studies. I'm so excited!!

I want to prioritize myself because "we are not human doing, we are human being".

After that I will knitt some amigurumis for my sister, she wants bears from the program we bare bears, she said she'll pay me but I love her so I'll do it for free.

Thanks for helping me correcting this :).

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My plans for the weekend

First, I need to study for my high school and I also will studiy physics foron my own. time.

For your high school...what? Here, you didn't really specify. Typically, one would say either quiz, exam, or test.

That's my number onehighest priority.

I willNext, I plan to take photos for my photografphy course following my. I'll do this after I have finished studiesying.

I'm so excited!!

I want to prioritize myself because "most of all, as we are not human dobeings, we arenot human bedoing"s.

Typically, idioms and sayings are put into quotes when writing. (i.e. I warned my brother not to count his chickens before the eggs have hatched).

After that I will knitt some amigurumis for my sister, s. She wants the bears from the program w"We bBare bBears, s." She said she'll pay me, but I love her so much that I'll do it for free.

Thanks for helping me correcting this :).

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Again, great wording! You're getting better and better with each entry! Keep up the great work!

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 22, 2022

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Thank you!! I like you, you're a great teacher.

I will take photos for my photografy course following my studies.

I willNext, I plan to take photos for my photografphy course following my. I'll do this after I have finished studiesying.

I'm so excited!!

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My plans for the weekend

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First I need to study for my highschool and I also will studiy physics for my own.

First, I need to study for my high school and I also will studiy physics foron my own. time.

For your high school...what? Here, you didn't really specify. Typically, one would say either quiz, exam, or test.

That's my nomber one priority.

I want to prioritize myself because "we are not human doing, we are human being".

I want to prioritize myself because "most of all, as we are not human dobeings, we arenot human bedoing"s.

Typically, idioms and sayings are put into quotes when writing. (i.e. I warned my brother not to count his chickens before the eggs have hatched).

After that I will knitt some amigurumis for my sister, she wants bears from the program we bare bears, she said she'll pay me but I love her so I'll do it for free.

After that I will knitt some amigurumis for my sister, s. She wants the bears from the program w"We bBare bBears, s." She said she'll pay me, but I love her so much that I'll do it for free.

Thanks for helping me correcting this :).

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That's my number one priority.

That's my number onehighest priority.

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