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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 18, 2025

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MY PLANNING THIS NIGHT

I'm really excited right now because today my football team and I have been trying to search people who wanted to play tonight however, as it's summer and boiling hot. It must be said that it's really tough to find players who want to take a risk in this situation because of the high temperatures.
I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that it would be imposible to achieve it but while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad. I'm really happy, give me wishes because today I may dye because of a heat stroke.

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I'm really excited right now because today my football team and I have been trying to search people who wanted to play tonight however, as it's summer and boiling hot.

I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that it would be impossible to achieve it but while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad.

I'm really happy, give me wishes. Wish me luck because today I may dye becausie of a heat stroke.

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Good job :)

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 19, 2025

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Thank you so much

I'm really excited (anxious) right now because today my football team and I have been trying to searchfind people who wcanted to play tonight h. However, aspeople are difficult to find because it's summer and boiling hot outside.

Maybe you mean anxious rather than exciting? anxious is more commonly negative excitement, like needing members for sports team in a short timeframe.

It must be said (it goes without saying) that it's really tough to find players who want to take a risk in this situation because of the high temperatures.

Be safe playing! You must be committed to play in the heat!

I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that ithere would be imposible to achieve it butno way we could find the players we need. However, while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad.

Ah! I got an answer to my previous correction!

I'm really happy, give me wishes because today I may dyie because of a heat stroke.

stay hydrated!

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good job! I presume you mean soccer and not American football? How long have you been playing?

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JAVIER_MARTINEZ

Aug. 19, 2025

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Yess, I play soccer every week. I've been playing soccer since Spain won the World Cup, it was really important in our country and many people started to play it. Anyway, in Spain schools there are lots of extracurricular activities like soccer, so I think that I would have played it althought we hadn't won anything.
Thank you so much for your interest and your feedback!

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d_t_a0811

Aug. 19, 2025

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That's great! It's good to have a hobby you can do for so long!
No problem!

MY PLANNING THIS NIGHT


I'm really excited right now because today my football team and I have been trying to search people who wanted to play tonight however, as it's summer and boiling hot.


I'm really excited (anxious) right now because today my football team and I have been trying to searchfind people who wcanted to play tonight h. However, aspeople are difficult to find because it's summer and boiling hot outside.

Maybe you mean anxious rather than exciting? anxious is more commonly negative excitement, like needing members for sports team in a short timeframe.

I'm really excited right now because today my football team and I have been trying to search people who wanted to play tonight however, as it's summer and boiling hot.

It must be said that it's really tough to find players who want to take a risk in this situation because of the high temperatures.


It must be said (it goes without saying) that it's really tough to find players who want to take a risk in this situation because of the high temperatures.

Be safe playing! You must be committed to play in the heat!

I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that it would be imposible to achieve it but while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad.


I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that ithere would be imposible to achieve it butno way we could find the players we need. However, while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad.

Ah! I got an answer to my previous correction!

I went to the gym at 7 o'clock because I thought that it would be impossible to achieve it but while I was doing an excercise, Apa, who is one of the guys that was going to play with today, told us that he had found 4 players to complete our squad.

I'm really happy, give me wishes because today I may dye because of a heat stroke.


I'm really happy, give me wishes because today I may dyie because of a heat stroke.

stay hydrated!

I'm really happy, give me wishes. Wish me luck because today I may dye becausie of a heat stroke.

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