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This summer, i have planed do a travel to Europa for three weeks. My itinerary include visit many cities in diferents countrys. First, I will go to París, Francia, where I stay to four days exploring the monuments historics, museums and enjoying to the gastronomy local. After, i will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stay three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibrating night life.
After, i will travel to Berlín, Alemania, where i planed stay for five days. Here, want dive in the rich history of the city, visiting the brandeburg gate and the Berlin wall, i will go to Praga, República Checa, for four days. I stay excited for see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for the brigde of Carlos.
Finally, i will close my travel in Roma, Italia, where i will go one week. In Roma, I want visit the Coliseum, and the Vatican and try the autentic pizza and italian pasta. I stay very excited for this travel, as it will be a oportunitu to know news cultures, and practice languages and create unforgettable memories.

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My plan for the future

This sSummer, iI have planned dto ago travelling to Europae for three weeks.

You would say “to go travelling” instead of “to do a travel”.
Make sure to capitalise seasons like Summer, and also I.
Other than that just a few minor spelling mistakes.

My itinerary includes visiting many cities in differents countryies.

My itinerary is singular so
include—>includeS (conjugating it)
Visit—>visiting (since you’ve already used a verb with “includes”
Differents—>different (adjectives don’t change to match the noun in English - “differents” doesn’t exist)

First, I will go to Paríis, Franciae, where I will stay tofor four days exploring the monuments historichistoric monuments, museums and enjoying to thehe local gastronomy local.

“For” is used for periods of time. If you used “to” to express time, it would be in a case like “for four to six days”.
Adjectives always go before the noun in English.
Since you are talking about the future, you would add “will” to a lot of these sentences (for example “I stay” —> “I will stay”).


Optional: change “gastronomy” to “cuisine”. While gastronomy is right, it’s used mainly in more formal situations, and in everyday life a word like “cuisine” would be more common.

After, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stayNetherlands, to spend three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

Capitalise the “I”.
Make sure to use the English name for countries.
Could also replace “for stay three days” with “to stay for three days”, but my suggestion (“to spend three days”) would be more natural.

After, iI will travel to Berlíin, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

Could also replace “I planned stay” with “I have planned to stay”

Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandenburg gGate and the Berlin wWall. Then, iI will go to Praga,ue, Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

You need to have a subject like “I”.
Make sure to capitalise the names of monuments.
“Dive in” would be used where you don’t say anything afterwards (for example “Dive in!” or “I want to dive in”) but since you say “the rich history” after “dive in”, the “in” would change to “into” (as in “into (a place/thing)”

I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and to walking for the brigde of Carlos on the Charles Bridge.

Finally, iI will closeend my travel in Romae, Italiay, where iI will go for one week.

“End” would make more sense than “close” here.

In Romae, I want to visit the Coliosseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic pizza and iItalian pasta.

The Colosseum and the Vatican are both related to the verb “to visit” here (as in you want to visit both of these places), but “and try the…” is the start of a new clause (or a different idea) so it should have a comma in front.


Optional:
“…and try the authentic Italian pizza and pasta.”

I stayam very excited for this travel, as it will be an opportunituy to get to know news cultures, and practice languages and create unforgettable memories.

“Stay” is used when you don’t move from a certain place. Another option which would replace “stay” and would make more sense here is “remain”, but that isn’t particularly natural.
Could also say “to learn about” instead of “to get to know”
I deleted the “and” between “get to know new cultures” and “practice languages” because it sounds better to limit the usage of “and” to once in a sentence. Since you were listing things you will get to do, there is no need to have “and” between every single idea.

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This sounds like it’ll be a really fun trip! Have fun!

My main advice for improving English:
Make sure to capitalise words like I, and also the names of seasons or monuments.
Try to find the English name for specific cities, countries and continents and use those instead.
Adjectives don’t change depending on whether a noun is plural or not, and they always stay in front of the noun that they describe.

But overall I think you did really well! English is hard sometimes but you were really close to getting it right a lot of the time. Keep up the good work!

My plan future plans

This summer, iI have planned dto a travel to Europae for three weeks.

Or, "I plan to travel..."

My itinerary includes visiting many cities in differents countryies.

First, I will go to Paríis, Franciae, where I'll stay tofor four days exploring the monuments historichistorical monuments, museums and enjoying to the gastronomy localhe local cuisine.

"gastronomy" is not a very commonly used word. We mostly say "cuisine"

Afterwards, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stay in the Netherlands, and spend three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

Los Países Bajos = The Netherlands

AfterThen, iI will travel to Berlíin, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

Alemania = Germany.

Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandenburg gate and the Berlin wall, i. I will go to Praga,ue in the Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

Instead of "dive in" you could also say "Immerse myself in"
República Checa = Czech Republic; Praga = Prague

I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for across the brigdge of Carlos.

Finally, iI will closeround up my travels in Romae, Italiay, where iI will gostay for one week.

You could also say, "round up my trip" or "conclude my journey/travels/trip"
Italia = Italy

In Roma, I want to visit the Coliosseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic, Italian pizza and italian pasta.

I stayam very excited for this travel,ip as it will be an opportunituy to knowlearn about news cultures, and practice languages, and create unforgettable memories.

Feedback

Awesome!

My plan future plan

This summer, i have planed do as to travel to Europae for three weeks.

My itinerary include visits many cities in differents countryies.

First, I will go to París, Franciae, where I will spend (or stay tofor) four days exploring the monuments historichistoric monuments, museums, and enjoying to the gastronomy locallocal food (or cuisine).

After, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, forNetherlands to stay for three days touring the canals, visiting museums, and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

After, iI will travel to Berlín, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandeburg gGate and the Berlin wWall. Afterwards, iI will go to Praga,ue, Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for the brigde of Carlos on the Charles Bridge.

Finally, iI will closeomplete (or end) my travel in Romae, Italiay, where iI will gostay for one week.

In Romae, I want visit the Coliseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic Italian pizza and italian pasta.

I stayam very excited for this travel, as it will be a opportunituy to get to know news cultures, and practice languages, and create unforgettable memories.

Feedback

Sounds like a fun trip!

My plan future


My plan future plan

My plan future plans

My plan for the future

This summer, i have planed do a travel to Europa for three weeks.


This summer, i have planed do as to travel to Europae for three weeks.

This summer, iI have planned dto a travel to Europae for three weeks.

Or, "I plan to travel..."

This sSummer, iI have planned dto ago travelling to Europae for three weeks.

You would say “to go travelling” instead of “to do a travel”. Make sure to capitalise seasons like Summer, and also I. Other than that just a few minor spelling mistakes.

My itinerary include visit many cities in diferents countrys.


My itinerary include visits many cities in differents countryies.

My itinerary includes visiting many cities in differents countryies.

My itinerary includes visiting many cities in differents countryies.

My itinerary is singular so include—>includeS (conjugating it) Visit—>visiting (since you’ve already used a verb with “includes” Differents—>different (adjectives don’t change to match the noun in English - “differents” doesn’t exist)

First, I will go to París, Francia, where I stay to four days exploring the monuments historics, museums and enjoying to the gastronomy local.


First, I will go to París, Franciae, where I will spend (or stay tofor) four days exploring the monuments historichistoric monuments, museums, and enjoying to the gastronomy locallocal food (or cuisine).

First, I will go to Paríis, Franciae, where I'll stay tofor four days exploring the monuments historichistorical monuments, museums and enjoying to the gastronomy localhe local cuisine.

"gastronomy" is not a very commonly used word. We mostly say "cuisine"

First, I will go to Paríis, Franciae, where I will stay tofor four days exploring the monuments historichistoric monuments, museums and enjoying to thehe local gastronomy local.

“For” is used for periods of time. If you used “to” to express time, it would be in a case like “for four to six days”. Adjectives always go before the noun in English. Since you are talking about the future, you would add “will” to a lot of these sentences (for example “I stay” —> “I will stay”). Optional: change “gastronomy” to “cuisine”. While gastronomy is right, it’s used mainly in more formal situations, and in everyday life a word like “cuisine” would be more common.

After, i will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stay three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibrating night life.


After, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, forNetherlands to stay for three days touring the canals, visiting museums, and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

Afterwards, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stay in the Netherlands, and spend three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

Los Países Bajos = The Netherlands

After, iI will take a train to Amsterdam, Paises bajos, for stayNetherlands, to spend three days touring the canals, visiting museums and enjoying of the vibranting night life.

Capitalise the “I”. Make sure to use the English name for countries. Could also replace “for stay three days” with “to stay for three days”, but my suggestion (“to spend three days”) would be more natural.

After, i will travel to Berlín, Alemania, where i planed stay for five days.


After, iI will travel to Berlín, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

AfterThen, iI will travel to Berlíin, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

Alemania = Germany.

After, iI will travel to Berlíin, AleGermaniay, where iI planed to stay for five days.

Could also replace “I planned stay” with “I have planned to stay”

Here, want dive in the rich history of the city, visiting the brandeburg gate and the Berlin wall, i will go to Praga, República Checa, for four days.


Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandeburg gGate and the Berlin wWall. Afterwards, iI will go to Praga,ue, Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandenburg gate and the Berlin wall, i. I will go to Praga,ue in the Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

Instead of "dive in" you could also say "Immerse myself in" República Checa = Czech Republic; Praga = Prague

Here, I want to dive into the rich history of the city, visiting the bBrandenburg gGate and the Berlin wWall. Then, iI will go to Praga,ue, Czech Repúublica Checa, for four days.

You need to have a subject like “I”. Make sure to capitalise the names of monuments. “Dive in” would be used where you don’t say anything afterwards (for example “Dive in!” or “I want to dive in”) but since you say “the rich history” after “dive in”, the “in” would change to “into” (as in “into (a place/thing)”

I stay excited for see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for the brigde of Carlos.


I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for the brigde of Carlos on the Charles Bridge.

I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and walking for across the brigdge of Carlos.

I stayam excited forto see the beautiful gothic architecture and to walking for the brigde of Carlos on the Charles Bridge.

Finally, i will close my travel in Roma, Italia, where i will go one week.


Finally, iI will closeomplete (or end) my travel in Romae, Italiay, where iI will gostay for one week.

Finally, iI will closeround up my travels in Romae, Italiay, where iI will gostay for one week.

You could also say, "round up my trip" or "conclude my journey/travels/trip" Italia = Italy

Finally, iI will closeend my travel in Romae, Italiay, where iI will go for one week.

“End” would make more sense than “close” here.

In Roma, I want visit the Coliseum, and the Vatican and try the autentic pizza and italian pasta.


In Romae, I want visit the Coliseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic Italian pizza and italian pasta.

In Roma, I want to visit the Coliosseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic, Italian pizza and italian pasta.

In Romae, I want to visit the Coliosseum, and the Vatican, and try the authentic pizza and iItalian pasta.

The Colosseum and the Vatican are both related to the verb “to visit” here (as in you want to visit both of these places), but “and try the…” is the start of a new clause (or a different idea) so it should have a comma in front. Optional: “…and try the authentic Italian pizza and pasta.”

I stay very excited for this travel, as it will be a oportunitu to know news cultures, and practice languages and create unforgettable memories.


I stayam very excited for this travel, as it will be a opportunituy to get to know news cultures, and practice languages, and create unforgettable memories.

I stayam very excited for this travel,ip as it will be an opportunituy to knowlearn about news cultures, and practice languages, and create unforgettable memories.

I stayam very excited for this travel, as it will be an opportunituy to get to know news cultures, and practice languages and create unforgettable memories.

“Stay” is used when you don’t move from a certain place. Another option which would replace “stay” and would make more sense here is “remain”, but that isn’t particularly natural. Could also say “to learn about” instead of “to get to know” I deleted the “and” between “get to know new cultures” and “practice languages” because it sounds better to limit the usage of “and” to once in a sentence. Since you were listing things you will get to do, there is no need to have “and” between every single idea.

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