Feb. 26, 2025
My plan
Yesterday, I decided that I stopped eating sweets and snacks. However, One of my colleagues gave them to me during working. and, When I arrived at home, I found chocolate on the table. Of course I ate them soon. Eventually, my plan had broken soon.
Yesterday, I decided that Io stopped eating sweets and snacks.
'to decide to...'
However, Oone of my colleagues gave them to me during working.
and, Wwhen I arrived at home, I found chocolate on the table.
Of course I ate them soon after.
Or: Of course, it wasn't long until I ate them.
EventuallyIn the end, my plan had broken soon after it began.
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It happens! Great writing!
March 13, 2025
Thank you very much for your sentence. I am so happy.
Yesterday, I decided that Io stopped eating sweets and snacks.
However, One of my colleagues gave themsome to me during working.
and, When I arrived at home, I found chocolate on the table.
Of course it wasn't long until I ate them soon.
The original phrase was difficult to understand, I think this is what you mean to say
Eventually, my plan had broken soonquickly failed.
A plan can't "break", you would say it "failed"
Feb. 27, 2025
Thank you very much for your explanation. It is useful for me.
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Yesterday, I decided that I stopped eating sweets and snacks. Yesterday, I decided t Yesterday, I decided t 'to decide to...' |
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However, One of my colleagues gave them to me during working. However, One of my colleagues gave However, |
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and, When I arrived at home, I found chocolate on the table. This sentence has been marked as perfect! and, |
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Of course I ate them soon. Of course it wasn't long until I ate them The original phrase was difficult to understand, I think this is what you mean to say Of course I ate them soon after. Or: Of course, it wasn't long until I ate them. |
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Eventually, my plan had broken soon. Eventually, my plan had A plan can't "break", you would say it "failed"
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