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Oct. 7, 2020

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Today, I was a little busy and I'm tired, so I'll write short. Now is 6:30 PM in Japan. After writing this, I will do some workout. Today is a day of pull up and squat. I workout at home because it is free and not burdensome. Then, I will take a shower and make dinner. The main dish is a beef stew. I bought a pressure cooker, so it won't take time. After dinner, I'm going to study Quantum Mechanics a bit for a tomorrow mini-quiz and to read a book before I go to bed. I usually sleep at 11:30 PM.

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My Plan

Today, I was a little busy and I'm, which made me tired, so I'll only write a short journal.

NowIt is 6:30 PM in Japan right now.

After writing this journal, I will do somea workout.

Today is a day ofI will do pull -ups and squats.

I work out at home because it is free and not burdensome.

"workout" is a noun, while "work out" is the verb phrase. I might write "convenient" instead of "not burdensome."

Then, I will take a shower and make dinner.

The main dish iswill be a beef stew.

I bought a pressure cooker, so it won't take much time.

After dinner, I'm going to study Quantum Mechanics a bit for a tomorrow mini-quiz and tobecause I have a mini-quiz tomorrow. Then I will read a book before I go to bed.

I usually go to sleep at 11:30 PM.

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ponta

Oct. 8, 2020

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Today, I was a little busy and I'm tired, so I'll write short.


Today, I was a little busy and I'm, which made me tired, so I'll only write a short journal.

Now is 6:30 PM in Japan.


NowIt is 6:30 PM in Japan right now.

After writing this, I will do some workout.


After writing this journal, I will do somea workout.

Today is a day of pull up and squat.


Today is a day ofI will do pull -ups and squats.

I workout at home because it is free and not burdensome.


I work out at home because it is free and not burdensome.

"workout" is a noun, while "work out" is the verb phrase. I might write "convenient" instead of "not burdensome."

Then, I will take a shower and make dinner.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The main dish is a beef stew.


The main dish iswill be a beef stew.

I bought a pressure cooker, so it won't take time.


I bought a pressure cooker, so it won't take much time.

After dinner, I'm going to study Quantum Mechanics a bit for a tomorrow mini-quiz and to read a book before I go to bed.


After dinner, I'm going to study Quantum Mechanics a bit for a tomorrow mini-quiz and tobecause I have a mini-quiz tomorrow. Then I will read a book before I go to bed.

I usually sleep at 11:30 PM.


I usually go to sleep at 11:30 PM.

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