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courageuse19

Jan. 8, 2022

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My phrases.

Today, I learn a lot of words. I would like to write in the phrases.

To pay a visit:

I will pay a visit father's friend, he is sick.

I pay a visit a friend, it wa a long time no see.

-To feel:

I feel there a lot of surprise will happen. I am optimistic. I want to trust me. Be patient!

I'm focus on my target.

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I would like to write in the phrases.

I will pay a visit to my father's friend, since he is sick.

I payid a visit to a friend, it wahad been a long time no see.

if its past you have to change the tense, and no see is not something you write, more something you say

I feel there will be a lot of surprise will happen.s in future

You would be better to say ' I think' there will be xyz
I feel is more for things like I feel sick, I feel happy, I feel scared,

I want to trust meyself.

I'm focusing on my target.

This does not sound right maybe say I am focusing on my target , or I will focus on my target

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keep up the good work

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Aviva

Jan. 9, 2022

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I'm focusing on my target.

Or "I'm focused on my target."

My phrases.

Today, I'm learning a lot of words.

Or "I learned"

I would like to write in them in phrases.

To pay a visit:

I will pay a visit to my father's friend, he is sick.

I pay a visit to a friend, it wahas been a long time no see.since I've seen them.

"Long time no see" is a set phrase that is usually only used by itself, not in a sentence.

-To feel:

I feel there will be a lot of surprise will happens.

I am optimistic.

I want to trust meyself.

Be patient!

I'm focused on my target.

courageuse19's avatar
courageuse19

Jan. 8, 2022

2

Thanks a bunch.

My phrases.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today, I learn a lot of words.


Today, I'm learning a lot of words.

Or "I learned"

I would like to write in the phrases.


I would like to write in them in phrases.

I would like to write in the phrases.

To pay a visit:


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I will pay a visit father's friend, he is sick.


I will pay a visit to my father's friend, he is sick.

I will pay a visit to my father's friend, since he is sick.

I pay a visit a friend, it wa a long time no see.


I pay a visit to a friend, it wahas been a long time no see.since I've seen them.

"Long time no see" is a set phrase that is usually only used by itself, not in a sentence.

I payid a visit to a friend, it wahad been a long time no see.

if its past you have to change the tense, and no see is not something you write, more something you say

-To feel:


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I feel there a lot of surprise will happen.


I feel there will be a lot of surprise will happens.

I feel there will be a lot of surprise will happen.s in future

You would be better to say ' I think' there will be xyz I feel is more for things like I feel sick, I feel happy, I feel scared,

I am optimistic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I want to trust me.


I want to trust meyself.

I want to trust meyself.

Be patient!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm focus on my target.


I'm focused on my target.

I'm focusing on my target.

This does not sound right maybe say I am focusing on my target , or I will focus on my target

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