I have two dogs, and I have loved them since I adopted them.

Another option: I have two dogs who I have loved since adopting them.

Now, I have been withhad them for almost three years.

In the shelter, they told us they were already friends and we didn't have the heart to separate them.

If the decision not to separate them was your decision, then this sentence works great. If it was the shelter's decision (at least here sometimes they will say you have to take both or neither), then I would say: "The shelter told us they were already bonded and they didn't have the heart to separate them."

and if the otherIf one needs a bath because it made a mess outside in the garden, the other one needs a bath too!

Another good option would be to change the second half to "the other one wants a bath too" (since they wouldn't technically need one, but it still underlines how they want to match in every way).

Pinky, the little one, is kind of a Chihuahua, but a little taller, and her personality is completely a Chihuahua,: she barks at everyone, and fears anything bigger than a shoe.

I wasn't sure if Pinky is perhaps a Chihuahua mix or just an unusually tall Chihuahua? "kind of a Chihuahua" could be either, potentially.

She always runs from here to there, sheand is a hyperactive dog!

On the other hand, we have Buba, who is the calmest dog I have ever met!.

You don't technically need "who is" in this sentence, but there is nothing wrong with including it either.

Even wWhen someone is petting her and for some reason that person stops the pettingstops, she requests more!.

She pushes her mouth into your leg or hand and finally. If that doesn't work, she uses her best love weapon, her: puppy eyes.

But as I was saying, she is very different fromthan Pinky.

She never barks at anyone or anything unless it is aexcept other dogs.

Also, she never stands up from her bed unless it is sometime for food or walking times.

In summary, Pinky could stay all day outsideoutside all day running and fetchasing birds, andbut Buba could stay all day sleeping in her bed and eating.

But the catch is they need to be together, cause if not anyor neither would be happy,. Pinky would be searching for Buba and Buba would not rest until findingshe found Pinky.

Maybe each other couldthey both hate the habits of the other dog, but they have learned how to enjoy each other's company so much, that they can't imagine a day without the other.

I have two dogs, and I have loved them ever since I adopted them.

Since that day, they have been together for everything!

aAnd if the other one needs a bath cause it made a mess outside in the garden, the other one needs a bath too!

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She pushes her mouth into your leg or hand and finally, she uses her best love weapon, her puppy eyes.

Also, she never standgets up from her bed unless it is some food or walking time.

In summary, Pinky could stay all day outside running and fetching birds, and Buba could stay all day sleeping in her bed and eating.

You could also write "To summarize, ...."

But the catch is they need to be together, cause if not an, they wouldn't be happy,. Pinky would be searching for Buba and Buba would not rest until finding Pinky.

Maybe each othery could hate the habits of the other, but they have learned how to enjoy each other so much, that they can't imagine a day without the other.

Now, IThey have beenlived with themus for almost three years.

“I have been with them” sounds as if you’re dating them. You would normally say “I have been with my fiancé for almost three years” for example.

Since that day they have been together for everythingadopting them they are inseparable!

I don’t know what day you’re referring to.

and if the other one needs a bath cause it made a mess outside in the garden, the other one needs a bath too!

Normally people refer to their pets with genders. Instead of “it”, I would use “he/she”.

Pinky, the little one, is kind oflike a Cchihuahua, but a little taller, and. However, her personality is completely like a Chihuahua,. She barks at everyone, and fears anything bigger than a shoe.

I split up the sentences, and used the connector “however” to signal a comparison.

Even when someone is petting her and for some reason that person stops the petting her, she requests more!

“The petting” sounds a bit strange. “Petting” doesn’t need an article.

Also, she never standgets up from her bed unless it is some food or walking time.

It’s more natural to say “gets up” instead of standing up from bed.

But the catch is they need to be together, because if not any would be happy, Pinkthey are not together they aren’t happy. Furthermore, they would bestart searching for Buba and Bubaeach other, and would non’t rest until finding Pinky.being reunited again.

“Any would be happy” sounds better as “they won’t be happy”. “Any” is more general, and in this context you’re referring to your dogs. Hence, “they”. The last sentence was complicated to read, so I tried to rephrase it accurately while keeping the original sentiment.

Maybe each other could hate the habits of the other, but they have learned how to enjoy each other so much, that they can't imagine a day with the otherIt’s surprising that they don’t hate each other’s personalities….

I’m not sure how to explain my correction, but I believe this is what you were trying to say.

I have two dogs, and I have loved them ever since I adopted them.

Now, I have been withhad them for almost three years now.

Since that day, they have been together for everything!

If one has to go to the vet, the other musthas to be there too!

What you wrote is correct, but this sounds more natural.

aAnd if the other one needs a bath because itshe made a mess outside in the garden, the other one needshas to take a bath too!

Pinky, the little one, is kind of like a Chihuahua, but a little taller, and her personality is completely like a Chihuahua,: she barks at everyone, and fears anything bigger than a shoe.

She always runs from here to there,all around; she is a hyperactive dog!

She is super sweet with humanspeople.

Even whenif someone is petting her and for some reason that perbut stops for whatever reason, stops the petting, she requestshe'll beg for more!

She pushes her mouth into your leg or hand and fin, eventually, she uses her best love weapon,greatest weapon of love: her puppy dog eyes.

Could you resist it?

I'm never able to ignore that, and I end up petting her for hours.

She never barks at anyone or anything unless it is another dog.

Also, she never standgets up from her bed unless it is somefor food or walking timetime to walk.

InTo summary up, Pinky could stay all day outsideoutside all day running and fetching birds, and Buba could staypend all day sleeping in her bed and eating.

"In summary" sounds very formal compared to the rest of your essay.

But the catch is they need to be together, because if not anyotherwise neither would be happy,. Pinky would be searching for Buba and Buba would not rest until finding Pinky.

Maybe each other could hate the habits of the otherThey may hate each other's habits, but they have learned how to enjoy each other so much, that they can't imagine a day without the other.