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yaw

Feb. 8, 2023

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green it is eyes of my cat, it is favorite activity is sleep, when he is hungry to near me and make my tricks for me to give him food, one day I went of shopping and I left him alone, when he returned he had made a mess in the kitchen

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green it isThe eyes of my cat, it i are green. Its favorite activity is sleep, w. When he is hungry toand is near me and make my, he does tricks for me to give him food, o. One day I went of shopping and I left him alone, w. When heI returned, he had made a mess in the kitchen

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Good work!

green it is eyes of my cat, it is favorite activity is sleep, when he is hungry to near me and make my tricks for me to give him food, one day I went of shopping and I left him alone, when he returned he had made a mess in the kitchen

My cat's eyes are green. Its favorite activity is to sleep. When he is hungry, he comes to me and does tricks for me so I will give him some food. One day I went shopping and I left him alone and when I got home, he had made a mess in the kitchen.

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Your cat is adorable. He's doing what cats are supposed to do. :--)

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yaw

Feb. 9, 2023

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jajaja thanks for you help

green it is eyes of my cat, it My cat's eyes are green. His favorite activity is sleep, wing. When he is hungry to, (he goes?) near me and make mydoes tricks for me toso I give him food, o. One day, I went of shopping and I left him alone, w. When he returned, he had made a mess in the kitchen.

using "'s" at the end of a word is making a word possessive; or saying that the object after the name and "'s" is theirs. You are right that it sometimes means "it is" but not always. It depends on the context! Also, try to use "," when the sentence relates, but isn't the same thing.

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Very well done! Just a few grammar errors, but it's understandable. Just a little bit more improvement to go. I believe in you (also, your cat sounds very cute)!

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yaw

Feb. 8, 2023

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Thanks you very much, you are very gentle!!

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mMy pPet

green it is eyes of my cat, it is favorite activity is sleep, when he is hungry to near me and make my tricks for me to give him food, one day I went of shopping and I left him alone, when he returned he had made a mess in the kitchen


green it is eyes of my cat, it My cat's eyes are green. His favorite activity is sleep, wing. When he is hungry to, (he goes?) near me and make mydoes tricks for me toso I give him food, o. One day, I went of shopping and I left him alone, w. When he returned, he had made a mess in the kitchen.

using "'s" at the end of a word is making a word possessive; or saying that the object after the name and "'s" is theirs. You are right that it sometimes means "it is" but not always. It depends on the context! Also, try to use "," when the sentence relates, but isn't the same thing.

green it is eyes of my cat, it is favorite activity is sleep, when he is hungry to near me and make my tricks for me to give him food, one day I went of shopping and I left him alone, when he returned he had made a mess in the kitchen

My cat's eyes are green. Its favorite activity is to sleep. When he is hungry, he comes to me and does tricks for me so I will give him some food. One day I went shopping and I left him alone and when I got home, he had made a mess in the kitchen.

green it isThe eyes of my cat, it i are green. Its favorite activity is sleep, w. When he is hungry toand is near me and make my, he does tricks for me to give him food, o. One day I went of shopping and I left him alone, w. When heI returned, he had made a mess in the kitchen

Try to use smaller sentences.

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