Nov. 3, 2025
🌙 My Personality
I'm someone who follows her feelings. Sometimes I think with my heart more than my head, but I wouldn't change that because I'm grateful that I can understand and take care of the people I love. It's difficult for me to open up emotionally, but when I do it, I give it my all.
I like routines and peaceful spaces because they make me feel like I have my own shelter. However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulse that remind myself that I'm still alive. I'm a homebody who is sensitive to environments, and I value peace.
I feel motivated to learn and grow, but relationships are more important to me. My husband, family, and loved ones come first. I get frustrated easily when things go wrong, but I give myself time to get things in order.
I want others to see me that I'm somebody friendly, funny, intelligent, and that I really love them. When I love someone, I naturally want to take care of them. 💛
🌙 Mi personalidad
Soy una persona muy guiada por lo que siente. A veces pienso demasiado con el corazón, pero no lo cambiaría, porque gracias a eso puedo entender y cuidar a las personas que amo. Me cuesta abrirme emocionalmente, aunque cuando lo hago, entrego todo de mí.
Me gusta la rutina y los espacios tranquilos, sentir que tengo mi propio refugio. Sin embargo, de vez en cuando necesito hacer algo distinto, como un pequeño impulso que me recuerda que estoy viva. Soy hogareña, sensible al ambiente y valoro mucho la paz.
Me motiva aprender y crecer, pero sobre todo me importan los vínculos. Mi pareja, mi familia y las personas que quiero siempre van primero. Cuando algo sale mal, me frustro fácilmente, aunque después dejo que el tiempo acomode las cosas.
Quisiera que los demás notaran que soy alguien amigable, divertida, inteligente y que los quiero de verdad. Cuando quiero a alguien, me nace cuidarlo. 💛
🌙 My Personality
I'm someone who follows their feelings.
Sometimes I think with my heart more than my head, but I wouldn't change that because I'm grateful that I can understand and take care of the people I love.
It's difficult for me to open up emotionally, but when I do it, I give it my all.
"it" sounds extra here. I think "...but when I do.." sounds better. No one would really notice either way, though.
I like routines and peaceful spaces because they make me feel like I have my own shelter.
However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulsejolt that remind myself that I'm still alive.
Jolt more natural here, but most people would say "as a reminder that I'm still alive".
I'm a homebody who is sensitive to my environments, and I value peace.
"Sensitive to environments" is understood but it sounds off.
I feel motivated to learn and grow, but relationships are more important to me.
My husband, family, and loved ones come first.
I get frustrated easily when things go wrong, but I give myself time to get things in order.
I want others to see me that I'm somebody friendly, funny, intelligent, and that I really love them.
When I love someone, I naturally want to take care of them. 💛
I'm someone who follows their feelings.
However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulse thatnudge to remind myself that I'm still alive.
Impulse maybe isn't the best word. Impulse is something you can hardly control (i.e. impulsive scrolling on tiktok).
Maybe "nudge" or "reminder" would be better. Though "reminder" risks being repetitive because you later use the verb "to remind".
I'm a homebody who is sensitive to environments, andso I value peace.
Makes more sense with "so" instead of "and".
I want others to see me that I'mas somebody who's friendly, funny, intelligent, and that Iwho really loves them.
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Very few mistakes, good job.
My advice is to try and connect the sentences a bit more. Maybe give examples to tie these different facts about you together. It feels a bit like you're listing things out about you without connecting them.
Good luck!
Nov. 3, 2025
Hello! Thank you for your time and corrections! I hadn't noticed that, but upon rereading, yes, it's looks like a list, hahaha.
However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulse thato remind myself that I'm still alive.
You have to change 'that' to 'to' because in this sentence, you explained why you do something different. You can use 'that', but you need to change 'myself' to 'me' = that reminds me that I'm still alive.
I want others to see me that I'm somebody friendly, funny, intelligent, and that I really love them.
Remove 'me' because it means you want others to literally 'see you'. You can still leave 'somebody' in the sentence, but removing 'somebody' makes the sentence shorter and less wordy.
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Wow, after reading about your personality, I truly realise you are a strong and loving person! Keep it up!
Nov. 3, 2025
Hello! Thank you very much for your time and reading too. Your corrections are very useful to me. And thank you too for your words :D
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I'm someone who follows her feelings. I'm someone who follows their feelings. I'm someone who follows their feelings. |
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Sometimes I think with my heart more than my head, but I wouldn't change that because I'm grateful that I can understand and take care of the people I love. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's difficult for me to open up emotionally, but when I do it, I give it my all. It's difficult for me to open up emotionally, but when I do it, I give it my all. "it" sounds extra here. I think "...but when I do.." sounds better. No one would really notice either way, though. |
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I like routines and peaceful spaces because they make me feel like I have my own shelter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulse that remind myself that I'm still alive. However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little impulse t You have to change 'that' to 'to' because in this sentence, you explained why you do something different. You can use 'that', but you need to change 'myself' to 'me' = that reminds me that I'm still alive. However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little Impulse maybe isn't the best word. Impulse is something you can hardly control (i.e. impulsive scrolling on tiktok). Maybe "nudge" or "reminder" would be better. Though "reminder" risks being repetitive because you later use the verb "to remind". However, I need to do something different from time to time, as a little Jolt more natural here, but most people would say "as a reminder that I'm still alive". |
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I'm a homebody who is sensitive to environments, and I value peace. I'm a homebody who is sensitive to environments, Makes more sense with "so" instead of "and". I'm a homebody who is sensitive to my environment "Sensitive to environments" is understood but it sounds off. |
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I feel motivated to learn and grow, but relationships are more important to me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My husband, family, and loved ones come first. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I get frustrated easily when things go wrong, but I give myself time to get things in order. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I want others to see me that I'm somebody friendly, funny, intelligent, and that I really love them. I want others to see Remove 'me' because it means you want others to literally 'see you'. You can still leave 'somebody' in the sentence, but removing 'somebody' makes the sentence shorter and less wordy. I want others to see me I want others to see |
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