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My Path of Learning English Language
My relationship with English language is very difficult. When I was a kid I really didn't understand for what I needed to learn English. I thought it was a waste of time. My first teacher English language didn't know this language. She forced me to study many different words, and sometimes she gave my homework. But she never checked my homework. When I started growing up I met with movies, more precisely I understood difference from dubbing and original sound. I has wanted to watch movies only with original sound. I watched movies with subtitles, but it was not enough for me. I realized one simply thing. I needed to start learn English. I didn't want to pay for lessons English. I believed that I could learn English solo. I was watching different lessons on YouTube, I was reading simplified books,I was using Anki for learning words. But I didn't feel any progress and my hands dropped. After a while, I tried again, and than again. And I will continue to try it.
My Path of Learning the English Language
My relationship with the English language is very difficult.
When I was a kid I really didn't understand for whatwhy I needed to learn English.
My first teacher English languageEnglish teacher didn't know thise language.
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She forced me to study many different words, and sometimes she gave mye homework.
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When I started growing up I met with movies, more precisely I understoodAs I grew up I started watching movies, and I noticed the difference frombetween dubbing and the original soundaudio.
This sentence is a bit confusing...I've given my recommendation. Hopefully it says what you meant!
I has wanted to watch movies only with original soundaudio.
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I realized one simply thing.that
I would merge this sentence with the next one to simplify your statement and make it easier to read.
I didn't want to pay for lessons EnglishEnglish lessons.
I believed that I could learn English solo.
solo is okay; it is a bit better to use the phrase "by myself."
I was watching different lessons on YouTube, I was reading simplified books, I was using Anki for learning words.,
Again, I would combine this with the next sentence - it's all part of a continuous action you are taking.
Bbut I didn't feel any progress and my hands droppedlike I was making any progress.
You could also say "but I didn't make any progress." If you say I didn't feel like I was making progress, you might be making progress but it's frustrating. If you say I didn't make any progress" - you weren't learning anything.
The phrase "and my hands dropped" is probably a phrase from your native language. Best English version would be "and my shoulders slumped." You could also just say "I was disappointed."
After a while, I tried again, and than again.,
I would combine this with your next sentence.
Aand I will continue to try it.
Best not to start a sentence with "And."
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This is very good. You will learn the logical length of sentences as you practice, but your basic message is clear.
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I needed to start learn English. |
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I didn't want to pay for lessons English. I didn't want to pay for |
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I believed that I could learn English solo. I believed that I could learn English solo. solo is okay; it is a bit better to use the phrase "by myself." |
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I was watching different lessons on YouTube, I was reading simplified books,I was using Anki for learning words. I was watching different lessons on YouTube, I was reading simplified books, I was using Anki for learning words Again, I would combine this with the next sentence - it's all part of a continuous action you are taking. |
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But I didn't feel any progress and my hands dropped.
You could also say "but I didn't make any progress." If you say I didn't feel like I was making progress, you might be making progress but it's frustrating. If you say I didn't make any progress" - you weren't learning anything. The phrase "and my hands dropped" is probably a phrase from your native language. Best English version would be "and my shoulders slumped." You could also just say "I was disappointed." |
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After a while, I tried again, and than again. After a while, I tried again, and I would combine this with your next sentence. |
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And I will continue to try it.
Best not to start a sentence with "And." |
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My Path of Learning English Language My Path of Learning the English Language |
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My relationship with English language is very difficult. My relationship with the English language is very difficult. |
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When I was a kid I really didn't understand for what I needed to learn English. When I was a kid I really didn't understand |
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I thought it was a waste of time. |
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My first teacher English language didn't know this language. My first You can use English as an adjective here. |
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She forced me to study many different words, and sometimes she gave my homework. She forced me to study many different words, and sometimes she gave m I'd combine this with the next phrase |
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But she never checked my homework.
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When I started growing up I met with movies, more precisely I understood difference from dubbing and original sound.
This sentence is a bit confusing...I've given my recommendation. Hopefully it says what you meant! |
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I has wanted to watch movies only with original sound. I sound is grammatically correct, but audio is a bit more precise. |
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I watched movies with subtitles, but it was not enough for me. |
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I realized one simply thing. I realized I would merge this sentence with the next one to simplify your statement and make it easier to read. |
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