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My parents

My parents are very great. I starts with my parents my mother is nurse help a many people. She often works at night and on the morning is she so tired. She sleeps a half day and then she cooks for us. She always buy candy for us and when we want a thing the she buys us. She made the most homework before she goes to the work she cleans the kitchen and the living room and cook for us the most time. My father is almost so great he is a information for a great company .He is very good with computer and know always what is to do. My laptop repair he always he take us to resturants on the weekend and play with us in the park. How basketball and football.

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My parents are very great.

ITo starts with my parents, my mother is nurse and help as many people.

She often works at night and oin the morning is she so tired.

She sleeps a half day, and then she cooks for us.

She always buys candy for us and when we want a thing the she buys usanything that we want.

She madedoes the most homusework b. Before she goes to the work she cleans the kitchen and the living room and cooks for us the most of the time.

Homework is for school work, housework is more like chores and cleaning :)

My father is almost aso great h. He is an information (?) for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

I think you're missing a word after "information" here.

My laptop repair hHe repaired my laptop. He always he take us to restaurants on the weekend and plays basketball and football with us in the park.

How basketball and football.-

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Great work again!

My parents are verreally great.

It’s more natural to use “really” in this case

I’ll starts with my parents my mother. She is nurse who help as many people.

She often works at night and oin the morning is she is so tired.

She sleeps afor half the day and then she cooks for us.

She always buys candy for us and when. Whenever we want a something the, she buys it for us.

She made the most homework beforOften, she she goes to the work shelps with homework, cleans the kitchen and the living room, and cooks for us the most time.before going to work.

My father is almost so great h. He is an information technician for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

My laptop repair he always heHe repairs my laptop. He often takes us to restaurants on the weekend and to play with us in the park.

How basketball and football.

Not sure what you are trying to say here.

My parents

My parents are verreally great.

For some reason, "very great" just sounds a bit off to me.

I'll starts with my parents m. My mother is nurse who help as many people.

I'm not sure what that first part is supposed to mean.

She often works at night, and oin the morning is, she gets so tired.

She sleeps afor half the day and then she cooks for us.

She always buys candy for us, and when we want a something the, she buys it for us.

She made the most homdoes most of the housework before she goes to the work s. She cleans the kitchen and the living room and cooks for us the most of the time.

I don't quite understand how "most" is being used here. I understood it as "she does a lot of the housework" and "usually, she cleans the kitchen and cooks for us."

My father is almost aso great h. He is a information ? for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

A person can't be an information. What job title were you trying to express?

My laptop repair he always hHe always repairs my laptop. He takes us to restaurants oin the weekends and plays with us in the park.

Howe plays basketball and football with us.

I'm not sure what the "How" was supposed to mean.

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If you could clarify any of the points I could not understand, I'd be more than happy to provide further corrections in the comments!

My parents


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My parents are very great.


My parents are verreally great.

For some reason, "very great" just sounds a bit off to me.

My parents are verreally great.

It’s more natural to use “really” in this case

My parents are very great.

I starts with my parents my mother is nurse help a many people.


She often works at night and on the morning is she so tired.


She sleeps a half day and then she cooks for us.


She always buy candy for us and when we want a thing the she buys us.


She made the most homework before she goes to the work she cleans the kitchen and the living room and cook for us the most time.


My father is almost so great he is a information for a great company .He is very good with computer and know always what is to do.


My laptop repair he always he take us to resturants on the weekend and play with us in the park.


How basketball and football.


My parents are very great.


I starts with my parents my mother is nurse help a many people.


I'll starts with my parents m. My mother is nurse who help as many people.

I'm not sure what that first part is supposed to mean.

I’ll starts with my parents my mother. She is nurse who help as many people.

ITo starts with my parents, my mother is nurse and help as many people.

She often works at night and on the morning is she so tired.


She often works at night, and oin the morning is, she gets so tired.

She often works at night and oin the morning is she is so tired.

She often works at night and oin the morning is she so tired.

She sleeps a half day and then she cooks for us.


She sleeps afor half the day and then she cooks for us.

She sleeps afor half the day and then she cooks for us.

She sleeps a half day, and then she cooks for us.

She always buy candy for us and when we want a thing the she buys us.


She always buys candy for us, and when we want a something the, she buys it for us.

She always buys candy for us and when. Whenever we want a something the, she buys it for us.

She always buys candy for us and when we want a thing the she buys usanything that we want.

She made the most homework before she goes to the work she cleans the kitchen and the living room and cook for us the most time.


She made the most homdoes most of the housework before she goes to the work s. She cleans the kitchen and the living room and cooks for us the most of the time.

I don't quite understand how "most" is being used here. I understood it as "she does a lot of the housework" and "usually, she cleans the kitchen and cooks for us."

She made the most homework beforOften, she she goes to the work shelps with homework, cleans the kitchen and the living room, and cooks for us the most time.before going to work.

She madedoes the most homusework b. Before she goes to the work she cleans the kitchen and the living room and cooks for us the most of the time.

Homework is for school work, housework is more like chores and cleaning :)

My father is almost so great he is a information for a great company .He is very good with computer and know always what is to do.


My father is almost aso great h. He is a information ? for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

A person can't be an information. What job title were you trying to express?

My father is almost so great h. He is an information technician for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

My father is almost aso great h. He is an information (?) for a great company . He is very good with computers and know always knows what is to do.

I think you're missing a word after "information" here.

My laptop repair he always he take us to resturants on the weekend and play with us in the park.


My laptop repair he always hHe always repairs my laptop. He takes us to restaurants oin the weekends and plays with us in the park.

My laptop repair he always heHe repairs my laptop. He often takes us to restaurants on the weekend and to play with us in the park.

My laptop repair hHe repaired my laptop. He always he take us to restaurants on the weekend and plays basketball and football with us in the park.

How basketball and football.


Howe plays basketball and football with us.

I'm not sure what the "How" was supposed to mean.

How basketball and football.

Not sure what you are trying to say here.

How basketball and football.-

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