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Jan. 3, 2020

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My parents

My parents live in another city.
They are doing well.
My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.
My father is usually quiet. He's shy, but he's really nice.
They are very close.
I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.


私の両親は別の市に住んでいます。
彼らは元気です。
母はとても明るくて、たくさんの友達がいます。
私の父は物静かです。 彼は恥ずかしがり屋ですが、本当にいい人です。
彼らは非常に仲が良いです。
私はいつも彼らの健康と幸福を願っています。

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My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

You don't need a comma before "and" unless you are making a big list of things.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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This is written really well!

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rei

Jan. 5, 2020

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Thank you!😊😊

My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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It really is wonderfully written. Did you visit a shrine together with them on New Years?

My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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Very sweet and well written!

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rei

Jan. 4, 2020

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Thank you very much! 😊

My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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This is pretty much perfect, great job!

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rei

Jan. 4, 2020

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Thank you very much! 😄

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My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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Sounds like you have very wonderful parents. You should take them out sometime 😊

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rei

Jan. 4, 2020

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Thank you 😄
I respect my parents

My pParents

"Parents" should be capitalized because this is a title.

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, andso she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

TheyMy parents are very close.

This sentence is probably best following this sentence above: They are doing well.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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Very nice job! Your sentences were very good. My suggestions make your writing a little stronger.

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rei

Jan. 4, 2020

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Thank you for the advice!

My parents

My parents live in another city.

They are doing well.

My mother is really cheerful, and she has a lot of friends.

My father is usually quiet.

He's shy, but he's really nice.

They are very close.

I'm always wishing for their health and happiness.

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Perfect grammar! This sounds very natural. ご両親は国元がどこですか?

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rei

Jan. 4, 2020

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Thank you😊
They are Japanese.

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