Jan. 8, 2023
My outdoorsy dog
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments In which lots of various odor and scent blend. As introverts, my wife and I get pretty relaxed at desolate parks or trails. With that being said, getting immersed in the nature is our cup of tea. Every morning, we take a 30 minutes walk at different parks, which are on our secret park bucket list.
On the flip side, one of our dogs BuiBui barely uses the pee pad we prepare for him and his mom. He is bound to do his business outside everyday, no matter what the weather is. Pouring rains, hurricanes, nothing could beats BuiBui's love of natural toilet.
My oOutdoorsy dDog
We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments In which lots of various odors and scents blend.
As introverts, my wife and I get prettyrather relaxed at desolate parks or trails.
With that being said, getting immersed in the nature is our cup of tea.
Every morning, we take a 30 minutes walk at different parks, which are listed on our secret park bucket list.
On the flip side, one of our dogs, BuiBui, barely uses the pee pad we prepare for him and his mom.
He is bound to do his business outside every day, no matter what the weather is.
Pouring rains, hurricanes, nothing couldan beats BuiBui's love ofor a natural toilet.
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Pouring rain, hurricanes, nothing beats BuiBui's love for a natural toilet.
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Good work!
Jan. 17, 2023
Thank you!
My outdoorsy dogs
Since they both love being outdoors, I assume you consider both “outdoorsy.”
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments Iin which lots of various odors and scents blend.
As introverts, my wife and I get pretty relaxed at desolate parks or / and trails.
“And” sounds more natural to me.
With that being said, gGetting immersed in the nature is our cup of tea.
“With that being said” is similar to “however” in that it is used to introduce something that contradicts the preceding text. This sentence confirms the previous sentence, so “with that being said” is inappropriate here.
Every morning, we take a 30 -minutes walk at different parks, which that are on our secret park bucket list.
On the flip side, one of our dogs, BuiBui, barely uses the pee pads we prepare for him and his mom.
“On the flip side” seems out of place here. What are you trying to say?
He is boundetermined to do his business outside every day, no matter what the weather is.
every day (two words)
Pouring rains, hurricanes, nothing could beats BuiBui's love of natural toilets.
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Out of curiosity, how do you write “BuiBui” in Chinese—which Chinese characters do you use? Is the pronunciation Taiwanese (閩南語)?
Jan. 11, 2023
On the flip side, one of our dogs, BuiBui, barely uses the pee pads we prepare for him and his mom.
We love outdoor activities. Indoor toilet is useful if the weather was bad, though. So I want to use "On the flip side" to stress the dilemma.
Jan. 11, 2023
Then you need to explain the first part of the dilemma before you say “on the flip side.” As you’ve written it now, the reader had no clue that there is a dilemma until you suddenly say “on the flip side,” so it doesn’t make sense.
Jan. 11, 2023
had no > has no
Jan. 13, 2023
Then you need to explain the first part of the dilemma before you say “on the flip side.” As you’ve written it now, the reader had no clue that there is a dilemma until you suddenly say “on the flip side,” so it doesn’t make sense.
Thanks for your explaining. This is my bad habit. I keep the information in my mind and take it for granted.
Jan. 13, 2023
It's an easy mistake to make.
Jan. 17, 2023
Hi JoeTofu! So sorry that I answer your question till now. Yes! "BuiBui" is how it sounds like pronouced in 閩南語. In Chinese, it is "肥肥" which means chubby. BuiBui is pretty hunky, though.
Jan. 17, 2023
Thanks!
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments In which lots ofwherein various odors and scents blend.
I think “wherein” sounds most natural here, because it always indicates a location.
Jan. 17, 2023
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments In which lots ofwherein various odors and scents blend.
I have never learn that word! Add it into my notes!
My outdoorsy dog
Our dogs love exploring outdoor environments In which lots of various odor and scent blend.
As introverts, my wife and I get pretty relaxed at desolate parks or trails.
With that being said, getting immersed in the nature is our cup of tea.
Every morning, we take a 30 minutes -walk at different parks, which are on our secret park bucket list.
30 minutes walk should be a compound adjective like: 30 minute-walk
On the flip side, one of our dogs BuiBui barely uses the pee pad we prepare for him and his mom.
He is bound to do his business outside everyday, no matter whathow the weather is.
Pouring rains, hurricanes, nothing couldan beats BuiBui's love ofor natural toilet.
Jan. 9, 2023
Every morning, we take a 30 minutes -walk at different parks, which are on our secret park bucket list.
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