July 23, 2025
My ordinary holiday morning
I introduce my ordinary holiday morning.
It means normal and doesn’t happen any surprising.
Actually, I love that because I spent much time following my planning!
I often wake up at almost 8 am and do walking around my home.
Walking is refreshed and relaxed to me.
I spent approximately 25 minutes.
After walking, I take breakfast.
Generally, I prefer rice to bread.
By the way, I don’t know why I often chose rice, but I love rice at morning!
My oOrdinary hHoliday mMorning
Generally, all words in a title are capitalised.
I'll introduce my ordinary holiday morning.
It means normal and doesn’t happen anywas uneventful and nothing surprising happened.
I think "normal" is too generic and vague a word. Allow me to suggest "uneventful".
Actually, I love that because I could spentd muchore time following my planning!
(1) I slightly reworded your sentence so that it sounds clearer in my opinion.
(2) Alternatively, instead of "plan", you can use "schedule".
I often wake up at almostround 8 am and do walking around my home.
(1) Although you can use "almost" before times, its use here after "wake up" strikes me as unnatural. You can use "around" instead.
(2) Alternatively: "I often wake up right before 8 am".
(3) If not using "almost", the "at" is redundant.
(4) "Do walking" is okay I think, but alternatively, you can also write: "...and have a walk around my home."
Walking is refresheding and relaxed to me.
"Refreshed" and "relaxed" are adjectives used to describe a person, not an activity.
I spent approximately 25 minutes.
After walking, I takehad breakfast.
(1) The phrase is "have breakfast".
(2) Mind the tense: the sentence should be in the past tense ("take" is in the present tense).
Generally, I prefer rice to bread.
By the way, I don’t know why I often choose rice, but I love rice athaving rice in the morning!
"Often" does not imply a specific time in the past but rather a general habit, so the present tense ("choose") should be used.
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My ordinary holiday morning My Generally, all words in a title are capitalised. |
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I introduce my ordinary holiday morning. I'll introduce my ordinary holiday morning. |
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It means normal and doesn’t happen any surprising. It I think "normal" is too generic and vague a word. Allow me to suggest "uneventful". |
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Actually, I love that because I spent much time following my planning! Actually, I love that (1) I slightly reworded your sentence so that it sounds clearer in my opinion. (2) Alternatively, instead of "plan", you can use "schedule". |
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I often wake up at almost 8 am and do walking around my home. I often wake up a (1) Although you can use "almost" before times, its use here after "wake up" strikes me as unnatural. You can use "around" instead. (2) Alternatively: "I often wake up right before 8 am". (3) If not using "almost", the "at" is redundant. (4) "Do walking" is okay I think, but alternatively, you can also write: "...and have a walk around my home." |
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Walking is refreshed and relaxed to me. Walking is refresh "Refreshed" and "relaxed" are adjectives used to describe a person, not an activity. |
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I spent approximately 25 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After walking, I take breakfast. After walking, I (1) The phrase is "have breakfast". (2) Mind the tense: the sentence should be in the past tense ("take" is in the present tense). |
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Generally, I prefer rice to bread. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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By the way, I don’t know why I often chose rice, but I love rice at morning! By the way, "Often" does not imply a specific time in the past but rather a general habit, so the present tense ("choose") should be used. |
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