May 12, 2025
Hello everyone, yeah this is me, a stranger to you all.
I write this because I wanna improve my skill in English, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share.
So like usually, in the morning I wake up at 5 a.m. just to pray, because I'm a muslim, and after I finish it I'll go back to sleep until 8 a.m. Sounds like a jobless person right? Yeah, I am. In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight.
As you know, I'm a fresh graduate, and to be honest, searching for a job is kinda hard in my country. On the other hand, I'm not really good at my major.
So guys, if you have the same condition as I right now, we can make a friend LOL.
My Ordinary Day
Hello everyone, yeah, this is me, a stranger to you all.
A comma is needed after "yeah" to separate it from the rest of the sentence for clarity.
I am writeing this because I wannat to improve my skill in English skills, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share.
Use "am writing" instead of "write" for the present continuous tense, as you're describing an action happening right now. "Wanna" is informal, so "want to" is better for standard English. "Skill" should be pluralized to "skills" in this context. Wanna is fine in informal contexts.
So, like usually, in the morning, I wake up at 5 a.m. just to pray, because I'm a mMuslim, and after I finish it, I'll go back to sleep until 8 a.m.
"Like usually" should be corrected to "like usual" to sound more natural in English. A comma is needed after "so" to separate the introductory phrase. "Muslim" should be capitalized as it refers to a proper noun. Also, the comma after "finish" is necessary before "I'll" to separate the clauses.
Sounds like a jobless person, right?
A comma is needed before "right?" for clarity and to properly separate the question tag.
Yeah, I am.
In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or a movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight.
"A TV show" requires the article "a" to sound grammatically correct. The sentence is fine otherwise.
As you know, I'm a freshcent graduate, and to be honest, searching for a job is kinda of hard in my country.
"Fresh graduate" is commonly used informally but "recent graduate" is more standard in formal writing. "Kinda" should be replaced with "kind of" to make it sound more proper.
On the other hand, I'm not really good at my major.
So guys, if you haveare in the same condisituation as I am right now, we can make abe friends. LOL.
"Condition" is not the best word here; "situation" fits better. The correct phrase would be "as I am right now" (using "am" for subject-verb agreement). "Make a friend" should be "be friends" to express the idea more naturally. "LOL" is fine in informal contexts, but it might sound too casual for a written piece.
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Your writing is engaging and personal! You’re doing a great job expressing your daily routine and thoughts in English. Just remember to focus on small grammatical tweaks like subject-verb agreement, articles, and informal expressions to make your writing sound even more natural. Keep up the great work!
I write this because I wanna improve my skill in English, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share with you.
wanna is very informal but you're writing in an informal, conversational style so I didn't replace with I want to.
So like usually, in the morning I wake up at 5 a.m., just to pray, because I'm a muslim, and after I finish it I'llwhen I'm done, I go back to sleep until 8 a.m.
Use comma ',' not full stop in a sentence.
Sounds like a jobless person right?
In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a game on my mobile game until midnight.
As you know, I'm a freshcent graduate, and to be honest, searching for a job is kinda hard in my country.
Fresh is correct but recent sounds more natural.
So guys, if you have're in the same condisituation as I am right now, we can make abecome friends LOL.
There's also an expression which works here: if you're in the same boat. It means to be in a similar and usually unpleasant situation.
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I hope you find a new job soon. In the meantime it's great that you're spending time improving your English. All the best
My Ordinary Day
Hello everyone, yeah this iit's me, a stranger to you all.
I'm writeing this because I wanna improve my skill in English skills, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share.
Alternatively: "I wrote this".
So like usually, in the morning I wake up at 5 a.m. in the morning just to pray, because I'm a mMuslim, and after I finish it I'll go back to sleep until 8 a.m.
(1) Placing "in the morning" at the back sounds more natural.
(2) "Muslim" is a proper noun and should be capitalised.
Sounds like a jobless person right?
Alternatively, and perhaps more naturally: "I sound like I'm a jobless person right?"
Yeah, I am one.
"I am" by itself sounds rather jarring. I'd expect that to follow a sentence like "I sound like I'm jobless, right?", where you're saying that you're [adjective], rather than you're a [noun].
In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight.
As you know, I'm a fresh graduate, and to be honest, searching for a job is kinda hard in my country.
On the other hand, I'm not really good at my major.
So guys, if you haveare in the same conditionpredicament as Ime right now, we can make abe friends LOL.
(1) "have the same condition as me right now" suggests you have a medical condition.
(2) By the way, we write "lol" in all lowercase nowadays. Using uppercase suggests a loud exclamation. I don't know if that's what you're going for, but I just thought I'd mention it.
I am write this because I wanna improve my skill in English, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share.
In the afternoon, I watches a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight.
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Only little mistakes but honestly really good work
My Ordinary Day This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Hello everyone, yeah this is me, a stranger to you all. Hello everyone, yeah Hello everyone, yeah, this is me, a stranger to you all. A comma is needed after "yeah" to separate it from the rest of the sentence for clarity. |
I write this because I wanna improve my skill in English, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share. I am write this because I wanna improve my skill in English, but I don't have many interesting activities in my life to share. I'm writ Alternatively: "I wrote this". I write this because I wanna improve my wanna is very informal but you're writing in an informal, conversational style so I didn't replace with I want to. I am writ Use "am writing" instead of "write" for the present continuous tense, as you're describing an action happening right now. "Wanna" is informal, so "want to" is better for standard English. "Skill" should be pluralized to "skills" in this context. Wanna is fine in informal contexts. |
So like usually, in the morning I wake up at 5 a.m. just to pray, because I'm a muslim, and after I finish it I'll go back to sleep until 8 a.m. So like usually, (1) Placing "in the morning" at the back sounds more natural. (2) "Muslim" is a proper noun and should be capitalised. So like usually, in the morning I wake up at 5 a.m Use comma ',' not full stop in a sentence. So, like usual "Like usually" should be corrected to "like usual" to sound more natural in English. A comma is needed after "so" to separate the introductory phrase. "Muslim" should be capitalized as it refers to a proper noun. Also, the comma after "finish" is necessary before "I'll" to separate the clauses. |
Sounds like a jobless person right? Sounds like a jobless person right? Alternatively, and perhaps more naturally: "I sound like I'm a jobless person right?" Sounds like a jobless person right? Sounds like a jobless person, right? A comma is needed before "right?" for clarity and to properly separate the question tag. |
Yeah, I am. Yeah, I am one. "I am" by itself sounds rather jarring. I'd expect that to follow a sentence like "I sound like I'm jobless, right?", where you're saying that you're [adjective], rather than you're a [noun]. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight. In the afternoon, I watches a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a game on my mobil In the afternoon, I watch a TV show or a movie to fill my empty time, and at night, I play a mobile game until midnight. "A TV show" requires the article "a" to sound grammatically correct. The sentence is fine otherwise. |
As you know, I'm a fresh graduate, and to be honest, searching for a job is kinda hard in my country. This sentence has been marked as perfect! As you know, I'm a Fresh is correct but recent sounds more natural. As you know, I'm a "Fresh graduate" is commonly used informally but "recent graduate" is more standard in formal writing. "Kinda" should be replaced with "kind of" to make it sound more proper. |
On the other hand, I'm not really good at my major. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
So guys, if you have the same condition as I right now, we can make a friend LOL. So guys, if you (1) "have the same condition as me right now" suggests you have a medical condition. (2) By the way, we write "lol" in all lowercase nowadays. Using uppercase suggests a loud exclamation. I don't know if that's what you're going for, but I just thought I'd mention it. So guys, if you There's also an expression which works here: if you're in the same boat. It means to be in a similar and usually unpleasant situation. So guys, if you "Condition" is not the best word here; "situation" fits better. The correct phrase would be "as I am right now" (using "am" for subject-verb agreement). "Make a friend" should be "be friends" to express the idea more naturally. "LOL" is fine in informal contexts, but it might sound too casual for a written piece. |
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