April 23, 2023
My Opinion on Telecom Fraud(5)- The Battle Is on
Many victims have been rescued by volunteers from Cambodia. As soon as they return to Taiwan, the local authority would check and question each of them carefully, that's not only due to the health problem concerns but also want to determine why and how they were trapped in this country.
One of the most astonishing findings was that some of the people who claimed to be seeking help were actually real criminals. They had been planted by criminal groups, concealing their true identities and aiming to learn how the police conducted their rescues. Thereafter, the criminals quickly adjust their operations, making it increasingly difficult to save people from their grasp.
Additionally, according to a BBC report, the trapped people from Taiwan only estimated at around 5% of the total. The majority of the victims are from China, with a few from India, Malaysia, and other countries.
My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (5) - The Battle Is oOn
Many victims have been rescued by volunteers from Cambodia.
As soon as they return to Taiwan, the local authority would checks and questions each of them carefully, t. That's not only due to thefor health problem concerns but also because they want to determine why and how they were trapped in this country.
One of the most astonishing findings was that some of the people who claimed to be seeking help were actually real criminals.
They had been planted by criminal groups, concealing their true identities and aiming to learn how the police conducted their rescues.
Thereafter, the criminals quickly adjust their operations, making it increasingly difficult to save people from their grasp.
Additionally, according to a BBC report, the trapped people from Taiwan onlyare estimated ato be only around 5% of the total.
The majority of the victims are from China, with a few from India, Malaysia, and other countries.
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April 24, 2023
先生、どうもありがとうございました。
My Opinion on Telecom Fraud(5)- The Battle Is oOn
Many victims have been rescued by volunteers from Cambodia.
As soon as they return to Taiwan, the local authorityies would check and question each of them carefully, that's not only due to the health problem concerns, but also because they want to determine whyhow and howwhy they were trapped in this country.
One of the most astonishing findings was that some of the people who claimed to be seeking help were actually real criminals.
They had been planted by criminal groups, concealing their true identities and aiming to learn how the police conducted their rescues.
Thereafter, the criminals quickly adjust their operations, making it increasingly difficult to save people from their grasp.
Additionally, according to a BBC report, the trapped people from Taiwan only estimated at around 5% of the total.
5% of the total population?
The majority of the victims are from China, with a few from India, Malaysia, and other countries.
April 24, 2023
Additionally, according to a BBC report, the trapped people from Taiwan only estimated at around 5% of the total.
Around 5% of the population who is involved in the job of Telegram fraud in Cambodia and northern Myanmar are from Taiwan. Some of them are forced to do it.
April 24, 2023
Thank you for your corrections! :-)
My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (5)- The Battle Is oOn
As soon as they return to Taiwan, the local authorityies would check and question each of them carefully, that's not only due to the health problem concerns but also want to determine why and how they were trapped in this countryCambodia.
Unless there is only one authority, "authorities" should be used.
problem and concern mean the same thing so you only need one word. Would suggest using "concern" here because health problems implies that they already have an illness, whereas health concerns refers to any potential issues related to health.
Since you just mentioned "Taiwan", it is better to refer to "this country" as "Cambodia" to avoid confusion.
One of the most astonishing findings was that some of the people who claimed to be seeking help were actually real criminals.
Actually and real have the same meaning, either actually or real would do (actually sounds more natural in this context).
They had been planted by criminal groups, concealing their true identities and aiming to learn how the police conducted their rescue operations.
Usually conduct is for a project/plan, so I changed it to "rescue operation" so it would sound more natural.
Additionally, according to a BBC report, the trapped peoplevictims from Taiwan were only estimated ato be around 5% of the total.
April 24, 2023
Thank you for your corrections!:-)
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