Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

April 18, 2023

1
My Opinion on Telecom Fraud(5)- a Cage in Water

It's rainy and soft winds below outside of the windows right now. The soothing sound is commonly considered a sleep aid, we enjoy the atmosphere.

In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in water, only his head is above the wobbly water. This kind of torture is also commonly used by criminals. As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuff. Why did the man be harmed physically and psychologically? Only because he refused to invite his friend to come to northern Myanmar.
I can't say the criminals there are doing illegal things because there is no law. The top officials in the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.

The fraud group sometimes doesn't fraud money by chatting, or phoning, since it would cost a lot of time. They only invite newcomers and sell them as slaves or sell their human organs for a huge profit. Another chance for the victims to be free is to pay a large amount of money, but only a small portion of them was freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.

The picture I put here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan, he was so brave and risked his life to rescue some victims from Taiwan. The title says: Rescue in Myanmar, 13 people saved through over hundred demand...fraud camp kill victims after receiving the ransom.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OTnchXhRqRA&ab_channel=%E5%A5%BD%E6%A3%92Bump

Corrections

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (5) - aA Cage in Water

It's rainy and soft winds below outside of the windows right now.

このの方が自然です。

The soothing sound iss are commonly considered a sleep aid, so we enjoy the atmospherem.

In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in water, with only his head is above the wobblyebbing and flowing water.

This kind of torture is also commonly used by criminals.

As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuffon.

Why didwas the man be harmed physically and psychologically?

past tense

Only because he refused to invite his friend to come to northern Myanmar.

I can't say the criminals there are doing illegal things because there is no law.

The top officials inamong the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.

The fraud group sometimes doesn't fraud moneydoesn't always commit fraud by chatting, or phoning, since it would cost a lot of time.

They only invite newcomers andto sell them as slaves or to sell their human organs for a huge profit.

怖い。

Another chance for the victimsThe victims have a chance to be free is toby paying a large amount of money, but only a small portion of them washave been freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.

The picture I putuploaded here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan, h. He was so brave and risked his life to rescue some of the victims from Taiwan.

また、

The picture I've included here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan.
The picture I've attached here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan.

The title says the following: Rescue in Myanmar, 13 people saved through over hundred demandHundreds of cases but only 13 are rescued ... fraud camp kill victims after receiving the ransom.

Feedback

初めて聞きました。残念ですね。教えてくれてありがとうございました。そして、上手に書けています!

Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

April 20, 2023

1

いつもありがとございます!:-)

It's rainy and soft winds beloware blowing outside of the windows right now.

The soothing sound is commonly considered a sleep aid, w. We enjoy the atmosphere.

In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in underwater, only his head is above the wobblchoppy water.

As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuffinformation out of the enemy.

Why did the man be harmedhave to suffer physically and psychologically harm?

The top officials inamongst the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.

The fraud groupsters sometimes doesn't fraud money by chatting, orintend to defraud people by talking to them over the phoninge, since ithis would cost a lot of time.

They only invite newcomers and sell them as slaves or sell their human organs for a huge profit.

Another chance for the victims to be free themselves is toby paying a large amount of money, but. However, only a small portion of them wasere freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.

Scarlett_Father's avatar
Scarlett_Father

April 18, 2023

1

Thank you for your corrections! :-)

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud(5)- a Cage in Water


My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (5) - aA Cage in Water

It's rainy and soft winds below outside of the windows right now.


It's rainy and soft winds beloware blowing outside of the windows right now.

It's rainy and soft winds below outside of the windows right now.

このの方が自然です。

The soothing sound is commonly considered a sleep aid, we enjoy the atmosphere.


The soothing sound is commonly considered a sleep aid, w. We enjoy the atmosphere.

The soothing sound iss are commonly considered a sleep aid, so we enjoy the atmospherem.

In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in water, only his head is above the wobbly water.


In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in underwater, only his head is above the wobblchoppy water.

In far northern Myanmar, a poor man was locked in a cage in water, with only his head is above the wobblyebbing and flowing water.

This kind of torture is also commonly used by criminals.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuff.


As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuffinformation out of the enemy.

As I know this punishment was popularly used in wars in order to get the enemy's informative stuffon.

Why did the man be harmed physically and psychologically?


Why did the man be harmedhave to suffer physically and psychologically harm?

Why didwas the man be harmed physically and psychologically?

past tense

Only because he refused to invite his friend to come to northern Myanmar.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't say the criminals there are doing illegal things because there is no law.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The top officials in the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.


The top officials inamongst the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.

The top officials inamong the warlords help them to make money in any possible way.

The fraud group sometimes doesn't fraud money by chatting, or phoning, since it would cost a lot of time.


The fraud groupsters sometimes doesn't fraud money by chatting, orintend to defraud people by talking to them over the phoninge, since ithis would cost a lot of time.

The fraud group sometimes doesn't fraud moneydoesn't always commit fraud by chatting, or phoning, since it would cost a lot of time.

They only invite newcomers and sell them as slaves or sell their human organs for a huge profit.


They only invite newcomers and sell them as slaves or sell their human organs for a huge profit.

They only invite newcomers andto sell them as slaves or to sell their human organs for a huge profit.

怖い。

Another chance for the victims to be free is to pay a large amount of money, but only a small portion of them was freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.


Another chance for the victims to be free themselves is toby paying a large amount of money, but. However, only a small portion of them wasere freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.

Another chance for the victimsThe victims have a chance to be free is toby paying a large amount of money, but only a small portion of them washave been freed even though their families paid the ransom accordingly.

The picture I put here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan, he was so brave and risked his life to rescue some victims from Taiwan.


The picture I putuploaded here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan, h. He was so brave and risked his life to rescue some of the victims from Taiwan.

また、 The picture I've included here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan. The picture I've attached here is of a Youtuber from Taiwan.

The title says: Rescue in Myanmar, 13 people saved through over hundred demand...fraud camp kill victims after receiving the ransom.


The title says the following: Rescue in Myanmar, 13 people saved through over hundred demandHundreds of cases but only 13 are rescued ... fraud camp kill victims after receiving the ransom.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OTnchXhRqRA&ab_channel=%E5%A5%BD%E6%A3%92Bump


You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium