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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why Started from Taiwan

Archaeologists have found intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago. However, according to an evolution theory for humans, only the most strong, clever people can be with capabilities to cross straits and continents. That is, the people who live further from Ethiopia would be more clever, in contrast, those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared with lower IQ. Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in which people with higher IQs. These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people in North America, Eastern Asia but only limited in Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Southeast of China and other places I forget.

(I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it.)

The IT and telecom industries are developed in Taiwan. It's easier to find IT specialists to help them set up scam networks. Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never be invented in Africa I believe.

Taiwan is now proclaimed a part of China by the government of China. In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to much more countries than that from China, which makes Taiwan scammers convenient to accessible to some European countries.

Taiwan telecom fraudsters were stationed in Kenya and Spain before 2015. They hired some criminals to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own network soon when they back home.

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My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why It Started fromin Taiwan

Archaeologists have found that intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

However, aAccording to an evolution theory for theory on the evolution of humans, only the most strong,est, most clever people can be wihave the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

That is, the people who lived further from Ethiopia would be more clever, in contrast, to those who lived closer to the birthplace of mankind and would be compared withprobably possess a lower IQ.

Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in whichwhere people with higher IQs lived.

These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people in North America, Eastern Asia but only limited inonly to Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Sthe southeast of China and other places I forgetwhich I have forgotten.

(I am personally against any racism, i. It's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )

The IT and telecom industries are developed in Taiwan.

It's easier to find IT specialists to help them set up scam networks.

Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never behave been invented in Africa , I believe.

Taiwan is now proclaimed a part of China by the government of China.

In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to muchany more countries than that ofrom China's, which makes Taiwan scammers convenient to accessible to some European countriesit convenient for scammers from Taiwan to travel to Europe.

Taiwan telecom fraudsters from Taiwan were stationed in Kenya and Spain before 2015.

They hired some criminals from China to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own networks soon when they are back home.

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とても怖いです。でも、上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_Father

April 7, 2023

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いつもありがとございます!:ー)

Archaeologists have found intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

"were from a place" would also be correct, but "originated from a place" is smoother. The two together is incorrect usage of tenses.

However, according to an evolutionary theory forabout humans, only the most strong, clever people can be wihad the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

That is, the people who live further from Ethiopia would be more cleverpossess a higher IQ, in contrast, to those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared with lower IQ.

In contrast explains the lower IQ, so the rest is redundant

Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in whichere people withhad higher IQs.

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Great spelling, and other than a few grammatical errors, very interesting and smooth :)

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why it Started from Taiwan

I think this is what you are trying to say?

Archaeologists have found that intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

However, according to an evolutionthe theory ofor humans evolution, only the most strongest, cleverest people can be wihave the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

That is, theo say, people who live further from Ethiopia would beare theoretically more clever, and in contrast, those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared withhave a comparatively lower IQ.

ThereafterAs such, some people drew a map to indicatinge the places in whichwhere people with higher IQs.

These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people inparts of North America, and Eastern Asia (but only limited in Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Southeast of China and some other places I forget).

(I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )

Not sure what you mean by composition.

The IT and telecom industries are developed in Taiwan.

It's easier for criminals to find IT specialists to help them set up scam networks.

Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never be invented in Africa I believe.

For someone 'personally against racism' this is... quite a racist comment?! Maybe you didn't mean it this way (hopefully), but this comes across as very disparaging in that it suggests Africans cannot do intelligent and complex things...

Taiwan is now proclaimed a part of China by the government of China.

In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to muchany more countries than that ofrom China, which makes it much easier for Taiwanese scammers convenient to accessible to some European countries.

Taiwan telecom fraudsters were stationed in Kenya and Spain before 2015.

They hired some criminals to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own network soon when they back home.

By from China, do you mean against China?

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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(I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )

"Composition" in Chinese means "作文".
It should be written as "essay" or "writing". I learned this word in high school, and I may have been using it incorrectly for decades.

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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They hired some criminals to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own network soon when they back home.

It should be "went back home".

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections!
I checked "Average IQ by Country 2023" just now on https://wisevoter.com/country-rankings/average-iq-by-country/. It's my first time being on this page.
Yes, IQ numbers do not stand for everything as they can be influenced by education.

My Opinion on Telecom fraud (3) - Why Started from Taiwan


Archaeologists have found intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.


Archaeologists have found that intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

Archaeologists have found intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

"were from a place" would also be correct, but "originated from a place" is smoother. The two together is incorrect usage of tenses.

Archaeologists have found that intelligent humans were originated from a place in Ethiopia millions of years ago.

However, according to an evolution theory for humans, only the most strong, clever people can be with capabilities to cross straits and continents.


However, according to an evolutionthe theory ofor humans evolution, only the most strongest, cleverest people can be wihave the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

However, according to an evolutionary theory forabout humans, only the most strong, clever people can be wihad the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

However, aAccording to an evolution theory for theory on the evolution of humans, only the most strong,est, most clever people can be wihave the capabilities to cross straits and continents.

That is, the people who live further from Ethiopia would be more clever, in contrast, those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared with lower IQ.


That is, theo say, people who live further from Ethiopia would beare theoretically more clever, and in contrast, those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared withhave a comparatively lower IQ.

That is, the people who live further from Ethiopia would be more cleverpossess a higher IQ, in contrast, to those who live closer to the birthplace of mankind would be compared with lower IQ.

In contrast explains the lower IQ, so the rest is redundant

That is, the people who lived further from Ethiopia would be more clever, in contrast, to those who lived closer to the birthplace of mankind and would be compared withprobably possess a lower IQ.

Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in which people with higher IQs.


ThereafterAs such, some people drew a map to indicatinge the places in whichwhere people with higher IQs.

Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in whichere people withhad higher IQs.

Thereafter, some people drew a map indicating the places in whichwhere people with higher IQs lived.

These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people in North America, Eastern Asia but only limited in Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Southeast of China and other places I forget.


These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people inparts of North America, and Eastern Asia (but only limited in Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Southeast of China and some other places I forget).

These places are Northern Europe, some of the white people in North America, Eastern Asia but only limited inonly to Taiwan, Japan, Hong Kong, coastal areas in Sthe southeast of China and other places I forgetwhich I have forgotten.

I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it.


The IT and telecom industries are developed in Taiwan.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's easier to find IT specialists to help them set up scam networks.


It's easier for criminals to find IT specialists to help them set up scam networks.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never be invented in Africa I believe.


Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never be invented in Africa I believe.

For someone 'personally against racism' this is... quite a racist comment?! Maybe you didn't mean it this way (hopefully), but this comes across as very disparaging in that it suggests Africans cannot do intelligent and complex things...

Some criminals there devised this quite intelligent and complex fraud, which could never behave been invented in Africa , I believe.

Taiwan is now proclaimed a part of China by the government of China.


Taiwan is now proclaimed a part of China by the government of China.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to much more countries than that from China, which makes Taiwan scammers convenient to accessible to some European countries.


In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to muchany more countries than that ofrom China, which makes it much easier for Taiwanese scammers convenient to accessible to some European countries.

In fact, the passport of Taiwan is visa-free to muchany more countries than that ofrom China's, which makes Taiwan scammers convenient to accessible to some European countriesit convenient for scammers from Taiwan to travel to Europe.

Taiwan telecom fraudsters were stationed in Kenya and Spain before 2015.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Taiwan telecom fraudsters from Taiwan were stationed in Kenya and Spain before 2015.

They hired some criminals to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own network soon when they back home.


They hired some criminals to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own network soon when they back home.

By from China, do you mean against China?

They hired some criminals from China to work for them from China, and some of them will operate their own networks soon when they are back home.

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why Started from Taiwan


My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why it Started from Taiwan

I think this is what you are trying to say?

My Opinion on Telecom Fraud (3) - Why It Started fromin Taiwan

(I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )


(I am personally against any racism, it's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )

Not sure what you mean by composition.

(I am personally against any racism, i. It's only a composition, so don't overthink it. )

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