April 10, 2023
My Opinion on Doing Business
That is easy.
Imagine what it was like when you studied in school. Talented and diligent students earned a higher grade; talented but not diligent, and diligent but not talented students made a moderate grade, and neither talented nor diligent students made a worse grade.
This is very similar to running a business. The scores you earned in school are also similar to the money you earned in running a business.
Whenever you do, please remember step by step and try to make each step perfect. After you have made each step perfect, you have succeeded.
Even if your business is only to make a bowl of porridge, please make sure that your porridge is the best. At least it has the same quality as your business competitors' this way, you won't break.
Don't worry about the price of your products or services, please always care about their quality. As long as your products have good quality, it's difficult for you not to be successful.
Everyone knows about Maotai. It has the highest price among Chinese liquors, but the Maotai factory never needs to worry about how to sell their products. Instead, Maotai is always in shortage towards consumer demands.
Before you decide what business you will do, please make decisions according to your ability and your financial power. Don't always aim for those big businesses, if you are not capable enough to handle them.
If you are not confident in running a business and you still want to do it, you should get started with small businesses. If you can do small businesses well, you probably can do big businesses well.
China has an old saying, "there are never businesses that can not make money, while there are only people who can not make money."
If let me use three words to describe the key factors of running a business, they will be talent, diligence and honesty.
Well, I just talked about my personal opinions on this topic and I know that I am not necessarily correct. Please don't laugh at me. Moreover, there are many successful entrepreneurs in this group. Their opinions are more reliable.
My Opinion on Doing Business
That is easy.
Imagine what it was like when you studied in school.
Talented and diligent students earned a higher grade; talented but not diligent, and diligent but not talented students made a moderate grade, and neither talented nor diligent students made a worse grade.
This is very similar to running a business.
The scores you earned in school are also similar to the money you earned in running a business.
You're comparing business to school so it's okay to use the present tense in the second part of the sentence.
Whenatever you do, please remember step by step and try to make each step perfect.
Whenever means when in time. Whatever is what is done.
After you have made each step perfect, you have succeeded.
Even if your business is only to make a bowl of porridge, please make sure that your porridge is the best.
AIt will at least it hasve the same quality as your business competitors' this way, so you won't break.
Don't worry about the price of your products or services, rather, please always care about their quality.
As long as your products have good quality, it's will be difficult for you to not to be successful.
Everyone knows about Maotai.
It has the highest price among Chinese liquors, but the Maotai factory never needs to worry about how to sell their products.
Instead, Maotai is always inhas a shortage towardsin response to consumer demands.
Before you decide what business you will do, please make decisions according to your ability and your financial power.
Don't always aim for those big businesses, if you are not capable enoughdo not have the capacity to handle them.
If you are not confident in running a business and you still want to do it, you should get started with a small businesses.
If you can do a small businesses well, you probably can do big businesses well.
China has an old saying, "tThere are never businesses that can not make money, while there are only people who can not make money.
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If lLet me use three words to describe the key factors of running a business, they will be: talent, diligence and honesty.
Well, I just talked about my personal opinions on this topic and I know that I am not necessarily correct.
Please don't laugh at me.
Moreover, there are many successful entrepreneurs in this group.
Their opinions are more reliable.
Feedback
Very interesting and very well done!
April 10, 2023
Thank you very much!
Imagine what it was like when you studied in school.
Talented and diligent students earned a higher grade; talented but not diligent, and diligent but not talented students madeearned a moderate grade, and neither talented nor diligent students madeearned a worse grade.
Using the same verb for consistency.
This is very similar to running a business.
The scores you earned in school are also similar to the money you earned in by running a business.
You're talking about running a business in general, hence the present tense.
Whenever you do something, please remember to do it step by step and try to make each step perfect.
"Whenever you do [what?]".
After you have made each step perfect, you would have succeeded.
Even if your business is onlyjust to make a bowl of porridge, please make sure that your porridge is the best.
At least it hasshould have the same quality as your business competitors' t. This way, you won't break.
Don't worry about the price of your products or services, pleasebut always care about their quality.
As long as your products have good quality, it's difficult for you not to be successful.
Everyone knows about Maotai.
It has the highest price among Chinese liquors, but the Maotai factory never needs to worry about how to sell their products.
Instead, Maotai is always in shortage towardsrelative to consumer demands.
Don't always aim for those big businesses, if you are not capable enough to handle them.
If you are not confident in running a business andbut you still want to do it, you should get started with a small businesses.
It just sounds more natural this way.
If you can do small businesses well, you probably can do big businesses well.
China has an old saying,: "tThere are never businesses thatwhich can not make money, while there are only people who can not make money."
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If let meI have to use three words to describe the key factors ofrequired for running a business, they will be talent, diligence and honesty.
Well, I just talked about my personal opinions on this topic and I know that I am not necessarily correct.
Please don't laugh at me.
Moreover, there are many successful entrepreneurs in this group.
Their opinions are more reliable.
Feedback
Good work! You have good vocab and grammar skills. You just need to get better at writing more naturally, which means understanding those unsaid rules.. which means.. practice. :)
April 10, 2023
Thank you very much!
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Don't always aim for those big businesses, if you are not capable enough to handle them. Don't always aim for those big businesses Don't always aim for those big businesses |
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If you are not confident in running a business and you still want to do it, you should get started with small businesses. If you are not confident in running a business It just sounds more natural this way. If you are not confident in running a business and you still want to do it, you should get started with a small business |
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