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April 5, 2023

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My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator

According to some sources, the Telecom or Phone Fraud originator is from Taiwan. This is a kind of intelligent crime which does not a common violent crime like robbing or stealing on the streets. They need to set up a special network, fraud app, train staff a long time, and bribe police and local government.

Taiwan is a perfect place for this kind of scam. It was said before 2000, most people in Taiwan have encountered phone fraud. As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China, some main scammers went to China and cooperated with some mafias there, both of them speak the same language, and the large population of China became their target. It's easy to buy people's private information in China, including but not limited to phone numbers, bank account numbers, addresses, ID card numbers, and delivery numbers...

The scammers play games and make friends with you on the internet. They can be patient enough to spend up to 8 months in order to gain a target's trust.

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My Opinion Oof Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator

Remember, we rarely, if ever, capitalize "of" in a title.

According to some sources, the Ttelecom or Pphone Ffraud originator ies from Taiwan.

また、
According to some sources, the telecom or phone fraud comes from Taiwan.

This is a kind of intelligentectual crime which does not a commonit physical violent crimce like robbing or stealing on the streets.

また、
This is a kind of psychological crime which does not commit physical violence like robbing or stealing on the streets.

"Crime" was used twice so I edited the sentence to make it sound more natural.

They need to set up a special network, create an app for fraud app, train staff for a long time, and even bribe police and local government.

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Taiwan is a perfect place for this kind of scam.

It whas saidbeen said that before 2000, most of the people in Taiwan have encounterd experienced phone fraud.

へー!

As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China, som was established, some of the main scammers went to China and cooperated with some mafias there, b. Both of them speaksides spoke the same language, and the so a large population of China became their target.

It's easy to buy people's private information in China, including but not limited to phone numbers, bank account numbers, addresses, ID card numbers, and delivery numbers...

The scammers play games and make friends with you on the internet.

They can be patient enough to spend up to 8 months in order to gain a target's trust.

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怖い!教えてくれてありがとうございました。助かります。そして、上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_Father

April 7, 2023

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助かりました、ありがと!:ー)

My Opinion Ofn Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator

Typically, you would say "my opinion of" when you are talking about someone (e.g. my opinion of him, my opinion of her) and when you are talking about a topic, you would say "my opinion on"

According to some sources, the Telecom or Pfraud (also referred to as phone Ffraud) originator is fromed in Taiwan.

I hope I understood what you meant

This is a kind of intelligent crime whichthat does not a commoninvolve violent crimce like robbing or stealing from people on the streets.

They fraudsters need to set up a special networks, fraud apps, trainand they also train their staff for a long time, and bribwhilst also bribing the police and local government.

Taiwan is a perfect place for this kind of scam.

It was said that even before 2000, most people in Taiwan have encountered phone fraud.

Do you mean before or since?

As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China grew, some mainof the main Taiwanese scammers went to China and cooperated with some of the mafias there,. As both of them speakgroups spoke the same language, and the large population of China soon became their target.

It's is very easy to buy people's private information in China, including but not limited tosuch as phone numbers, bank account numbers, addresses, ID card numbers, and delivery numbers.., etc.

The scammers play games and attempt to make friends with youtheir potential victims on the internet.

They can be very patient enough toand will spend up to 8 months in order to gain a target's trustto gain the trust of their targets.

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Very interesting to read! Good job :)

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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It was said that even before 2000, most people in Taiwan have encountered phone fraud.

Here I mean before, this kind of crime has a long history in Taiwan.

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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Thank you very much! you have explained a lot for me.

My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator


My Opinion Ofn Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator

Typically, you would say "my opinion of" when you are talking about someone (e.g. my opinion of him, my opinion of her) and when you are talking about a topic, you would say "my opinion on"

My Opinion Oof Telecom Fraud (2) - Originator

Remember, we rarely, if ever, capitalize "of" in a title.

According to some sources, the Telecom or Phone Fraud originator is from Taiwan.


According to some sources, the Telecom or Pfraud (also referred to as phone Ffraud) originator is fromed in Taiwan.

I hope I understood what you meant

According to some sources, the Ttelecom or Pphone Ffraud originator ies from Taiwan.

また、 According to some sources, the telecom or phone fraud comes from Taiwan.

This is a kind of intelligent crime which does not a common violent crime like robbing or stealing on the streets.


This is a kind of intelligent crime whichthat does not a commoninvolve violent crimce like robbing or stealing from people on the streets.

This is a kind of intelligentectual crime which does not a commonit physical violent crimce like robbing or stealing on the streets.

また、 This is a kind of psychological crime which does not commit physical violence like robbing or stealing on the streets. "Crime" was used twice so I edited the sentence to make it sound more natural.

They need to set up a special network, fraud app, train staff a long time, and bribe police and local government.


They fraudsters need to set up a special networks, fraud apps, trainand they also train their staff for a long time, and bribwhilst also bribing the police and local government.

They need to set up a special network, create an app for fraud app, train staff for a long time, and even bribe police and local government.

parallel construction

Taiwan is a perfect place for this kind of scam.


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It was said before 2000, most people in Taiwan have encountered phone fraud.


It was said that even before 2000, most people in Taiwan have encountered phone fraud.

Do you mean before or since?

It whas saidbeen said that before 2000, most of the people in Taiwan have encounterd experienced phone fraud.

へー!

As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China, some main scammers went to China and cooperated with some mafias there, both of them speak the same language, and the large population of China became their target.


As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China grew, some mainof the main Taiwanese scammers went to China and cooperated with some of the mafias there,. As both of them speakgroups spoke the same language, and the large population of China soon became their target.

As more contact between Taiwan and Mainland China, som was established, some of the main scammers went to China and cooperated with some mafias there, b. Both of them speaksides spoke the same language, and the so a large population of China became their target.

It's easy to buy people's private information in China, including but not limited to phone numbers, bank account numbers, addresses, ID card numbers, and delivery numbers...


It's is very easy to buy people's private information in China, including but not limited tosuch as phone numbers, bank account numbers, addresses, ID card numbers, and delivery numbers.., etc.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The scammers play games and make friends with you on the internet.


The scammers play games and attempt to make friends with youtheir potential victims on the internet.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They can be patient enough to spend up to 8 months in order to gain a target's trust.


They can be very patient enough toand will spend up to 8 months in order to gain a target's trustto gain the trust of their targets.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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