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Scarlett_Father

April 5, 2023

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My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (1) - Current Situcations

More and more telecom fraud cases broke out in recent years, I guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones. Majorities of us wouldn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is there must be some of us being cheated and transferring money to a bank account under the guidance of the scammer.

The amount of money scammed varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.
They estimated about hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the target are normally Chinese, that's not limited to Mainland of China, but all over the world. In addition, some news reported that telecom fraud is gradually in the English and Japanese populations.

In the following entries, I am going to write some of my thoughts about it.

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My Opinion Oof Telecom Fraud (1) - The Current Situcations

"of" is very rarely an important word in a title so we rarely capitalize it.

More and more telecom fraud cases have broken out in recent years,. I guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones.

MThe majoritiesy of us wouldn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is there must be some of us being cheated and transferring money to a bank account under the guidance of thea scammer.

残念。

The amount of money scammed has varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.

驚きました!

They estimated abou that hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the targets are normally Chinese, that'swho are not limited to the Mainland of China, but all over the world.

"Hundreds of thousands" already sounds like an estimate so we don't use the "about" before it.

In addition, some news has reported that telecom fraud is gradually growing in the English and Japanese populations.

In the following entries, I am going to write some of my thoughts about it.

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Scarlett_Father

April 6, 2023

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本当にありがとうございます! :-)

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My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (1) - Current Situcations

More and more telecom fraud cases broke out in recent years, Iwhich guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones.

MThe majoritiesy of us wouldidn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is that there must be some of us beingwho were cheated and transferringed money to a bank account under the guidance of the scammer.

The amount of money taken in the scammed varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.

They estimated abouthat hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the target areis normally Chinese, that's people, not limited to Mainland of China, but all over the world.

In addition, some news outlets reported that telecom fraud is gradually rising in the English and Japanese populations.

In the following entries, I am going to write some of my thoughts about it.

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Scarlett_Father

April 5, 2023

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Thank you for your corrections! :-)

My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (1) - Current Situcations


My Opinion Of Telecom Fraud (1) - Current Situcations

My Opinion Oof Telecom Fraud (1) - The Current Situcations

"of" is very rarely an important word in a title so we rarely capitalize it.

More and more telecom fraud cases broke out in recent years, I guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones.


More and more telecom fraud cases broke out in recent years, Iwhich guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones.

More and more telecom fraud cases have broken out in recent years,. I guaranteed that nearly all the people in China who use mobile phones could have received scam phones.

Majorities of us wouldn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is there must be some of us being cheated and transferring money to a bank account under the guidance of the scammer.


MThe majoritiesy of us wouldidn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is that there must be some of us beingwho were cheated and transferringed money to a bank account under the guidance of the scammer.

MThe majoritiesy of us wouldn't believe it and immediately shut it off, however, the sad thing is there must be some of us being cheated and transferring money to a bank account under the guidance of thea scammer.

残念。

The amount of money scammed varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.


The amount of money taken in the scammed varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.

The amount of money scammed has varied from 2,000 to millions in the unit of Yuan.

驚きました!

They estimated about hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the target are normally Chinese, that's not limited to Mainland of China, but all over the world.


They estimated abouthat hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the target areis normally Chinese, that's people, not limited to Mainland of China, but all over the world.

They estimated abou that hundreds of thousands of scammers are doing this job and the targets are normally Chinese, that'swho are not limited to the Mainland of China, but all over the world.

"Hundreds of thousands" already sounds like an estimate so we don't use the "about" before it.

In addition, some news reported that telecom fraud is gradually in the English and Japanese populations.


In addition, some news outlets reported that telecom fraud is gradually rising in the English and Japanese populations.

In addition, some news has reported that telecom fraud is gradually growing in the English and Japanese populations.

In the following entries, I am going to write some of my thoughts about it.


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