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I think the fashion industry doesn’t bother aboutignores problems and illnesses like anorexia or bulimia.

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It designs very small clothes and it promotes to bebeing very slim, and very skinny.

People want to be like supermodels and I think it is very dangerous because many people obsess about losing weight so they leave todon't eat and this is a big problem.

Since some yearsIn the past few years, however, there are people thatwho are working into change minds about fashion and promote to have models with different bodies on the catwalks.

Models withof all types of bodies and not only slim models now walk the catwalk.

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I think it’s good for everybody to see into the fashion industry supermodels with fat bodies andbecause this should be a normal thing.

My opinion of the fashion industry

I think the fashion industry doesn’t bothercare about problems and mental illnesses like anorexia or bulimia.

It designs very small clothes and it promotes tohat people should be very slim, very and skinny.

People want to be like supermodels and I think ithat is very dangerous because many people obsess about losing weight so they leave stop eating and this is a big problem.

SinceFor some years, there are people that arhave been people working ion change minds abouting public perception on fashion and promote to haveing models with different bodies on the catwalks.

Models with all types of bodies, not only slim models.

I think it’s good for everybody to see into the fashion industry supermodels with fat bodies andin the fashion industry, this should be a normal thing.