Dec. 2, 2024
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I don't like American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospitals that's terrible, the other reason is doctor quality if doctor can't see many case that's a bad thing for a doctor because they can't learning What causes this is the first result.
Amerikan sağlık sistemini sevmiyorum çünkü çok para ödüyorsunuz ve bu yüzden insanlar hastanelere gitmiyor bu berbat bir durum, diğer neden ise doktor kalitesi, eğer doktor çok fazla vaka göremiyorsa bu bir doktor için kötü bir şey çünkü öğrenemiyorlar Buna sebep olan şey ise ilk sonuçtur.
mMy opinion
Makes sure to capitalize! Good punctuation is important so you don't make bad habits down the line.
A period isn't need here because it is the title.
I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospitals that's terrible, the . Another reason is doctor quality, if a doctor can't see many casepatients, that's a bad thing for a doctor because they can't learning What causes this is the first resultfigure out your symptoms.
I don't understand what the first crossed out sentence means, sorry :(
The last part too, I don't exactly understand.
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Very good! I can understand most of your English. For phrases that I marked confusing, try to use a translation software for those and analyze why it's written that way; what grammar the phrase uses, etc.
mMy oOpinion
I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospitals t. That's terrible, t. The other reason is doctor quality i. If doctor can't see many casepatients that's a bad thing for a doctor because they can't learning W what causes thise problem isn the first resultplace.
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I've rephrased it as best I can from translating the original in google.
mMy opinion
I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people nodon’t going to hospitals that'which is terrible, t. The other reason is doctorthe quality of the doctors, if doctors can't see many cases, that's a bad thing for a doctors because they can't learning W what causes this is the first resultd these problems.
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Great grammatical structure, just a few verb form issues with tenses but otherwise, great job!
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my opinion
Makes sure to capitalize! Good punctuation is important so you don't make bad habits down the line. A period isn't need here because it is the title. |
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I don't like American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospitals that's terrible, the other reason is doctor quality if doctor can't see many case that's a bad thing for a doctor because they can't learning What causes this is the first result. I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot and because of that people not going to hospital I don't like the American healthcare system because you pay a lot I don't understand what the first crossed out sentence means, sorry :( The last part too, I don't exactly understand. |
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