Nov. 1, 2023
The last week I visited my old house. Usually I love to approach to my old neighborhood, because I remember my friends.
in this neighborhood I lived numerous adventures, unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work. Sometimes we have to make hard choices in our lives.
The lLast week, I visited my old house.
You could also say "This past week". Still natural-sounding, but less common.
Usually I love to approachvisit to my old neighborhood, because I remember my friends.
Not a grammar note, but I would recommend removing "usually" unless you no longer love it. I understand that you stopped visiting, but the "usually" here is tied to the verb "love", not "approach".
I replaced approach with visit because I think it's the more applicable word.
iIn this neighborhood, I lived numerouswent on plenty of adventures, but unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work.
My old neighborhood
The lLast week, I visited my old house.
Usually, I love to approach tovisit my old neighborhood, because I can remember my friends.
in this neighborhood I lived numerous adventures,I had numerous adventures in this neighborhood, but unfortunately, I had to move to a bigger city for work.
Sometimes we have to make hard choices in our lives.
My old neighborhood
The lLast week, I visited my old house.
Usually, I love to approach tovisit my old neighborhood, because I remember my friends.
in this neighborhood, I livexperienced numerous adventures, but I unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work.
If you want to just say 'unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work', you would need to put it into another sentence like this: 'Unfortunately, I had to move to a bigger city for work'. Or you can do it as I put it in my correction, using the conjunction 'but'.
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The last week I visited my old house.
You could also say "This past week". Still natural-sounding, but less common. |
Usually I love to approach to my old neighborhood, because I remember my friends. Usually, I love to Usually, I love to Usually I love to Not a grammar note, but I would recommend removing "usually" unless you no longer love it. I understand that you stopped visiting, but the "usually" here is tied to the verb "love", not "approach". I replaced approach with visit because I think it's the more applicable word. |
in this neighborhood I lived numerous adventures, unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work. in this neighborhood, I If you want to just say 'unfortunately I had to move to a bigger city for work', you would need to put it into another sentence like this: 'Unfortunately, I had to move to a bigger city for work'. Or you can do it as I put it in my correction, using the conjunction 'but'.
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