July 24, 2021
My Old favorite music
I am currently listening to my old music which was my favorite ones at University.
When listening to the music, I reminisce about my past.
A music was for my first moving to Seoul.
Other music was a one when I had a military service.
I arranged the music lists when I was a bad time.
When I listen to the music, I can remember my old days.
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I am currently listening to my old music which was my favorite ones at Ufavorite music from when I was at university.
"my old music" implies you wrote the music. "Old" can be removed because its age is implied when you refer to the past.
"University" isn't capitalized unless it's a proper name or title.
When listening to the music, I reminisce about my past.
A musicOne song was for my first movinge to Seoul.
This is also okay: "One song was when I first moved to Seoul."
"Song" is what you're listening to. "Music" is the genre, like "rock", "classical", or "pop".
OAnother music was a onesong was when I had a military service.
I arranged thmade music lists when I washad a bad time.day.
I understood the first sentence, but this version is more specific and natural. I'm assuming you made the music lists?
When I listen to the music, I can remember mythe old days.
In English, we tend to say "the old days" instead of "my old days". There's not really a reason, it's just more common.
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Very good work! I also think music is lovely and love listening to 1990s-2000s Hits when I want to feel energized.
July 25, 2021
Thank you for your corrections.
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My Old favorite music My Old Capitalize :) |
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I am currently listening to my old music which was my favorite ones at University. I am currently listening to my "my old music" implies you wrote the music. "Old" can be removed because its age is implied when you refer to the past. "University" isn't capitalized unless it's a proper name or title. |
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When listening to the music, I reminisce about my past. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A music was for my first moving to Seoul.
This is also okay: "One song was when I first moved to Seoul." "Song" is what you're listening to. "Music" is the genre, like "rock", "classical", or "pop". |
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Other music was a one when I had a military service.
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I arranged the music lists when I was a bad time. I I understood the first sentence, but this version is more specific and natural. I'm assuming you made the music lists? |
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When I listen to the music, I can remember my old days. When I listen to the music, I can remember In English, we tend to say "the old days" instead of "my old days". There's not really a reason, it's just more common. |
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