Oct. 14, 2025
My father is near complet seventy years old. He has a nice old age because pratice exercises and eat very nice. He not stop be a good exemple for me. I love him.
My OElderly Father
"Old" is often used as a term of endearment, instead of speaking about age. Here, I would use "elderly" since it is always about age, and it is also respectful whereas "old" can be taken negatively
My father is near completly seventy years old.
"Complete" would add nothing here
He has reached a nice old age because pratiche exercises regularly and eats very nicewell.
We often use "reach" instead of "have" when speaking about the age of a person
He has not stopped to be a good exeample for me.
I love him.
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My father is near complealmost seventy years old.
He has a nicelives a good old age because praticehe always exercises and eat very nices well.
He notever stops being a good exeample for me.
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My Old Father My "Old" is often used as a term of endearment, instead of speaking about age. Here, I would use "elderly" since it is always about age, and it is also respectful whereas "old" can be taken negatively |
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My father is near complet seventy years old. My father is My father is near "Complete" would add nothing here |
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He has a nice old age because pratice exercises and eat very nice. He He has reached a nice old age because We often use "reach" instead of "have" when speaking about the age of a person |
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He not stop be a good exemple for me. He n He has not stopped to be a good ex |
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I love him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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